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3/28/22, 6:20 PM
This was a surprisingly sweet story! My favourite part was the backstory about Danny and Will's relationship and the way that Will protected him. It was so lovely to see. It made Danny helping him out with getting off feel less opportunistic. I was a little bit confused about how Danny knew some of the information that he knew, though.

3/29/22, 8:24 PM
@time.to.occur - you make me wonder what info you're talking about. As the author, I know the whole story, so may miss explaining something :thinking:

3/29/22, 9:21 PM
@Math_Reez 💙Well, we follow Danny's perspective pretty closely through the story (third-person limited). But the way it comes across to me, Danny seems to have known exactly what has happened to Will with his co-worker at work, and I was confused about how he knew that. But to be clear, it didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story!

3/31/22, 4:28 PM
@time.to.occur - okay, maybe it was a miss on my side when explaining stuff in english version. But after Dany makes Will watch the video he realizes his brother is hypnotized (at that point just a guess) then after questioning his brother, he told him what happened with him and Mike. Dany know about Mike and he knew the rumors about he being jealous of Will, but only learn about what happened between his brother and him after he interrogate Will in the trance state. Sorry if that wasn't clear :sweat_smile:
3/31/22, 4:15 PM
Himbo is my far the most adorable character on this website.

3/31/22, 4:24 PM
@Twan Andersen It is immense fun to write :innocent:
Jack
3/31/22, 5:35 AM
GAH! I didn't expect this at all! I jumped on the site just to see if there was anything new to spark my interest and there's CHAPTER 2 OF ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME?!? And it's so fucking good! There's plot, character development, tendrils of a dozen different elements to explore, and just superior writing. I know there wasn't a whole lot of sex stuff in this chapter, but it was clearly such a great addition to the story itself. I can't wait to see how you explore this, and how things develop between Finn, Rada, and Jack. I know I've always wanted Finn and Jack to end up together, but Rada deserves to be happy, as well! It's hard to tell for certain, but life in his dimension doesn't seem all that fun to me. Regardless, the paths you've laid out in this chapter are enticing, and I can't wait for more. Thank you for taking the time to write more of this story, Author. This has really been such a treat!

3/31/22, 6:14 AM
@Jack You were so strongly on Team Finn I was worried that you would not like this chapter since it's Rada focused
3/30/22, 5:35 PM
Great writing. Love the way you have avoided many of the tropes of so many Djin stories. Love the subtle almost subversive relationship dynamics. Overall, this is terrific.

3/31/22, 6:13 AM
@Speedychopslover Thank you. Avoiding the typical genie tropes was actually the driving force of why I started writing this.
3/30/22, 12:26 PM
LOVED the Genie explanation! magic as equals technology is such a fun premise and it's so engagingly depicted for us here. Jack is so cute and sweet i REALLY want him to use at least ONE MORE WISH, and REALLY DO NOT WANT him to use any other wishes. Rada is an amazing Genie, the most uniquely done I've seen. Bravo! a superb installment and continuation to a superb story.

3/31/22, 6:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth so what do you want him to do with his second wish?
3/30/22, 2:34 PM
Finally read this—it’s so hot! I love how Finn dominates Jack, and the genie wish is so clever; the world is compelling and immersive. I feel like I’m in it. Your writing is always so fun.

3/31/22, 4:35 AM
@Soren Fitz Oh thank you! I think fun is a good way to describe this one!
Anonymous
3/30/22, 11:25 AM
Very glad you're revisiting this! It always felt like there were Consequences to be explored.
3/30/22, 7:09 AM
Glad that you continued the story. This chapter is as great as the others.
3/30/22, 2:51 AM
It always amazes me how you manage to craft stories that are both unbelievably hot and full of sweetness. I personally enjoy stories where things like mind control aren't used to change a person into something different, but instead to help them vocalize, accept, and act upon their true desires, so this was 100% up my alley. Thank you for sharing this, and excited to see what you write next!
3/30/22, 1:34 AM
I'm SO excited this story is back, I've been obsessed with this story since chapter one and Balderich finally coming into the picture makes me so excited.