Recent Comments

4/1/22, 9:51 AM
Hooray! I’ve been waiting for a new chapter of this, and it did not disappoint. :D Everything about this story is achingly hot. I particularly love the descriptions of Luke and Sammy being close enough to kiss, and wondering about each other…I hope Sammy confesses his true feelings soon. And finally, I want to commend you on making Luke a perfect himbo! He has that perfect mix of cluelessness and sweetness that makes him great to read (at times I wonder how he can possibly miss what’s happening with Sammy, but you do a great job making his obliviousness justified by the text). Fantastic!

SC Walker
4/1/22, 2:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! One of my goals with this story is to make Luke’s dumbness plausible - sometimes I feel like dumb jock stories are too far fetched. When I figured out that he was on the spectrum everything just clicked. I’m also glad you like Sammy and Luke’s burgeoning feelings - I was nervous about including the romance elements but people luckily seem to like it.

4/2/22, 9:25 AM
@SC Walker Hmmm…this is interesting. By “spectrum” I am guessing you mean the autism spectrum? I must admit that raises some questions for me. On the one hand, Sammy and the other guys’ actions feel a LOT creepier if Luke is literally unable to process what’s going on around him: being clueless is one thing, but someone whose brain *can’t* analyze information and cues is another. Obviously this site is infamous for questionable consent, but a story where characters have diagnosable mental health conditions…well, it pushes it into a much more complicated area. At the same time, though, being on the autism spectrum doesn’t inherently mean that someone doesn’t experience sexual attraction; to write such characters as asexual or “too childish” to have a sex drive can be infantilizing. There’s a good deal to think about here…

SC Walker
4/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Feed Your Head I understand your concern but I am particularly suited to writing a story about a character on the spectrum. Yes, the teammates are borderline sexually harassing him, but the important thing to understand is that Luke ALWAYS consents to sex. I make sure to stress that part. Luke is oblivious to his own feelings; he doesn’t realize (yet) that he WANTS to get felt up and fucked. I appreciate your concern, though, and I sm going to keep it in mind when writing future chapters.

Anonymous
4/2/22, 10:00 PM
@SC Walker i wanted to throw in my two cents as an autistic person and say that although it's definitely a tricky thing to write, luke as a character is absolutely clicking for me. i was actually kind of delighted to scroll down here and see that he was on the spectrum. the relationship between him and sam is also absolutely wonderful, and i'm really excited to see how it progresses!

SC Walker
4/2/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you, that means a lot to me! I'm glad Luke is resonating.

4/3/22, 12:10 PM
@SC Walker Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to me, and for being so frank about your writing background and experience. I hope I am not coming across as too prudish or pedantic. It is rare for a work to give people the opportunity to think about consent and discuss it, and your story is doing just that. I’m particularly intrigued by the idea of wanting something without realizing you want it…Thank you for the opportunity to share my thoughts. :)
4/2/22, 3:56 PM
Where is chapter 10 I need it so bad 😭
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:13 PM
Don't particularly care about the preachy crypto bullshit but I'm glad this story is being continued

4/2/22, 5:05 AM
Oh, well, thanks for letting me know you felt the crypto explanation came across as preachy! I just thought I needed to explain how the CPU power necessary (and therefore, energy consumption) had increased so drastically that while Jack was able to mine bitcoin years ago, now he'd need to lease a server farm. The Djinn were commenting on it overly harshly because they know of something better that works for them up in their higher dimension. The Djinn do not necessarily get everything right.
Jack
4/2/22, 4:58 AM
Hot damn! I am so excited that another story has been posted for this excellent series. I definitely have to support what @Feed Your Head said: Sam and Luke need to end up together, with the occasional visit from a particularly well-hung shy boy. Seriously, this was fucking hot, Author. **Absolutely** with the wait!
Jack
3/31/22, 5:45 AM
Hey, Soren! While I do absolutely love your work (Unintended Consequences of Time Travel and The Prince And The Frat Boys, especially), this is not a comment to ask you to write more. I just wanted to let you know that you're an incredible author, you make amazing content, and I am more than happy to wait! I know life can get crazy, and it's not always possible to write when and how we like, but my love of your talent isn't dependent on you getting it published within a certain time frame. I have a friend on this site who constantly tells me about how worried he is that no one will be interested in his stuff unless he publishes every week or every other week, and I just thought you deserved to know that at least one person out here is a loyal fan of yours. Take whatever time you need to take care of yourself, and whenever a new story or a new chapter comes out, you bet your ass I'll be pumping that view count up.

4/1/22, 7:03 AM
This is seriously such a good thing to hear. One of the hardest things about this drought of posting stories has been the lack of comment notifications. I’ve written so much that I’m excited to share, yet I’m so far from posting any of it. So I have to ride (sort of) off the high of comments like these. It’s great to know that I’m known for my talent at authorship and for being someone worth being loyal to. I don’t intend to let my fans down any time soon. Keep a lookout for more (and see if you can find my story in the contest entries! =P ) @Jack

Jack
4/2/22, 3:41 AM
@Soren Fitz I can totally understand feeling worried that people don't actually like your stuff. Feel free to reach out anytime (my email is on my profile) and I'll happily fanboy to my heart's content to let you know how much I enjoy your work!
2/11/22, 7:07 PM
I wonder if Sammy had something to do with the butt transformation.

4/1/22, 8:00 PM
@Cutlerfan Yeah I was a little suspicious about that myself. After all he's the one who supplied all those shorty shorts. But he didn't seem to understand the protagonist was leaking self lubrication so probably not directly.
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:35 PM
Glad more of the story is coming out. These oblivious stories can so fun
6/30/21, 9:29 PM
❤❤❤ Commenting from my Phone, it's not great but I really enjoy all scenes where a new identity is created, so that might be one of my favorite chapters you ever wrote! Good luck writing the sequel series!

4/1/22, 6:28 PM
@BobbyBlobfish - I didn't notice this comment before :3 thanks for all your help as a proof reader/editor/writing corrector :3 I improve a lot thanks to you ^ ^
Anonymous
4/1/22, 6:13 PM
Very good story as usual ^^