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4/4/22, 4:29 PM
Incredibly hot!
4/4/22, 10:34 AM
I loved this!! Thank you for writing it!
4/4/22, 8:00 AM
_Furiously takes notes on how Naga stories should be written._ This is such a fun series, I'd love to see more overt naga-eye hypnosis, but I love the audio style of the hissing too.
Sexcrab
4/4/22, 6:01 AM
This is the kind of story that is always good to follow: Simple, sexy and intuitive. You don't even need to reread the old chapters to get the new one, but you do it anyway because the narrative and characters are so good to follow. I hope it doesn't take months like now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
4/4/22, 2:21 AM
I like where this story is going. Thank you for writing it.
4/3/22, 5:25 AM
What a trip. 5’s across the board.

4/4/22, 12:01 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much for taking the time to rate and comment! It's hugely encouraging. Hope to share more soon!
4/2/22, 5:23 PM
Interesting. loved it. can't wait for more.

4/4/22, 12:00 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much for the encouragement! Can't wait to share more with you!
Anonymous
3/31/22, 1:31 PM
A story about dad and son's relationship is hot, especially when dad is regressed into his son's young boyfriend. I like to read these kinds of story too much!!! So, I look forward to your next story.

4/3/22, 4:51 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback. I have a few stories here.
4/1/22, 9:51 AM
Hooray! I’ve been waiting for a new chapter of this, and it did not disappoint. :D Everything about this story is achingly hot. I particularly love the descriptions of Luke and Sammy being close enough to kiss, and wondering about each other…I hope Sammy confesses his true feelings soon. And finally, I want to commend you on making Luke a perfect himbo! He has that perfect mix of cluelessness and sweetness that makes him great to read (at times I wonder how he can possibly miss what’s happening with Sammy, but you do a great job making his obliviousness justified by the text). Fantastic!

SC Walker
4/1/22, 2:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! One of my goals with this story is to make Luke’s dumbness plausible - sometimes I feel like dumb jock stories are too far fetched. When I figured out that he was on the spectrum everything just clicked. I’m also glad you like Sammy and Luke’s burgeoning feelings - I was nervous about including the romance elements but people luckily seem to like it.

4/2/22, 9:25 AM
@SC Walker Hmmm…this is interesting. By “spectrum” I am guessing you mean the autism spectrum? I must admit that raises some questions for me. On the one hand, Sammy and the other guys’ actions feel a LOT creepier if Luke is literally unable to process what’s going on around him: being clueless is one thing, but someone whose brain *can’t* analyze information and cues is another. Obviously this site is infamous for questionable consent, but a story where characters have diagnosable mental health conditions…well, it pushes it into a much more complicated area. At the same time, though, being on the autism spectrum doesn’t inherently mean that someone doesn’t experience sexual attraction; to write such characters as asexual or “too childish” to have a sex drive can be infantilizing. There’s a good deal to think about here…

SC Walker
4/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Feed Your Head I understand your concern but I am particularly suited to writing a story about a character on the spectrum. Yes, the teammates are borderline sexually harassing him, but the important thing to understand is that Luke ALWAYS consents to sex. I make sure to stress that part. Luke is oblivious to his own feelings; he doesn’t realize (yet) that he WANTS to get felt up and fucked. I appreciate your concern, though, and I sm going to keep it in mind when writing future chapters.

Anonymous
4/2/22, 10:00 PM
@SC Walker i wanted to throw in my two cents as an autistic person and say that although it's definitely a tricky thing to write, luke as a character is absolutely clicking for me. i was actually kind of delighted to scroll down here and see that he was on the spectrum. the relationship between him and sam is also absolutely wonderful, and i'm really excited to see how it progresses!

SC Walker
4/2/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you, that means a lot to me! I'm glad Luke is resonating.

4/3/22, 12:10 PM
@SC Walker Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to me, and for being so frank about your writing background and experience. I hope I am not coming across as too prudish or pedantic. It is rare for a work to give people the opportunity to think about consent and discuss it, and your story is doing just that. I’m particularly intrigued by the idea of wanting something without realizing you want it…Thank you for the opportunity to share my thoughts. :)
4/2/22, 3:56 PM
Where is chapter 10 I need it so bad 😭