Recent Comments

4/6/22, 9:34 PM
This is … simply delightful! So well-written, extremely sexy without coming across as just straight-up porn, and a very interesting exploration of concepts. As to the question above about the second wish.. Jack is pretty self-effacing and enjoys being submissive/agreeable/accepting... what if he were to work out a deal with Rada to wish to make of himself a better/superconductor partner/client/host in exchange for the genie's goodwill and sticking around longer? Or perhaps wingmanning/Cyrano-ing him with Finn, not realizing he's already got his hooks in him? Risk and slippery slope for Rada, in what seems an innocent and harmless diversion.

4/7/22, 12:40 AM
@wmmoller Well thank you! This is a particularly fun and nice comment to get. By the way when I was asking about the second wish I just was curious what the other commenter had in mind since she didn't specify. I actually do know what I'm doing with that if Jack should _happen_ to ever make another wish...
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4/7/22, 12:26 AM
Soooo good. Some grammatical errors but it was easy to take in. I loved the idea about different colors of the hypnotic rings inducing different emotions/sensations. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!
4/6/22, 3:10 AM
What a sweet, hot story! I loved this.

4/6/22, 10:02 PM
@Noam de Pluma I trade in sweet and hot! I'm glad you enjoyed.
4/6/22, 2:05 PM
Loved this concept man. So hot.
4/6/22, 1:55 PM
Super hot! Love the body hair appreciation. Can’t wait to see what happens to Tony!
4/5/22, 12:20 AM
Cant wait for the next installment. Please give some emphasis on the facial hair development. Very hot so far!!!
4/4/22, 10:10 PM
That was one hot read thanks!
4/4/22, 9:00 PM
I have to say, I really enjoyed this story - each chapter has been really great. I look forward to seeing where Sammy and Luke end up, and yeah, the feelings are working for me lol. I especially appreciate Luke's narration - he's missing cues but still such a sweet, warm character. I hope he clues in soon enough about Sammy's feelings.
4/4/22, 7:51 PM
Truly enjoyed this story. Would love to see what happens to Tony and if he just happens to, by a quirk of fate, hook back up with Jim.

4/4/22, 7:55 PM
@Uncle Arctos next part, Tony's Struggle is being reviewed right now... :)

4/4/22, 8:12 PM
@MostlySalt that is completely awesome I eagerly await the next part. Thank you so very much!
4/4/22, 4:29 PM
Incredibly hot!