Recent Comments

4/10/22, 12:49 PM
Great job overall. Excellent transition to the new character and introduction of the biker club characters. This is shaping up to be a sexy saga,
Evan
4/9/22, 6:56 AM
Jasper is really taking to his pet training. I loved the emersion of his submissive side even if it caught Rhys's attention. That said, being so desperate to cum can have that effect so that's a nice little head-canon for Rhys to not be too suspicious. I absolutely LOVE the Golden condition. What an awesome way to introduce some vulnerability to some of the Coins and turn a bit of that submissive desperate need to cum, and loss of control back on its head for them. Just as a way to not be in control of yourself and fall into base instinct of needing to fuck and cum is very hot to me. Even more so when contrasted against their rigid control and protocol normally. The further to fall, I suppose. You are both amazing authors and more impressive is collaboratively writing this. Writing with someone else is even trickier. The voices are distinctive for characters but in no way reveal who is writing whom. I have my theories on the Golden Lattice Ceremony being some sort of debutant-esque event to celebrate and present a new pet, ending in everyone in attendence using or teasing or pleasing the guest of honour in an orgy or something like that. Excited to see how Jasper takes that if I'm right. His programming by Aris is really jumping ahead after using his rig. I fear if he learns of it he may question Jasper's true heart (that I think exists) and whether his affection is just the suggestions and not based on his original feelings. Damn you both tugging at my heart strings.

Cuddle-switch
4/10/22, 3:04 AM
@Evan I’m so glad to hear you are enjoying our story. You are picking up on pretty much all of the important points that we were putting down. For example, yes, the Aureum vesanium is one of the ways we hope to show a type of weakness in the Coins. Perhaps the magnification of desirable qualities can have unintended consequences?? As a new writer, it gives me all the feels to know that you are liking this enough to be reading this thoroughly, and are paying attention to both subtext and the subtle cues from the characters. I’ll be very curious to know what you think of the Golden Lattice Ceremony. Please feel free to comment to your heart’s content. Also, we will continue to pull on those heartstrings as long as you consent to us doing so.

4/10/22, 3:08 AM
@Evan I also really appreciate you taking the time to give us such thorough comments! It's really such a joy as a writer to get the chance to hear from readers (especially friends!) about what they think about the work! :3 I think our preferences align pretty closely with yours on a lot of the decisions we've made that are meant to be sensual or play on kinks. At the end of the day, it's been a bad beginning for Rhys and Jasper. We'll have to see how things turn out for them over time! Thanks again for encouraging us to write!
4/10/22, 12:50 AM
Holy fuck! That was a great chapter! I love your lore building. Thank you.
Azuri
4/8/22, 6:04 PM
Great story again ❤️ Wish it was me! Hehe
Justme
4/8/22, 4:31 PM
Super amazing story can not wait for the next segment. I love the pace please don't speed it up.

4/8/22, 4:33 PM
@Justme Thank you. I am working on the third part but it's coming along slowly.
4/8/22, 3:49 AM
What a *lovely* story. The romance shone through beautifully, and I love how you managed to make the sex a real expression of their love as much as it was their lust. Plus, as far as the lust goes, I absolutely go nuts for visceral descriptions of what it feels like to be split by an impossibly huge cock, and you nailed it. The visual of Tobias’ stomach bulging around it will stay with me for some time to cum. Nicely, nicely done!

4/8/22, 5:39 AM
I’ve rarely gotten to write stomach-bulging-by-cock in my stories on this site so far, so I relished in it. I’m glad I communicated how visceral it is, even from the top’s perspective! And I’m glad you felt the intimacy between them. I think that’s vital. @Noam de Pluma
4/8/22, 3:44 AM
The first chapter was a sexy story - the second is a sexy... werewolf story! (sort of)
4/8/22, 3:33 AM
This is a damn sexy story.
4/8/22, 1:29 AM
Great series. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
4/6/22, 3:52 PM
The concept is fun and original, and the twist that these men can never find companionship within their fraternity adds a poignancy that deepens the story beyond what could have been an enjoyable but straightforward fantasy about scent play, mind control, and masculinization. I like that you didn't give Tony an easy answer to his problems.

4/7/22, 5:31 PM
@ParadoxBear Thank you for the very thoughtful comment. Life has no easy answers. Struggle is the only thing we all share.