Recent Comments

5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
5/7/22, 7:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So happy that you have plans for continuing this story. Definitely enjoyed the exploration of how djinns and their powers work in this universe. I would certainly enjoy a spin-off chapter that explores what other djinns have done if you ever wanted to take a break from the main story-line. Can't wait to see more!
5/6/22, 4:43 AM
Yay! The boys found their place and Jack found how to have fun with toys. And having said that, how fantastic is it that the story evokes such tenderness and brings forth such emotion? In the end they found love in their sharing of themselves in the way that works for them and reality shifts to allow it. Brilliant.

5/7/22, 7:33 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for your continued support! Jack of Hearts of loads of fun to write for sure!
5/6/22, 5:44 AM
wow
5/6/22, 4:27 AM
Loved it! Scheduled orgies, how dreary! Loved how entangled Jack and Daniel have become that even with changes they come back together. And as Jack is the Sheriff with a harem, Jack is the Fire Chief of a gay poly commune. As always, hot and sweet at the same time. A boner and the fuzzies all in one package (?).
5/6/22, 1:05 AM
Erotically creative and fun. One can't help picture it all vividly with every actor.
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes Pokémon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin: