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5/11/22, 7:56 AM
A hidden gem like this is exactly what Book Club was made for.

5/11/22, 1:56 PM
@Norismo Thank you! That means a lot to me! This is a story that wrote itself into a very different direction than I expected!
5/10/22, 8:20 AM
Your characterisation is on point. I hate the mother quite completely, and she only had a few lines! I will definitely be checking out the rest of this series.

5/10/22, 12:32 PM
@Norismo thank you for reading! The mother is just... we'll see very soon. Thinks should begin getting interesting and fun soon, and I'm glad you're in for the ride.
5/10/22, 3:41 AM
Great job! Looking forward to this story, and glad you decided to start writing.

5/10/22, 12:27 PM
@GruffGinger a great compliment coming from you! You know I'm a fan. The full story is pretty much cooked up, not I just need to write it down. Thanks for reading, and welcome for the ride.
5/9/22, 5:06 PM
Oooh this is already quite the strong start! I can't wait to read what happens next.

5/9/22, 5:09 PM
@Twan Andersen surprised to find your comment! Thank you for reading, let's see what happens.
5/9/22, 12:37 PM
Another great chapter!

5/9/22, 12:56 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast thamk you so much, Brother. Hail Pharaoh

5/9/22, 1:12 PM
@Slave Darius Hail Pharaoh! May many blades strike down the hidden enemy. Once they reveal themselves so shall we.

5/9/22, 1:30 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast and may the ones who are stricken down whilst in their bondage receive the gift of life from our Father and rise again to serve Him.
Evan
5/9/22, 7:37 AM
Quite a start. It is aching to know these three men had found someone to confide themselves in and find a comfort in life at a very alienating time. And yet, it seems it did not go well. The story and behaviours read very believably like the era. I am brought to mind of some period pieces I've seen and I so easily see the well-to-do splashing money about to keep separated and proper. And the way they address one another. Stiffly formal and last names as what they call one another. I enjoyed the call-out that the intent from Lock was not formality and propriety but a barrier. The emotion is so raw in all of it. From the unveiling of his own desires and denials to the clear heartbreak of loss. It is a difficult read and yet so wonderfully written. Not to mention, a cruel mystery of what happened teasing one to push through that woe in morbid curiosity.

5/9/22, 1:05 PM
@Evan Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story! It's one I love a lot even though it's a bit of a misfit. I worked hard to research the language of the era. I wanted to get at that confusion and sincere desire and denial of self. I hope I'm not being too cruel in spurring you forward and that you'll enjoy the rewards along the way 💖
5/9/22, 8:54 AM
Hey there, I know this was suppose to be a sexy story but I just ended up feeling so sad for Sam and was so sad that Sam couldn't have such a great man like Mark in his life to father him through his 20s and early 30s. You have done an amazing job writing your characters. I really connected with both of them. I guess that's why I felt more sad than horny hahaha

5/9/22, 12:29 PM
@James Heller thanks for your kind words! Sam just got started on his journey, and I can promise he will find what he needs along the way. I hope to take you along for the ride.

5/9/22, 12:31 PM
@Essex I'm excited to join you for the ride. Thank you for writing your stories, we appreciate it!
5/8/22, 7:29 AM
I love the way you write, I can see it all like I was watching Stanley Kubrick's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Congratulations, this is one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read and I can't wait to see more.

5/8/22, 6:37 PM
@Papa Werebear Thanks man! I really appreciate your feedback!
5/8/22, 3:17 PM
A part of me REALLY wanted Sam AND his two muscle tower friends to get fucked stupid by Mr.Taylor lol
5/8/22, 12:13 AM
Ah, that part did get lost, hiw jack get locked out of the b and b if later chapters say he lived with his mom Then again least of intentionally fuzzy details Small town gay circle of firemen...who fear pda? South is weird. News at 7