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6/17/22, 6:18 AM
Perhaps this was way too intense for me, I feel a little traumatized, but I suppose it means you narrated it exceptionally well, I read horror novels for fun but this scared me to a fundamental level, not sure why. I must congratulate you because it probably means this story is super good for the people who get off this. (Not trying to be disrespectful, but I felt I had to comment this)

6/17/22, 8:10 AM
@Kristalmaster Thank you for your feedback. I wanted to show Marcus's dark side, but i admit he takes it too far. I've gone through sh*t so i tend to lean dark. Next few chapters lightens up a bit i swear XD
6/17/22, 5:49 AM
I have to admit I was terrified reading this
6/16/22, 6:54 PM
I am loving this story so far! Excellent concept, great characters and a really fun read. My one deal breaker will be that I NEED Marc and Sam to end up together. I'm ok waiting til close to the end, but I'm so in love with the sweet Marc now that I really need to see him end up happy!

6/16/22, 9:54 PM
@MicroModal Thanks! I have a lot of Marc planned for the next chapter.
Anonymous
6/16/22, 9:32 PM
0_0 thats intense, fun premise tho, keep it up!
6/16/22, 2:48 PM
Will he keep Stanley for himself?

6/16/22, 4:47 PM
@Jonanator Thats chapter 3 XD
D1p
6/16/22, 11:17 AM
Can't wait to read more! A very good set-up
6/15/22, 10:43 PM
SUPER excited to read more of this! 🤩
Anonymous
6/15/22, 10:20 PM
i hope this continues

6/15/22, 10:40 PM
@i have 9 chapters written i just need to clean them up a bit first
Anonymous
6/15/22, 10:08 PM
Fun set up, looking forward to the pay off

6/15/22, 10:40 PM
@i know its a slow build but i swear im going somewhere with this XD
6/15/22, 6:13 PM
Love the lore in this story and the way you deliver it! It points to a waaay larger universe. Also, I love Wyatt so much and I really hope to see more of him in the future. This is such a cool idea for a story and I'm really glad it got written!

6/15/22, 6:16 PM
@time.to.occur This story would have stayed rent-free in my head if you didn’t give me the reason I needed to kick it to the ~~curb~~ screen. Now to work on chapter 2 :grimacing: …