Recent Comments

5/12/22, 4:21 PM
Loved this and looking forward to reading the rest. Janus is so sweet!
5/12/22, 4:12 AM
I like this series tremendously! Thanks for writing it! A few little grammar comments: Your prepositions (on, in, etc.) are confusing. Secondly, I know you are doing this in 3rd person, but sometimes its unclear as to whose perspective we are in with reading further in the paragraph.

5/12/22, 3:01 PM
@tankonpoint Thanks for your comment! Oh yeah, prepositions are a bane of me since English is not my native language and the "on/in/at" is usually confusing to me, sorry about that. I will check how to make the perspective clearer in the future. Thanks!
5/12/22, 8:06 AM
This story gives off the best, sweetest, sexiest, and most importantly, exciting vibes. I love this little universe you built and you keep building with suspense and exciting reveals. Can't wait for more!
5/11/22, 8:54 PM
Time, this is absolutely unreasonably _pretty_, and I found myself drawn inexorably through the story by the writing. I’ve half a mind to continue reading—though I’m busy, so I don’t know—there’s so much here I look forward to unpacking. You did marvellously.

5/12/22, 3:08 AM
@Soren Fitz Ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt drawn in -- I hope you do decide to continue, when time allows. There are some parts with hypnosis you may want to skip (that's fine so long as you have the context around them), but I think there's a lot more that you would probably enjoy between Sawyer and Lock.
Azuri Foxcoon
5/11/22, 8:27 PM
I loved all of if. The reenacting of the encounter…the love…the drama, all so very wonderful. It’s very good. I always love reading your stories! Keep it up ❤️
5/11/22, 8:01 PM
I loved the main introduction of the villain, and the role play too. So sad this series is drawing to a close.
5/11/22, 7:56 AM
A hidden gem like this is exactly what Book Club was made for.

5/11/22, 1:56 PM
@Norismo Thank you! That means a lot to me! This is a story that wrote itself into a very different direction than I expected!
5/10/22, 8:20 AM
Your characterisation is on point. I hate the mother quite completely, and she only had a few lines! I will definitely be checking out the rest of this series.

5/10/22, 12:32 PM
@Norismo thank you for reading! The mother is just... we'll see very soon. Thinks should begin getting interesting and fun soon, and I'm glad you're in for the ride.
5/10/22, 3:41 AM
Great job! Looking forward to this story, and glad you decided to start writing.

5/10/22, 12:27 PM
@GruffGinger a great compliment coming from you! You know I'm a fan. The full story is pretty much cooked up, not I just need to write it down. Thanks for reading, and welcome for the ride.
5/9/22, 5:06 PM
Oooh this is already quite the strong start! I can't wait to read what happens next.

5/9/22, 5:09 PM
@Twan Andersen surprised to find your comment! Thank you for reading, let's see what happens.