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Anonymous
5/17/22, 2:45 AM
This was hot! I really like the direction you’re going with this… I’m also really looking forward to the coach being introduced ;) Maybe Luke turns to him for advice in the next chapter?

SC Walker
5/17/22, 6:08 PM
Coach is coming up soon! Not in the next chapter but after that. ;)
5/17/22, 4:38 PM
I love the way this is going, hope to see another ipdate soon!
R P
5/17/22, 10:05 AM
This is such a sweet and hot story :) I hope things work out for Luke & Sammy in the end.
Arlo
5/17/22, 6:56 AM
This literally has every favorite aspect of mine, from the hypnosis to the kinks to the self-willing romance to the adorable, yet hot and sexy relation between them, I love this series so much, hope it continues on for a while
5/16/22, 3:54 PM
Love the idea of going up behind someone and just fingering and fucking them - I mean I would probably add some rimming first, hehe. But yeah this casual sex world - especially with its fucked silly component - is super hot. Love how he is a power top, his ass is not the point its his cock and the ass of others. I am curious about something, you mention him 'pushing through the second hole' and such, what is he fucking towards? Also, so maybe its just me, but I didn't realize that the gods give the power and its not like genetic, not sure what I think about that. But yeah, lots of fun, lots of potential, lots of fun, fantastic sex to be had!

5/16/22, 6:04 PM
There's no "towards" per se—it's just a tighter section of a guy's ass, with more sweet spots inside! The sweet spots are also fantastical, of course, but I thought it was a fun addition to the world. With respect to the gods, note that this is just what _Talley_ thinks is supposed to happen. What's actually going to happen is... well, i'd say "another story," but it's this story, as it's continued in _Top Maker_! I'm glad you loved it so much. I will say, though, that the other three chapters of this story involve Talley going from top to switch. The tops involved are hot, but they're not the POV. So it's up to you whether to get it or not. @Heru Kane
5/16/22, 3:26 PM
I might be biased given that I helped you edit this thing, but: I love it! Really excellent work sketching out Talley’s character, his motivations, and (of course) delivering a scorching-hot sex scene. To say nothing of the world-building, which is *chef’s kiss*. Very nicely done!

5/16/22, 4:49 PM
I absolutely loved worldbuilding for this story. There’s basically something new in every single chapter! The amount of ruminating this went through before it started going to you was, hoo, a lot. But thank you, too, for your phenomenal editing. @Noam de Pluma
Anonymous
5/16/22, 7:16 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
5/15/22, 8:55 PM
I hope we get to see more of your story Kods! I've been checking these past two months for an update and I seriously can't wait to see what you have in store for your story!
5/14/22, 6:38 AM
A wonderfully written fairy tale for the slutty, with heart. I love it! Can’t wait for more !

5/14/22, 12:57 PM
@Yunnick I'm glad it came through as exactly that, and there's so much more to come. Thank you for your feedback, we'll find out more soon.
R P
5/14/22, 4:27 AM
What a hot chapter! Love Sam getting rough with Wolf while he admit to himself what he really wants. Can’t wait to see more of both of them :)

5/14/22, 12:55 PM
@R P Thanks for the kind words! Sam is now on his way, if a bit confused. What does the future hold? Wolf has ran away, but Sam left his mark for sure, who knows when their paths will cross. Thanks for joining us for the ride!