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5/17/22, 9:34 PM
Hey @S. Q. Neemie. Is there any news on when we can expect a new chapter og hints of what is coming?
Evan
5/17/22, 11:48 AM
This is such a sad chapter. I feel really bad for Sammy. The way you write makes the characters' feelings really hit home. I hope they can mend soon and our dear protagonist realises a few things despite how oblivious he clearly is.

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:07 PM
@Evan I'm really glad you're enjoying the ~feelings~ haha I wasn't sure how this chapter would be received since it's so light on porn.
5/17/22, 10:43 AM
I’ve been waiting for this…what a wonderful and heartbreaking chapter. You’re doing an amazing job representing how someone on the spectrum has a hard time picking up social cues. And the contrast between the beautifully romantic nature of the date and the harsh fight on the couch was brilliant, too. It’s also great that, rather than making Luke have a determined sexuality, he genuinely doesn’t know if he’s attracted to men; he comes across as more assuming he’s straight because he never thought otherwise, which is original (and I think more common than we think). Finally, as ever, I love how kissing is the ultimate sign of homosexuality among our people…not rough anal sex. Kissing. :p I’ve been there before (hookup with a “99% straight” guy who told me “nothing above the neck”). I hope that everyone here gets a happy ending…

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:06 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you so much for this comment! I'm happy somebody really gets what I'm going for. And yes, you understand exactly where Luke is coming from. He has a pretty rigid, simplistic view of the world so in his mind "All jocks are straight -> I am a jock -> Therefore I am straight" simply by default. And yes, I think that's true for a lot of people, but especially for bi guys. Glad you liked the kissing! Since it's their first kiss I wanted to make it special.
5/17/22, 6:37 PM
Just reread this chapter and I love it still. Such sexy stuff. Looking forward to a 100% gay crew. Also looking forward to the hopefully fun stuff of rimming and anal sex. Oh and I hope Sid takes Frank's ass, and takes it hard. Hehe
Anonymous
5/17/22, 2:45 AM
This was hot! I really like the direction you’re going with this… I’m also really looking forward to the coach being introduced ;) Maybe Luke turns to him for advice in the next chapter?

SC Walker
5/17/22, 6:08 PM
Coach is coming up soon! Not in the next chapter but after that. ;)
5/17/22, 4:38 PM
I love the way this is going, hope to see another ipdate soon!
R P
5/17/22, 10:05 AM
This is such a sweet and hot story :) I hope things work out for Luke & Sammy in the end.
Arlo
5/17/22, 6:56 AM
This literally has every favorite aspect of mine, from the hypnosis to the kinks to the self-willing romance to the adorable, yet hot and sexy relation between them, I love this series so much, hope it continues on for a while
5/16/22, 3:54 PM
Love the idea of going up behind someone and just fingering and fucking them - I mean I would probably add some rimming first, hehe. But yeah this casual sex world - especially with its fucked silly component - is super hot. Love how he is a power top, his ass is not the point its his cock and the ass of others. I am curious about something, you mention him 'pushing through the second hole' and such, what is he fucking towards? Also, so maybe its just me, but I didn't realize that the gods give the power and its not like genetic, not sure what I think about that. But yeah, lots of fun, lots of potential, lots of fun, fantastic sex to be had!

5/16/22, 6:04 PM
There's no "towards" per se—it's just a tighter section of a guy's ass, with more sweet spots inside! The sweet spots are also fantastical, of course, but I thought it was a fun addition to the world. With respect to the gods, note that this is just what _Talley_ thinks is supposed to happen. What's actually going to happen is... well, i'd say "another story," but it's this story, as it's continued in _Top Maker_! I'm glad you loved it so much. I will say, though, that the other three chapters of this story involve Talley going from top to switch. The tops involved are hot, but they're not the POV. So it's up to you whether to get it or not. @Heru Kane
5/16/22, 3:26 PM
I might be biased given that I helped you edit this thing, but: I love it! Really excellent work sketching out Talley’s character, his motivations, and (of course) delivering a scorching-hot sex scene. To say nothing of the world-building, which is *chef’s kiss*. Very nicely done!

5/16/22, 4:49 PM
I absolutely loved worldbuilding for this story. There’s basically something new in every single chapter! The amount of ruminating this went through before it started going to you was, hoo, a lot. But thank you, too, for your phenomenal editing. @Noam de Pluma