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5/20/22, 7:11 PM
Awesome. I love it. Can't wait for more!
5/20/22, 5:10 PM
Oh, what a wonderful story. You have some of the best characterizations I’ve ever read. And the kiss was more intimate than a thousand sex scenes. Isn’t that funny?…yes, this is an absolutely amazing tale. I hope you continue it, but the most important thing is that you write what YOU want to write! :)
5/20/22, 3:21 PM
Such a hot chapter! The control is quick and so far, irrevocable , which makes it hotter. I'm loving how he is assigning them roles and fostering their desire for hypnosis. Can't wait to see Sett betray the twins, and eventually, for Jay to find out of the betrayal and futilely try to get away.
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5/20/22, 2:33 PM
This is sweet and so lovely! I hope you do decide to write more about Jeremy and Ryder.
5/20/22, 2:15 PM
@EdIam would love some stealing boyfriends in your stories please... 🙏
5/20/22, 2:11 PM
This sounds like it’s going to be great fun! I like how from the get-go it’s uncertain whether or not his wish actually came true, or if Ryder, like the MC, wanted to tell MC he loved him. I’m excited to see more.
5/20/22, 2:00 PM
This premise has a lot of potential, and I mean even outside this website, if you address the implications of this wish and how it can reflect on their relationship from now on. I think you should invest in it, I really liked this concept.
5/20/22, 11:30 AM
Really enjoy that story!! Personnally I'd love to see Jay resisting a fair bit when Ian tries to subdue him.
5/20/22, 9:54 AM
Haha thanks guys keep me posted on what you want to see next. Next chapter won’t be released until Monday night probably.

5/20/22, 10:43 AM
@Anyonka i really am enjoying your story, fuck its so erotic to take someones bkyfriend away, it would be nicer to see ian start to make jay feel jealous, make collin slutty around ian and make him a little aloft from jay. Eitherway i really do enjoy the story and i am looking forward for the next chapter.
5/20/22, 9:22 AM
My god that was hot. Nothing hotter than brainwashing someone's boyfriend ☺