Recent Comments

Martin
6/18/22, 8:50 PM
I'm not that far into the story yet (it's rather long in case you didn't notice)... and as much as I appreciate this being on Cupid as this site is seriously underappreciated, I fear that this gem might be overlooked by too many people there. I wouldn't mind if it would be x-posted to Spiral, as transformation is a major topic on Spiral. And this story seems to be absolutely appropriate because of that...

6/18/22, 9:52 PM
@Martin Thank you for the suggestion! I'll go ahead and crosspost it there!
6/18/22, 8:36 AM
My vote for a title is. “The demon in me” lol get it. Anyway great story hope you continue.

6/18/22, 5:36 PM
@Mrdick I might actually use this as a chapter title. Thank you!
6/18/22, 4:36 PM
I would be thrilled to see a continuation of this universe, even if not these exact characters. I would also like to see what happens from here with these characters.
Anonymous
6/17/22, 2:14 PM
I have to head canon that if Tony had passed out, he wouldve started breathing again automatically. Otherwise it became too dark for me, personally. Marcus is twisted, and I hope he gets whats coming for him.

6/18/22, 4:28 PM
@ Yeah that has to be what would happen
Anonymous
6/18/22, 3:49 PM
Would love to see a sequel this was a lot of fun and cute!
6/18/22, 4:09 AM
Well written and engaging. Most erotica on this site and others is akin to pulp fiction (pulpy friction?) This has more of a literary voice and engages both of the reader's heads.

6/18/22, 3:21 PM
Thanks, @scudder! As this was written for time.to.occur’s _PLOTHOLE: Queer Porn ++With++ Plot_ compilation, I really worked to elevate it above “hey, this is fapping material” level. Glad it connected with you.
6/17/22, 1:52 PM
I feel bad for Stanley. Some friend Marcus is.

6/18/22, 5:34 AM
@Jonanator Same! He's so cruel to him!!!
6/18/22, 5:33 AM
I thank you for keeping the promise of lighten it up this chapter. Marcus is so ruthless, I could never!!!. I'm only continuing reading because you are doing an excellent job at narrating and describing, even when it makes me feel so uneasy. Again congratulations on the chapter, and as others point out, I too feel bad for Stanley and truly wonder what Marcus is in for, since we know he has been actively lying to Stanley just so he agrees to his agenda so you truly keep me on the thrill for it.
6/18/22, 2:32 AM
Great job! I feel Stanley is in for a rough year. I will really enjoy the friction between their current and prior relationship: Stanley feeling he should be more humane to his former friend, Marcus trying to ensure the success of the experiment. Now that Stanley signed and midnight has past, I will enjoy seeing Marcus's true colors. Marcus should post the contract on the fridge to remind Stanley that 1) he's getting paid and 2) no matter how bad it seems, it'll only last a year. There is the alternative where Marcus used invisible ink on the contract but it depends on how psycho you're trying to portray Marcus.
6/18/22, 12:39 AM
Enjoyed this! Would love to see more from this world