Recent Comments

2/11/26, 11:49 AM
Great journey of discovery for the sub. And clearly you understand the effects of chastity because it definitely resonates with my experience of being locked long term. Very hot, loved it.
2/11/26, 10:56 AM
Love the way this starts, incredibly sexy and well written. So easy to be right in that moment. I cant wait to see where it goes. Really well done!
2/11/26, 4:35 AM
I first saw this on Nifty, and to say it's a slow burn would be an understatement. I stuck with it though because it's so well-written. Chapter 2 has some very sexy action that punches some of my buttons, so thank you. One question though. On Nifty it is listed in the incest section. Does this mean Roger gets to have fun with Danny, or is something else in store for us pervs? I can hardly wait for the next installment.

2/11/26, 7:36 AM
@[Grathocke](/user/show/10008532) Thank you for sticking around. I know that this series, as well as my others are definite time commitments, which some readers simply don’t have the energy or patience for. That’s not a slight on them. We all want and need different things from our erotic reading. I’m just the kind of writer where the psychological aspects matter just as much as the sexual ones. I can’t write one without the other, and to do so with any level of literary success is going to take a significant word count. As to the incest question, that has to do with nifty’s categorization system. Any story or series that has even of whiff of incest at any point will always be placed under the incest section, even if it has not occurred. I let the archivist know ahead of time that incest would become a theme in the later end of the series, so he went ahead and placed it under that category from the beginning. As to how that plays out, I’ll let you find out when we get to that part of the story.
2/10/26, 3:31 PM
I honestly am so VERY much enjoying this story and I am so grateful to you for it. Chris... he teaches a lesson to be kind while insisting on what you want. ... and DANG I like him.

2/10/26, 10:51 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) No thanks necessary. It’s been amazing hearing such great things from people enjoying this little story. All the thanks goes to you guys for reading. And, Chris brings everyone round eventually :wink:
PSExplorer
2/10/26, 6:51 AM
Loved this chapter! It does a great job of showing there is a lot more than just blind obedience and punishment in a Sir/Boy relationship and that Chris takes his responsibility seriously.

2/10/26, 10:41 PM
@PSExplorer Thanks so much as always! Really glad you’re still enjoying it. Xxx
2/10/26, 5:50 PM
Very very well done...great work !

2/10/26, 9:05 PM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thanks so much for the positive comment!
2/10/26, 8:52 PM
Loved it!!!
Anonymous
2/10/26, 1:25 AM
Would be down for some sort of small penis humiliation or chastity play, to further emasculate him. Maybe force him to wear panties or something...

Anonymous
2/10/26, 4:15 PM
@Anonymous never worked on that kink , I might give a try ! . uploaded a side story , give a few days to get approved but definitely check it out
1/29/26, 10:10 PM
Please don't delay...

Michael Hogwarts
1/30/26, 2:57 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) promise I am working on it hard ! anything you wanna see ? I am always down for ideas

2/2/26, 7:07 PM
@Michael Hogwarts Will there be more interaction with marines of lower rank than the sergeant? Perhaps someone will blackmail him into becoming their property, or maybe even use and exploit him?

2/10/26, 4:14 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) will happen , I am working on some side stories related to Fall in line as well . I will try to focus on different marines and their experinces. I just uploaded one . it explains what happens when a marine too stubborn to break . it might take a few days for story to get approved tho