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7/12/22, 11:34 PM
I've been waiting for exactly this: "“Huh?” Himbo and Obmih asked." So much fun, and a mystery man! Who could he be? Congratulations, Nori old chap! :monocle_face:

7/13/22, 6:44 AM
@Essex thank you kindly my good fellow :monocle_face:
7/13/22, 6:36 AM
Fucking amazing, wish I had a daddy to make me cum like that.
7/12/22, 9:12 PM
This was hot and fun and sexy. Nice work!
7/12/22, 8:15 PM
So excited for more of this! One of my favorite stories on the entire site!
7/12/22, 7:21 PM
Undoubtedly the best slice of life story around here And Obmih has definitely become my favourite. I can't wait for more! I wonder what that man's name is though...

7/12/22, 7:31 PM
@Twan Andersen A mystery indeed :smile:
7/12/22, 3:11 AM
That was a hot story.

7/12/22, 4:31 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm glad you thought so! I was a little worried that some of the hotness would get lost behind the drama. I'm glad it still shined through, and hopefully blended well?
7/11/22, 6:38 PM
Male lactation? Muscle growth? Slow, delightful corruption? Did I write this story? This was absolutely wonderful! Thank you for such a beautifully fleshed out tale.

7/11/22, 7:39 PM
@absman420 Aaaa! Thank you so much. I know I sacrificed some attention from readers for the sake of the length I gave it, but I didn't feel I could do justice to the emotional or corruptive journey without each of the scenes here. I'm glad you appreciated all the love and fleshing out I gave it. It's really such a treat when a known (and illustrious) author like yourself finds and likes one of my stories. I'm grinning my ears off. If you happen to know anyone else who might like this kind of thing, please spread it around if you want to! But don't feel obligated. Thanks again for the glowing compliments =D
7/11/22, 8:30 AM
where is ch 5??? i thought i saw it was released?

7/11/22, 10:14 AM
@Kinkypup Hey, you're right it was, but i was in the middle of moving house so i feel like i rushed it. Its not really up to my standard atm so im gonna re-do and post later
Bl guy
6/25/22, 6:12 PM
I really like where this story's going... it seems like Xander's also falling for Allan and I want him to realize his feelings...

7/8/22, 6:14 PM
@Bl guy Well not to be a terrible tease... No wait actually that's exactly what I'm about to do... Wait until you read part 5, which is hopefully coming by the end of this month.

Bl Guy
7/11/22, 8:17 AM
@Nocturne13 Can't wait to read chapter 5, this story's got me hooked both for how hot it is and also cause the actual story and the developing relationships between the characters is soo good, there are very few stories where you can find both of these... take your time and deliver a masterpiece like you always do
Evan
7/10/22, 9:31 PM
Incredible! What a fantastic story. Just on its own it is magnificent and as an entry for Toxic Masculinity it's a wonderful and imaginative take on it. Shining even brighter given the requirement of the theme. The gradual build, the resistance and tension of avoiding Tao spreading his milk to others was wonderful and had me invested. His succumbing was probably inevitable but HOW that happened was glorious. Mentally more than physically. But both were perfect. The Axel eventually figuring out he and Tao love each other and his overcompensation is costing them happiness. Frantically trying to avoid being changed by a stranger. Wanting it to be Tao. So romantic and hot. Then the conclusion of their accepting each other and growing and pounding. Even when they lose their minds for a fortnight, they stick together. Very sweet. Puck is a mystery. And the two weeks of mindless horny fucking and feeding to change others is hot too. But also mysterious. Why two weeks. Why do they change back. How do they feel afterward. What happens to others changed during the two weeks, being already past 12. Instantly mindless bulls to join the rest? I also find the worldbuilding on this subtle but intriguing. Nut butter sounds like it has cum in it. The military fucking for conquest and dominating each other both for contest and for fun. Loved this. Well done!

7/11/22, 6:53 AM
@Evan The number of times I’ve read this comment in sheer delight embarrassed me. But I am proud to be proud of my work, and grateful that you loved it! You saw everything I was going for, you appreciated the little tidbits of worldbuilding I left—that’s my signature, I feel, is blending subtle worldbuilding into a story that can handle those extra hints—and you hit the nail on the head with nut butter. Yes, it involves cum. I hope I accomplished the effect of making the world feel like a real one, in which these characters live—even if some of its facts are surprising and not yet explainable, like the sex-based military. And Puck. Please, if you can, spread this around—I’m posting pretty late in the contest, and I can use all the ratings I can get. But don’t feel obligated. A review like this was enough to make me feel pride in my own work, and that’s enough reward for me!