Recent Comments

9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.
8/29/22, 7:43 PM
Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?

8/29/22, 11:56 PM
@Bowie unfortunately i don't write for money. I've had only bad experiences taking money to write. but... maybe i should. try and get a novel out.

9/2/22, 3:58 PM
Ahh oki, just for clarity i wasen't looking for something in return. Regardless I completely understand @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
9/2/22, 2:45 PM
awww i hope it works out between coach and his eager pussyboy :)
great but...
9/1/22, 3:39 PM
i need the Luke story

9/1/22, 9:14 PM
@great but... Both!!!!

9/2/22, 2:24 PM
@great but... I am working on it. Sometimes I need a break to recharge. I’m not abandoning Luke. And TBH a comment like this is kinda rude.
8/30/22, 8:12 PM
The merging was a bit weird but strangely hot. Well written comeuppance. Keep writing!

9/2/22, 4:42 AM
@Snowbourn Weird but strangely hot, that's in my wheelhouse! :rofl: :bear:
9/1/22, 10:55 PM
I swear, this was written for me: “Yes buddy, I’m sure it did, but you see, he has amnesia.” Obmih gasped dramatically. “What’s that?” Obmih asked. You did amnesia, Cliff got nicer after his ordeal, the boys played dildo throwing (I wonder what inspired this?) and Himbo and B-dawg are boyfriends! :relaxed: Great episode, interesting foreshadowing and... AMNESIA!

9/1/22, 11:04 PM
@Essex Will the foreshadowing pay off? Maybe, maybe not :grin:
9/1/22, 9:13 PM
Amazing chapter. As I see it these two were made for each other and you must keep them together. But again it is your story so who am I to ntell you what to do. I will read everything you write I have become addicted to your writing.
9/1/22, 4:43 PM
OMG This was my fantasy 100%. I had a chance to be a hypnotized boy toy a few years ago but chickened out. I have tried to find that guy but he has gone. No trace of him. I have beat off to that memory many times. Just once I would love to escape my straight married life and try to other side. Thank you for an incredible story!
9/1/22, 7:27 AM
Yes! I've been waiting for the pup :grin: The "it's not grandma, is it?" made me laugh. The creativity of this story is incredible, and i'm hyped for the next chapter!

9/1/22, 4:13 PM
@Norismo Thank you Norismo for your kind words. I'm so glad it made you laugh, too. More to come, for sure!
5/31/22, 3:49 AM
An incredible chapter! The balance between the drama of the baseball game and the aching pornographic content of the sex scene was perfect. You also do a great job reminding the audience that, while Luke DID use a horrible slur and broke Sammy’s heart, Sammy himself was rather deceptive and making assumptions (especially because this chapter continues to make it clear that Luke has absolutely NO ability to pick up on other people’s sexuality or desires unless it’s extremely explicit). It’s also interesting to see how this condition is literally changing Luke’s body…can’t wait to see what happens next! You are an incredible writer! :D

5/31/22, 10:39 AM
@Feed Your Head So I personally feel like Sammy wasn’t being deceptive at all. Taken from his point of view, it’s entirely reasonable to think that Sammy and Luke’s feelings were mutual. At worse it’s a breakdown in communication, but as well as Sammy knows Luke, he’s not a mind reader. It’s important to me that Sammy is shown in a good light, not as a bully or someone manipulative.

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5/31/22, 2:05 PM
@Charlie Walker I don’t think Sammy comes across as manipulative at all. He seems to be genuinely trying to talk with Luke about what they have going on in the previous chapter. At worst Sammy maybe seems a little too caught up in his own crush so that he hadn’t noticed the somewhat mixed signals he was getting from Luke.

5/31/22, 2:27 PM
@Charlie Walker Oh, oh. Don’t worry—Sammy is definitely NOT a bully, or even a manipulative person! I think, as R.P. said, the worst thing he did was get caught up in his feelings and make assumptions, which is something a lot of people do. My own interpretation of him as a little manipulative is purely my own baggage (I’m someone who has struggled with communication and boundaries between partners in the past). Plus with Luke as our POV character (and a well-written one at that), it’s natural that we might start assuming his perspective. Sammy is a great guy, and I hope that he and Luke reconcile! But to do that, Luke needs to start talking about things, and he seems to struggle with that…

9/1/22, 2:12 PM
@Charlie Walker I am pleased you said that & agree with you