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EJG
9/2/22, 9:43 PM
Damned,this was hot stuff. Tanner is so perverted and bad,he's so good. Nothing hotter than dark,''bad'' and perverted beating goodie goodie wholesome hero,every little once in a while
9/2/22, 7:17 PM
Subscribed to this story, got the email of a new chapter, dropped everything to read it, hard as a rock and cumming in seconds. This is one of my favorite stories here. Kudos!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!

9/2/22, 9:23 PM
@EdIam thanks, man :) It’s nice to have fans of this twisted little tale.
9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.
8/29/22, 7:43 PM
Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?

8/29/22, 11:56 PM
@Bowie unfortunately i don't write for money. I've had only bad experiences taking money to write. but... maybe i should. try and get a novel out.

9/2/22, 3:58 PM
Ahh oki, just for clarity i wasen't looking for something in return. Regardless I completely understand @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
9/2/22, 2:45 PM
awww i hope it works out between coach and his eager pussyboy :)
great but...
9/1/22, 3:39 PM
i need the Luke story

9/1/22, 9:14 PM
@great but... Both!!!!

9/2/22, 2:24 PM
@great but... I am working on it. Sometimes I need a break to recharge. I’m not abandoning Luke. And TBH a comment like this is kinda rude.
8/30/22, 8:12 PM
The merging was a bit weird but strangely hot. Well written comeuppance. Keep writing!

9/2/22, 4:42 AM
@Snowbourn Weird but strangely hot, that's in my wheelhouse! :rofl: :bear:
9/1/22, 10:55 PM
I swear, this was written for me: “Yes buddy, I’m sure it did, but you see, he has amnesia.” Obmih gasped dramatically. “What’s that?” Obmih asked. You did amnesia, Cliff got nicer after his ordeal, the boys played dildo throwing (I wonder what inspired this?) and Himbo and B-dawg are boyfriends! :relaxed: Great episode, interesting foreshadowing and... AMNESIA!

9/1/22, 11:04 PM
@Essex Will the foreshadowing pay off? Maybe, maybe not :grin:
9/1/22, 9:13 PM
Amazing chapter. As I see it these two were made for each other and you must keep them together. But again it is your story so who am I to ntell you what to do. I will read everything you write I have become addicted to your writing.
9/1/22, 4:43 PM
OMG This was my fantasy 100%. I had a chance to be a hypnotized boy toy a few years ago but chickened out. I have tried to find that guy but he has gone. No trace of him. I have beat off to that memory many times. Just once I would love to escape my straight married life and try to other side. Thank you for an incredible story!