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9/3/22, 5:05 AM
This story was AMAZING. I blasted out 3 loads in the course of reading it all. The character establishment in the beginning is well done and thorough, which makes the transformation so much better cuz we see so many changes. The description of the physical changes is unbelievable. So hot. I was hanging on every sentence. Thank you so much!

9/3/22, 3:56 PM
@Pwrliftermscl I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed the story. Honestly, hearing that readers shot ropes to what I wrote is one of the best compliments I can receive. Thanks for reading, bro! Have a good one!
Anonymous
9/3/22, 9:30 AM
I actually really enjoyed how he turned into a bully :)
9/3/22, 5:38 AM
Woah so sexy. Don’t keep us waiting too long for more chapters. Scalding hot.
9/3/22, 5:20 AM
What an unexpected chapter. You keep coming up with amazing new and different ways to show Tanners corrupting influence. I love it. When I first read the summary I expected that Tanner would influence the debate itself making the debate teams discuss unsuitable subjects like sex, masturbation, exhibitionisme, male body appreciation, Farther-son relations and so on. With Tanners help the debate teams could have reached some interesting conclusions that would have had the assembly agree on quite disturbing behaviours. So I was surprised to see the story pick up at the end of the debate. But the ritual was a fun addition. I am a little bit sad that it was just forgotten. I am generally not a big fan of the "When I snap my fingers you will forget everything that has happened". I think I would have been much hotter if everyone in the room would just consider this the normal way to end a debate. Or at least that the mantras the teacher repeated will stick with him and form his personality. He will think of himself as the master of debate and exposure without remembering the actual ritual. But on the other hand I do love the part between Jiang and Aidan at the end, where the other guy just completely accepts that of course they are gonna forget as soon as the leave the room and that Jiang is the weird one for not understanding that. It is so deliciously absurd. Please keep up the good work. Every week that goes by without a new chapter is agony.
Dickslave
9/3/22, 2:13 AM
Nooooo. You were one of my favorite authors. I’m sad to see you go
Anonymous
8/24/22, 6:49 PM
Really excited for another part

8/29/22, 11:55 PM
thanks! people keep stealing my shit so i'm just not gonna write for the internet anymore. sorry to disappoint. but in the third part Riley would have shown up dressed up as his femboy self, all schoolgirl'ed up! and, of course, hot sex and blowjobs.

8/30/22, 12:01 AM
It's a shame too i was working to the most incredible mindfuck ending for this story

9/2/22, 4:55 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker People stole your story? That really sucks. Shame we won’t see the third part, sounds like it would of been a good one!

9/3/22, 1:11 AM
Awww no 😭 @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
EJG
9/2/22, 9:43 PM
Damned,this was hot stuff. Tanner is so perverted and bad,he's so good. Nothing hotter than dark,''bad'' and perverted beating goodie goodie wholesome hero,every little once in a while
9/2/22, 7:17 PM
Subscribed to this story, got the email of a new chapter, dropped everything to read it, hard as a rock and cumming in seconds. This is one of my favorite stories here. Kudos!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!

9/2/22, 9:23 PM
@EdIam thanks, man :) It’s nice to have fans of this twisted little tale.
9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.
8/29/22, 7:43 PM
Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?

8/29/22, 11:56 PM
@Bowie unfortunately i don't write for money. I've had only bad experiences taking money to write. but... maybe i should. try and get a novel out.

9/2/22, 3:58 PM
Ahh oki, just for clarity i wasen't looking for something in return. Regardless I completely understand @Daisy I. B. de Melcker