This was one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. Sorry you had a bad experience and are not finishing it. I'd love to read more of this.

so happy to see this series again! really interesting continuation. i can clearly see how much care you put into developing the characters and their perspectives, since the word choice and what they notice is so purposeful. curious when darius will hear from may, or decide to reach out to her.

It's sexier when Nick is a good boy for Darius. Much more fun when Darius is in charge.

You don’t even know how excited I was to see an update of this story. I check your profile literally every day! I really enjoyed this chapter! Darius’s awareness and realization of the situation was both exciting and haunting. I felt his feeling of helplessness throughout the story too…gave me chills! So many factors playing into the story. Who’s in control? What’s the source of the changes and control? It gets me excited to see how your story plays out! I hope we get to see more of Nick as a good boy. Alpha Nick is low key super hot but Darius in charge and Nick as a himbo sub top is what I came here for! I definitely can’t wait to see more smut too hahaha

What a Revelation! And definitely my favorite kind of apocalypse, when the spiritual upheaval leads to such heights of insight and pleasure mingled together. And here I was, feeling for poor Talley all the time. It’s been quite the phantom release for me too! Thanks for the gift, as ever

OK, damnnnnnnnnnnn bro! I loved the first chapter of this and put in my comments how it made me dump 3 loads before I made it all the way through. Then I got to this part. I was going nuts for this through the whole thing, and largely because of the first story. I had anticipation for the transformation and what was going on, so the fact that you seemed to really draw things out with him being at the party and running into a ton of the jocks. The changes start slow and as I'm reading I'm looking for every clue and asking myself "Is it happening? Is it speeding up?" Since I had the info from the first story I was on the edge of my seat. Then I got to the game of beer pong. He's oblivious to the "conversion juice" he's been given. I love that. He thinks he's doing well. He's changing as the game goes on. Getting cockier. I loved when he walked in and they were breaking up their huddle around the beer pong cups and pulling up their jockstraps and shorts. FUCK. I want to guzzle that juice down. So it's no surprise to me that the effect of the beer pong is what made me nut first in this chapter. I got that far, though, cuz it was such a slow burn. Then after a break I come back to the story and pick up where I left off. Now it's the two of them going at it in the bedroom and I'm right on the edge of cumming thru all the transformation and all. Your descriptions are amazing. It's so well done! As he's changing and his cock is transforming, a couple of times he makes a comment that something is happening in the base of his cock. But it just gets left and other changes are described. How his cock turns deep red, then how it's growing and thickening and he's pistoning in and out, and there's some cocky talk back and forth, and he's noticing that the base is changing again getting thicker and veinier, and you just keep teasing it along -- which drove my own cock nuts cuz i'm obsessed with knotted cock, myself, and so I'm in total anticipation of this. And then it happens. His knot forms. And it's like the final change that completes him. And that's what made me dump load #2, right along with him pumping his own jizz into Anthony and bloating his belly, and Anthony is cumming but he's drinking all that "brotein" down right as it is being squirted out. Thank you for this amazing story. I am definitely going to revisit it and I won't be surprised if I cum in all the same places.

I was reading this story got to the end and was like damn that was a great story. I'm enjoying it more and more. I personally can't wait for the next chapter.

are more chapters expected? it feels unfinished to me

LOVE the intensity and true ruthlessness of Marcus. The idea of having my free will broken and sold off with my cock locked (PERMANENTLY😈) has me so turned on. Please keep it ruthless and intense. Great story and j can’t wait for more

Always fun to have some Himbo Sun in my day 🌞