Recent Comments

9/6/22, 9:06 AM
Great idea for a story! I hope to see where this grows; I mean goes.
9/6/22, 5:41 AM
Someone that can't be deceived is a nice textural variation. I love how distinct the dynamics and situation is with each different target and family in this story. No characters feel interchangeable at all. Really enjoying it.
DWK
9/6/22, 3:11 AM
Great story, looking forward to see where this goes. Thanks
9/6/22, 2:01 AM
I didn't like the structure at first. But it started winning me over. I think you took some story telling risks, and some writing risks too. In the end, I though it was a well told and unique story.
9/5/22, 4:36 PM
Another great addition to the series and a great setup for Jiang's story-line. As always, a fantastically hot piece that sets us up for even higher stakes. Keep it up!
9/3/22, 3:33 PM
Just now trying to read through this story, it’s really hot! It seems like Tanner’s M.O with Jiang is to influence everyone around Jiang, rather than brute forcing him into sexual situations. (Both here and in the sacred circle he coerced him into accepting the changes through peer pressure.) Interested to see if that also comes into play when Tanner gets Jiang and his dad together.

9/5/22, 10:00 AM
@11037 Great point about the sacred circle. I had forgotten that. I am getting the impression that Tanner might try to recruit Jiang to his side. Tempt him with these powers to change reality. This chapter seems like Tanner showing off, not as a warning but as an offer. Jiang seems to have some resentment towards his adopted parents and life en general. Maybe Tanner will convice him that if they work together, He can change his family just like he wants to.
Rex
9/5/22, 3:50 AM
This was one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. Sorry you had a bad experience and are not finishing it. I'd love to read more of this.
8/30/22, 10:41 PM
so happy to see this series again! really interesting continuation. i can clearly see how much care you put into developing the characters and their perspectives, since the word choice and what they notice is so purposeful. curious when darius will hear from may, or decide to reach out to her.

Kods
9/4/22, 9:51 PM
@Razz TFs Thank you, I try my best with attention to details for my stories.
8/31/22, 11:45 PM
It's sexier when Nick is a good boy for Darius. Much more fun when Darius is in charge.

Kods
9/4/22, 7:40 PM
@Heru Kane Personally I agree :D, but is getting good boy back going to be that easy?
Carmelo
9/1/22, 9:34 AM
You don’t even know how excited I was to see an update of this story. I check your profile literally every day! I really enjoyed this chapter! Darius’s awareness and realization of the situation was both exciting and haunting. I felt his feeling of helplessness throughout the story too…gave me chills! So many factors playing into the story. Who’s in control? What’s the source of the changes and control? It gets me excited to see how your story plays out! I hope we get to see more of Nick as a good boy. Alpha Nick is low key super hot but Darius in charge and Nick as a himbo sub top is what I came here for! I definitely can’t wait to see more smut too hahaha

Kods
9/4/22, 6:52 PM
@Carmelo Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And you are right there are questions that certainly have to be answered. As for Nick and Darius... I wonder who is in control? Well, I'm sure they'll figure it out in the bedroom.