Recent Comments

10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!
10/18/22, 9:42 PM
This literally gets better and better. AMAZING work.
10/17/22, 7:35 PM
Very interesting

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you! I am excited for what I have planned.
10/17/22, 4:39 PM
I’m curious about what this story will entail! I like the little threads you’ve set up, and I’ll certainly be following future chapters to see what happens.

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank You! I am going to try to have at least one chapter a week out. I have a good idea timeline going.
10/18/22, 12:26 PM
One of the best stories on this site
10/18/22, 1:49 AM
This is the best story! Thank you
10/18/22, 12:55 AM
Just read the entire series, up through this one - straight through. Fucking amazing. You're a terrific writer and I can't wait for the next one!
10/16/22, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more
10/16/22, 6:04 PM
Ok, so Nick's ex might have used some magic on him and that caused "The Zone". Since she's messaging him so much, my guess is she's hoping to undo it, which will probably lead to them finding out about Deborah's spell. Though between both spells and Gwen's programming, i doubt she can actually fix anything. And we still don't know if the puppy obedience is something else entirely. Meanwhile Darius is losing more and more muscle/mass. Still rooting for these crazy kids.
10/12/22, 2:21 AM
Love the story. Eagerly anticipating the chapter when we have an actual confrontation and a sense of danger for matt and his harem.