Recent Comments

10/19/22, 10:19 PM
Now this is the kind of content I’ve been coming here for! Hot, horny jocks getting it on with wild fervour, a pinch of force, and a heaping helping of roughness, I can never get enough. I dug the description of the blowjob—sloppy, gagging blowjobs are my favourite kind to read and write. The laissez-faire nature of these jocks’ perspective on gay sex-adjacent activities is another favourite theme. I wonder if you might use italics a bit too much—a maxim repeatedly beaten into me was that “too much emphasis is no emphasis at all”, and it’s hard to appreciate a moment of emphasis if you see three others coming close on its heels. Regardless, your descriptions are very good and enthralling on their own. At risk of an overly lengthy comment, I’m also very happy with the representation—I find a dearth of minority representation in gay erotica at large and there’s only a few authors I know of that bring it in (thinking of blobbyblobfish, who has a significant amount of disability rep). All in all, I’m looking forward to more! Glad to have another _great_ writer here on Cupid.

Sebastián Apollo
10/19/22, 11:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you so much for the kind words, I appreciate it. I know I overuse the italics, it's a bad habit! So I'll keep a mental note of that for my next and current works. _Especially appreciative of your noticing of my minority representation_ - I talk about this in my profile, but I do try to make a conscientious effort to include Hispanic/Latino representation in my stories, considering I'm one myself and I find folks who look like to be underrepresented in porn and sex work. So you pointing that out kinda confirmed it for me, haha! I don't consider myself "great", but thank you for the gracious comment!
10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!
10/18/22, 9:42 PM
This literally gets better and better. AMAZING work.
10/17/22, 7:35 PM
Very interesting

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you! I am excited for what I have planned.
10/17/22, 4:39 PM
I’m curious about what this story will entail! I like the little threads you’ve set up, and I’ll certainly be following future chapters to see what happens.

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank You! I am going to try to have at least one chapter a week out. I have a good idea timeline going.
10/18/22, 12:26 PM
One of the best stories on this site
10/18/22, 1:49 AM
This is the best story! Thank you
10/18/22, 12:55 AM
Just read the entire series, up through this one - straight through. Fucking amazing. You're a terrific writer and I can't wait for the next one!
10/16/22, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more
10/16/22, 6:04 PM
Ok, so Nick's ex might have used some magic on him and that caused "The Zone". Since she's messaging him so much, my guess is she's hoping to undo it, which will probably lead to them finding out about Deborah's spell. Though between both spells and Gwen's programming, i doubt she can actually fix anything. And we still don't know if the puppy obedience is something else entirely. Meanwhile Darius is losing more and more muscle/mass. Still rooting for these crazy kids.