Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/11/25, 11:26 PM
Liam is so slutty that he turns a straight Noah into a perfect Dom top for him and makes him do all these naughty things to him. Hope he takes responsibility and finishes what he started without teasing both Noah and us too much with his horny little dick and hungry virgin hole.

lukas pucci
5/12/25, 4:50 PM
@Anonymous dudeeee nice interpretation, totally valid to see liam that way, fucking love it. hot
7/3/21, 1:43 PM
so, what the teddy bear did?

7/4/21, 12:08 PM
@darkblade2814 it made him cuddly and super attracted to body contact! In my head, he made out with his brother off-screen but I figured we should focus on Levi's perspective.

7/4/21, 12:31 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I got it, thank you, what would the swords would do?

7/4/21, 12:36 PM
@darkblade2814 I wasn't fully sure what all of them would do - some of the things I threw in there just for flavor. I was thinking the Bowie knife would make Levi more rangy/rugged and have an insatiable need to fuck - more primal and naturist. The samurai swords I was think would make someone a very flexible service/disciplined top. I think if there was a crusader or other Christian-themed broadsword it would make someone inclined/interested in fucking closeted homophobes and righteously exposing them. Lots of options!

7/4/21, 12:46 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) nice, plenty of materials for a sequel, I would like to see the swords (both the eastern and crusaders) being used, also may I suggest a shield that makes the person very protective towards they fellow members go the LGBT+ community?

5/12/25, 6:35 AM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Cool! I thought the Bear made him… more “himself.” Just accepting his own gayness. 🤷
5/12/25, 12:11 PM
Amazing work! Excited to read more from you as reading your profile text you seem to have the same fetish as I do for authority figures being dominated.

5/12/25, 11:50 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Thanks for reading!
5/12/25, 4:56 PM
Fucking HOT! For a minute I thought they were going to be joined by some of the other guys on the team. May be in future episodes? Would be so hot to see coach gang banged on the locker room floor or in the showers by all his players. Hey, they're just trying to help him out, considering his condition and all...:innocent:

5/12/25, 11:52 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) For sure will have other players hopping in to help their favorite Coach! :wink:
5/12/25, 10:55 PM
So happy to see this story again .... and expanded on! Loved the power dynamics and subtle seduction/surrender of these horny young men.
Anonymous
5/13/25, 8:47 AM
amazing stuff! Hopefully much more still to cum ;)
5/14/25, 5:34 PM
Brother, this was a beautiful, satisfying, and complete ending to an epic journey. Thank you for letting us into your pack and sharing your world with us. I’m so happy Luna brought you into my orbit and that you chose to dance with her when it would have been easier to give up. I can’t wait to see what more she holds in store for you and us! You’re the best ♥️

5/15/25, 4:54 AM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. Very pleased that some folks enjoyed the entire ride.
5/14/25, 9:55 PM
Great writing dude. Love the slow burn that I hope ultimately ends with Liam finding himself as a cock hungry needy bottom who is completely happy with his newly discovered desires. Love the armpit play.

lukas pucci
5/14/25, 11:12 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) thank u so much, man! if u love armpits ill love further chapters, fucking love them too.
Anonymous
5/14/25, 11:04 PM
If a little sweat drip has such a strong effect on Liam, can't imagine what Noah cumming on him would turn him into.

lukas pucci
5/14/25, 11:13 PM
@Anonymous poor liam, he’s no idea what he’s in for! btw chapter four is up tomorrow! haha
Anonymous
5/15/25, 3:08 AM
i too read this in chastity, I've been locked for 17 days now. How I'd like to be locked with a PA cage for 40 days and 40 nights, to start.