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5/11/25, 6:50 AM
I don't have any sophistcated analysis, this is hot as fuck

5/11/25, 8:45 PM
@[Humper](/user/show/10051644) Hah, that's good enough for me! This was an experiment in trying to blend spiritual 'sensations' with erotica while still keeping it hot. Sounds like it worked—and I'm going to be coming out with stories soon that have a _lot_ more of that.
Boomer
5/11/25, 10:29 AM
Oh this is great. The slow easing into it, the manipulation. Awesome.

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 5:49 PM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) glad u liked it cause it’s only gonna get worse.

Boomer
5/13/25, 10:44 AM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) I can't wait, worse is best
Zander
5/11/25, 12:56 PM
Great story, it's a pity that it comes out too slow and this is the only minus so far (because of this, the reader forgets what was in the previous chapters) and the story becomes boring. I hope there will be no more such a long break between chapters and the story will be continued. I also hope for a lot of interaction between the characters and the appearance of new villains) Our hero needs to open his own Bureau for Investigation of Hypnosis and Mind Control and do his own thing and help people. For example, a hypnotist captured men in a family in the neighborhood, our hero found out about this and decided to help by capturing the hypnotist with evidence so that he would be arrested and put in a special prison where his powers would not help him and there would be mostly female guards in the prison.
Anonymous
5/11/25, 7:09 PM
Noah's feet were so close. Poor Liam that didn't get to lick every single inch. At least he got alpha's cum on him 😁

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 8:36 PM
@Anonymous i’m guessing he’ll have both really soon 🫠
Anonymous
5/11/25, 8:03 PM
Naive Liam. As if whole party of people would stop Noah from having perfect dick that he won't be able to keep his eyes, hands and more from 😈 I think Noah actually would love audience and Liam would just get even harder.

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 8:39 PM
@Anonymous dude lmaooo you’re really getting noah’s and liam’s personality.
Anonymous
5/11/25, 10:04 PM
Thank you for another hot hot hot chapter. Why do I think Liam will try deny he wanted what happened. Luckily with a "bro" like Noah, he will see the error of his ways and before you know it, thanking Noah for covering him in his creamy goodness. ☺

lukas pucci
5/12/25, 4:49 PM
@Anonymous It'll be fun seeing Liam struggling with it next chapter, i assure u lmao
Anonymous
5/11/25, 11:26 PM
Liam is so slutty that he turns a straight Noah into a perfect Dom top for him and makes him do all these naughty things to him. Hope he takes responsibility and finishes what he started without teasing both Noah and us too much with his horny little dick and hungry virgin hole.

lukas pucci
5/12/25, 4:50 PM
@Anonymous dudeeee nice interpretation, totally valid to see liam that way, fucking love it. hot
7/3/21, 1:43 PM
so, what the teddy bear did?

7/4/21, 12:08 PM
@darkblade2814 it made him cuddly and super attracted to body contact! In my head, he made out with his brother off-screen but I figured we should focus on Levi's perspective.

7/4/21, 12:31 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I got it, thank you, what would the swords would do?

7/4/21, 12:36 PM
@darkblade2814 I wasn't fully sure what all of them would do - some of the things I threw in there just for flavor. I was thinking the Bowie knife would make Levi more rangy/rugged and have an insatiable need to fuck - more primal and naturist. The samurai swords I was think would make someone a very flexible service/disciplined top. I think if there was a crusader or other Christian-themed broadsword it would make someone inclined/interested in fucking closeted homophobes and righteously exposing them. Lots of options!

7/4/21, 12:46 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) nice, plenty of materials for a sequel, I would like to see the swords (both the eastern and crusaders) being used, also may I suggest a shield that makes the person very protective towards they fellow members go the LGBT+ community?

5/12/25, 6:35 AM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Cool! I thought the Bear made him… more “himself.” Just accepting his own gayness. 🤷
5/12/25, 12:11 PM
Amazing work! Excited to read more from you as reading your profile text you seem to have the same fetish as I do for authority figures being dominated.

5/12/25, 11:50 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Thanks for reading!
5/12/25, 4:56 PM
Fucking HOT! For a minute I thought they were going to be joined by some of the other guys on the team. May be in future episodes? Would be so hot to see coach gang banged on the locker room floor or in the showers by all his players. Hey, they're just trying to help him out, considering his condition and all...:innocent:

5/12/25, 11:52 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) For sure will have other players hopping in to help their favorite Coach! :wink: