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Zai
11/9/22, 4:14 PM
First off, has anyone noted in the last 2 chapters, that Bruce|Batman is now calling Lex, Mr. Luthor and Sir? Will the brain zonked hero soon be adding MASTER to that list? Will Batsy become BatBitch? Taking cock like his once formidable pal, SupaFag? Well, only our esteemed author, SuperDude knows, lol, but eventually he'll reveal the fate of the Caped Crusader... or will that become the CapedCrusaderWhore? The Dark NaughtyKnightSlut? Will BruceyBoi be hoover'in dick-snot as if it were the finest cuisine? Will Lex be going spelunking deep inside the BatCave? And yes, I mean Batman's dank, steamy asshole, folks... uproarious Lol'ing! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰ I so enjoyed the continued depravity SupaQueer is being subjected to. Although I have had to look up some of the goodies SuperDude is dressing our Thunderdome players in. The puppy gear is hilarious, yet kinda freaked me out (slightly). Please, oh pretty please, just never include water sports or scat play. Really, please! It wasn't too long ago I found out what those were. Yikes & gross! ๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ฉ๐Ÿ˜ฒ You gotta leave Superman some dignity! ๐Ÿ™ƒ I do wonder, have any other readers questioned how Bruce became such a dominate slave-trainer? Just what the fuck skeletons is that kinky freak hiding in his closets, huh? LOL! ๐Ÿค” โ˜ ๐Ÿ’€ I realllllllyyyyyy enjoyed the two baby-bois of our Luthor minions working SupaHomo into quite the frenzy. From cumming in his face and mouth to BizzaroBoi (that is fucking funny) ramming his Bizzaro cock up Supes randy & ever starved SupaCunt! That was excellent and explosively hot! ๐Ÿ’ฃ Plus, you left us in a raunchy cliffhanger, huh? Lastly, I'm imagining what the two masters, Lex and Python are, errr, discussing? Or is one trying to shove their dick up the others ying-yang? โ˜ฏ๏ธ Ciao, SuperDude!

11/9/22, 7:54 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers, ZAI!! Only an "astute" dude like yourself would pick up on Bruce's addressing of Lex-- there is "something" to that, but you'll have to wait a bit 4 that to be revealed!! BTW...no one else has mentioned how Bruce became such an "experienced slave trainer", but like I said (or read btwn the lines!)...CUMMING SOON! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THRILLED (& THANK YOU!!) that you thoroughly enjoyed the remainder of the SLAVE/PUP Training with the Bois, i.e., Jimmy/Jon-- I really GOT INTO the whole "cock denial" aspect of things, especially when Jon began to exert his "Kryptonian powers" to speed up his servicing of Jimmy's cock, which triggered his "explosive FRENZY" ALL OVAH Superpiggy's face!!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Sorry, but I inadvertedly mentioned this response in my reply to your comment (from the last chapter)-- NO WATER SPORTS or SCAT:vomiting_face: (whatsoever!!!)!!! Referring to your comment about Cliffhangers... After I noticed how the previous cliffhanger "cranked your chain", especially with the "dun-dun-duns" you served me, I just HAD to adapt that detail into my writing style a bit more...again, you're inspiring me....:wink: Yes, and the 2 Masters are STILL holding "peacetalks" @Camp Luthor (like Camp David-- I don't really ever "inject political references", but it was Election Day yesterday, LOL!)...I'm still figuring out exactly HOW that's gonna unfold...hope I go in the direction that the readers prefer me to go in!! SUPA-GR8FUL 4 your continued support/interest/comments/suggestions-- Hope U R having a Productive day, kind Sir!:innocent:
11/9/22, 7:43 PM
So hot. So well characterized. So engrossing. Love it.
Zai
11/9/22, 4:31 PM
Crying as I LOL real hard! ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜† If you want to call me by a different moniker, that's fine. BigSur(Stud) reads like Big Sir. And I am 6' 2", 180 lbs, blonde (since birth... ain't no bleaching here, lol), and I surf, play baseball, and swim (in tight Speedo racer briefs). I'm not tooting my horn, but fortunately/unfortunately, I garner too much attention for how I look. But I give that little credence since I can't take credit for my genetics. Personally, I like most folk. No matter the ethnic, gender, body type or facial looks. It's personality, kindness and open-minded people that draws me in. However, you can just keep calling me Zai (short for Zaiden). Yes, once I've the time, I want to have a villain play with our dear Spandex wearing BatStud! It'll probably be a one-shot... but you never know! Later, SuperDude!

11/9/22, 7:42 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI! LMAO-- Thanks 4 your hysterical response!! I was totally "taking a shot in the dark" to capture your personality with a "nickname", so I'm glad "BigSurStud" rang your bell accordingly-- BTW...the "Big Sir" was EXACTLY what I was inferring in that particular nickname, so I'm glad that you were "tickled" by that...LOLOLOL!:rofl: Your description is kinda how I envisioned you :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: & further to that, ZAI totally works 4 me-- it struck me as a cool name from the get-go (when I first received a comment from you)! Although I believe that we've already "clicked as kindred spirits" (esp. with our personalities/open-mindedness/kink interests!)-- I hope you've already picked up on my "kindness factor", in that I've ALWAYS been a "giver"! (I put my ALL into everything I do, i.e., work/life/relationships)--However, I'm the complete opposite to you looks/body type-- 5'6", dark brown hair/features, Sicilian-American (1st generation), muscular/stocky build-- I kinda fit the "pup/otter stereotype", but I'm a funny, engaging guy (at least that's what they keep telling me...LOL!) who's ALWAYS had an affinity to have a bigger guy pick me up & throw me over his shoulders!:zany_face: AND....To put your mind at ease, there will be NO water sports (or scat-- YIKES!!) that will transpire in this storyline!! Again, I'm looking forward to your BatStud story, whenever your creativity "spurts"!!:smiling_imp: Thanks again 4 your kindness & continued inspiration!!:innocent:
11/9/22, 11:53 AM
Awesome story!

11/9/22, 3:05 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks!
Zai
11/8/22, 2:28 PM
LOL, lol, lol... *cue dramatic music* ๐ŸŽตdun, dun, dun...๐ŸŽถ That ending is a fun and exciting cliffhanger! What will happen? Will Python go all beserker because now he'll know his Supabitch was being truthful and Lex had played him like a chump. ๐ŸŽตdun, dun, dun...๐ŸŽถ Will Python head to the arena to rescue his grade-A, prime superhero Slut from Lex' clutches? ๐ŸŽตdun, dun, dun...๐ŸŽถ Oh boy, the scenarios running rampant in my mind right now! ๐ŸŽตdun, dun, dun...๐ŸŽถ And just what will happen to Batman? Is a thourough bitching in his future? I swear, you've got a story that leaves we readers open to all sorts of kinky avenues of thought. I so excited to see who gets what from who. Will there be another orgy? If Batsy becomes a cock crazed whore, who gets to plunder his steamy holes? Will more superheroes appear to aid their fallen comrades only to become more of Luthor's depraved, sex slave pawns. ๐ŸŽตdun, dun, dun...๐ŸŽถ My heads gonna explode, lol... ... ... Thanks and ciao, Dude! ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ‘ฟ

11/8/22, 3:21 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Once again, your opening lines have me doubled over in laughter (dun-dun-dun!!)!!! LMAO!! THANK YOU 4 your positive comments & subsequent EMBRACING of this chapter-- it warms "the cock-les of my heart"!!:smiling_imp: While you/the other readers' kinky minds have you exploring multiple avenues of potential desired results/scenarios... I hope that most will be pleased with how this cliffhanger is resolved!! It's a LOT to unpack, so it will probably evolve over a couple of chapters (at least), as "other facets" will be in-play simultaneously!! THRILLED to hear that I've "got you going" to the point of "your head exploding"!! (LOL) Again, eternally GRATEFUL 4 ALL your thoughts/feedback/ideas-- ENJOY your day, kind SIR--make the MOST of it!!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/9/22, 8:41 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) ๐Ÿ’ผ I'm excited for the unpacking you'll be doing in the Up-Cumming chapters, SuperDude! ๐Ÿ’ผ AND SUPERDUDE? We are SO KINDRED SPIRITS, LOL! Cock-les, indeed!!! ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ‘… Oh yeah - from now on, I'll be referring to you as SuperDude! Okay? ๐Ÿ˜‰ I'm thinking of writing a Batman|Bruce Wayne story, eventually. You've inspired me! Adios, SUPERDUDE!

11/9/22, 2:25 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) G'Mornin ZAI!! Thanks 4 your warm response, Kindred Spirit-- I'm TOTALLY diggin on the SuperDude moniker...:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: We are DEF on similar vybes/wavelengths--Now, what should I call U-- STUDboi, STUDmuffin or maybe...BigSurSTUD?!? U let me know, k? I'm SUPAexcited that I've inspired you to write a Batman/Bruce Wayne story...I can't wait 2 read it!! Hope you ENJOY the "unpacking" of the UP-CUMMING chapters!! You made my day-- Have an AWESOMELY Productive Day!!:innocent:
Zai
11/9/22, 8:27 AM
I'd state, quite vehemently, that your subjugation of the Man of Steel into the Man of Squeal by Lex (et. al.) has been one of the most deliciously diabolical I've ever read! And that you've added (once) squeaky clean Jimmy Olsen into the fold as one of Luthor's minions & bitches has been unique and hot, indeed! I must also note the Roid Rage Jimmy heaped on SupaDupaDipShite was not just the toxic cocktail and brainwashing Lex subjected the Daily Planet cub to. I'm feeling that boi held some envy towards Clark & Superman. Add in some latent, deep, deep seated homosexual desires; especially for Supes in his ultra-skintight, ultra-sexy costume that showcased all those muscles, that huge bulge, the muscular bubble-butt & the pretty-boi, movie star looks... ... ... ??? I'm surprised Jimmy didn't just rip those chick panties off that heroic ass and plow that farmboy's cunt deep and dirty right away, lol. Skip the wrestling and pop that ๐Ÿ’virgin๐Ÿ’ Supatwat into oblivion! Whoa, Dude! I'm now in much need for a cooling... naw, frigid shower ASAP! Before I explode, lol, lol, LOL! ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฅ Ciao, SuperDude!
11/8/22, 11:06 PM
Love the pup play part of superpups training. I wonder what is going to happen between Lex and Python? Can't wait for more.

11/9/22, 5:43 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! Happy 2 hear you're diggin the pup training--it's gonna continue to UNFOLD, so I hope you ENJOY it!! Lex & Python's "detente discussion" will also be an ever-evolving situation, which I hope will surprise (& satiate!) you/other readers!:smiling_imp: SO GR8FUL 4 your ongoing, positive support & Have a GR8 night!:innocent:
11/8/22, 10:35 PM
I'm not sure why but it's hot that Python continues to call Lex "master" even while having a complete meltdown. Maybe they'll arrive at some form of detente by "working off some steam" :smiling_imp:

11/9/22, 5:38 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! The pup training & the detente discussion between Luthor & Python, will continue to unfold (in multiple layers), so I hope you ENJOY how it all "gets unpacked"!! Appreciate the positive support!! :smiling_imp:
11/8/22, 3:18 PM
Love what you did with Batman. I could just picture him in is new uniform. Oh that ending. What will Python do when he finds out his super slut was telling him the truth? I guess we will just have to wait and see what will happen in the next chapter.

11/8/22, 3:50 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & appreciation of the ongoing storyline!! Glad U were diggin on the "Python cliffhanger"-- there's DEF MORE 2 CUM (& unravel!) in forthcoming chapters, so please stay tuned to this BAT CHANNEL (LOL)!! VERY GR8FUL 4 the positivity & Have an SUPA-Day!:innocent:
Zai
11/8/22, 8:26 AM
My big question, Dude, is why is Bruce|Batman so friendly and cool with Lex? And the same for Dr. Strange? I realize this is an AU, but since you already had canon feels Superman v. Lex Luthor in the beginning of the story, I'd assume that Wayne and Strange would have suspicions towards Lex. Hmmmmmmm... ??? However, Bruce & Lex act like besties and Hugo being all into hypnotising and bringing down Superman (and even Batman) seemed a bit out of left field. I'm not criticising you nor this chapter. It just perplexed me in its content. Please don't hate me. ๐Ÿค” As you know, I was hoping more of the canon, ever alert and suspicious Caped Crusader arriving and beginning to put his detective skills to use. Then alas, the Dark Knight's investigating soon would bring him to becoming a bitched dick-tective, lol. Above all, though, this is your story, your plot, your visions. And I don't want to throw shade or aspersions on it. So I'm going to now comment on what occurred in this chapter. Lex is one sly fox, huh? Bringing in a big gun like Bruce Wayne|Batman to mentally root and cement Superman's recently submissive & cunted psyche. And it's such a delight that the cunted psyche has a direct link to Clark|Superman's whorish and slutty oral and anal holes. It's going to be interesting to read the dialog you write that's going to occur between Bruce & Clark. Plus, will Bruce be Bruce Wayne or Batman & will Superman be in some slutty attire or his superhero costume, etc? Will Bruce|Batman be converted to ultimately top or bottom? I'm voting an utter bottom bitch, lol. That way Lex has SupaSlut & BatBitch under his total control. Imagine what you wrote earlier about Lex wanting to whore out the Big Blue Boy scout. The huge amounts of $ bank$ that'll bring in. The same would be true about whoring out Batman. Joker, Riddler, Penguin, Killer Croc, Solomon Grundy, Deathstroke, etc, etc, etc, would pay msny millions to own Batsy for a night. Again, please don't take my opening thoughts as negative feelings. I express my thoughts, yes, but I don't ever want to hurt feelings. You have a very vivid and keen imagination which you're able to translate quite well into creative writing. Thanks and high-gives, Dude! ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ‘…

11/8/22, 2:22 PM
@Zai Ciao ZAI! Thanks so much 4 your thoughts-- you have EVERY right to voice them in this forum!! To be completely honest, and for the context of this particular story, Lex & Bruce are seemingly more allies than adversaries-- being completely transparent, I adapted their "somewhat warmer, yet unexpected relationship" from the "Batman vs. Superman-- Dawn of Justice" movie (& ran with it)...while it may have been "predictable" for Bruce to be immediately wary, I "slanted" Lex's call to Bruce as a "call out of sincere concern" with respect to Superman's behavior/well-being...a bit of "develish trickery" on Lex's part (as he is one of the 2 principal characters in the AU):smiling_imp: With respect to Professor Strange, in my mind's eye, has already been established as an ally of Lex's (and a "warped character" himself), who's helped Mr. Luthor in previous stories (that I've read in the past-- "Strange Dealings: The Fall Of Superman"), so he was "a natural fit". Perhaps, I'll readdress this point (& well taken!) in upcoming chapters, as MORE is to unravel with the BAT soon enough!! Anyways, SIR, I do appreciate your thoughts/feedback/insight, but my "twisted kinky mind" takes the story in these directions, so no negative feelings at all...and I'm eternally GRATEFUL that you CARE enough about this storyline to spend "quality personal time" to meticulously address some of your thoughts/concerns-- THANK YOU & have a SUPA-Productive Day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/8/22, 2:36 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You're cool, Dude! ๐Ÿ˜Ž I'm glad you realized I wasn't being a dickwad, lol. And thanks for giving me a clear look at your vision and certain plot points. I for one truly appreciate all the time & effort you and other writers put into creating erotic stories for we starved fanfiction hounds. Adios and much gratitude! ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸผโœŒ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ––๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

11/8/22, 3:46 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI!! Why THANK YOU, kind SIR!!! (-- bowing to you kindly!)! YOU are SOOOO NOT a "dickwad", my friend-- you voiced your honest opinion/concerns/questions about the story/characters, and I feel compelled to answer/explain your respective comments in the most transparent fashion...which I hope I did to the best of your satisfaction! Zai, I sincerely appreciate your feedback....you make my day with "your opening lines", comments & suggested desired storylines-- YOU INSPIRE ME!!!! I hope that you see/read that I take your comments to heart!! Many THANKS, Much GRATITUDE & Ciao 4 NOW!!!:innocent: