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11/13/22, 3:57 AM
Oh damn!

11/13/22, 4:58 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I mean, literally! ;)
11/13/22, 2:20 AM
Great start, and quite well written. I would be interested to see where this one goes, and hope it finishes! Keep up the good work.
Archer19cm
11/12/22, 8:23 PM
This is fantastic for your first story. Your writing style, and the difference in the story premise, from the usual on this site, is intriguing and leaves me with a desire to see this journey unfold. Thank you for writing this delightful first episode of your series.

11/13/22, 12:00 AM
@Archer19cm Thanks a lot. In my free time I am writing a fantasy book with lgbt included, so my writing style is already set and hard to change. But because the book is in pg13 I cannot include any sex or to much nudes. But... I have soo many ideas, so I am very happy that I found some courage to write it here. Once it comes to r18 I am not sure how it would come out as it would be the first time writing scenes. If this small novel goes well, I already have "plot" prepared for a next one.
11/12/22, 11:44 PM
Nice, can't wait for more

11/12/22, 11:55 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it.
11/12/22, 11:30 PM
Well, for starters, this was very well written and the base was nicely done. I would love to see where this is going and how are you gonna play with the power he has. Btw, I also love some big sub small top so, since you are saying that at the end, it fills me want to read the next chapter even more! I hope he can also get the teachers or some dads in the process too~

11/12/22, 11:54 PM
@[Udems](/user/show/16223) Well, not gonna lie, if you read between the lines here, you can already see where he will go. I mean, no spoiler, but it's here. You just have to look closerπŸ˜… And thank you for a compliment, I wrote for fun and maybe one day I will release the whole novel that I wrote on a side. It still need a lot of editing, but writing is my passion and finally I got some courage to post one of my ideas on this site. if it goes well I have soo much more prepared.
11/12/22, 7:30 PM
I love this story so much. The night I found it I got feverish with lust and came so many times reading all the chapters. What I’d really love to see is a older bottom/young top situation with one of the dad/sons, so far we haven’t seen any daddy getting a good dicking from a studly son… I’d love to see Peter being a little cock slut for his sons Blake big dick ;)

11/12/22, 7:33 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) A cool reversal, tho I admit my tastes run the other way. Still, if Blake is gonna be Heaven’s hero, he’ll probably have to try to break his father’s corruption _somehow_…a little son on top action may be just the ticket.
11/12/22, 5:06 PM
Holy shit, this gets better and better. Not sure what I’d recommend going forward, though. Def more with what exactly the gay incest influencers are seeking. There was the cat, at one time, that might be fighting them? But most DEFINITELY would love more with the pastor fighting his notions of faith vs his attraction to his son. The chapter where he β€˜fucked’ his son by putting his cock in the underwear hole was intensely erotic. Would love more from him.

11/12/22, 6:28 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Angel Cat is still in the mix! Whether or not he wins is an open question. Now that the proverbial cherry has been burst, I will likely revisit the men and their sons so that we can see the anal sex between them. :) Peter and Blake will definitely be a part of that, since they’re such favorites. :D
Zai
11/11/22, 10:34 AM
Ahoy, Mateys! I write that because by the end of this day/night, Luthor's complex is gonna be awash in waves & waves of potent cum Waves! Upon! Waves! Of! Cum! πŸŒ€πŸ’§ Ain't no lol'ing about that fact! πŸš«πŸ˜‚ It's quite interesting that Lex somewhat easily acquiescenced to Python's demands. That is a very un-Luthor thing to do. Perhaps the tyrant is a bit mellowed out? Or playing a long game? With Lex' mind and personality? I'd venture with the latter. One thing I'd like to know, which I'm trying to recall if you ever revealed. Were we ever informed from were Python's genetic material came from? Clark|Superman? Cause that's downright incestuous, cum to think about it, lol, if that's the source. I keep having to break way from the story to look up all the kinky stuff you mention all these men dressing in. LOL! I'm excited to read that Rico will be checking in on the 3-some of Batman, Jimmy & BJ-El. It'll be hot if Rico gets in on their sexcapades. Especially if he gets to Dom The Batman. The Dark Knight could use some dark Latin cock down his throat and rammed up his Bat-pussy! Added bonus would be if Bruce is an ass virgin and is broken in during some heated interracial butt-fucking action!!! Thanks, SuperDude! πŸ˜πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‰πŸ€“πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜

11/11/22, 4:12 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANKS 4 ALL of your positive thoughts/input/feedback!! I appreciate that you question Lex's diplomacy & who knows how this will play out?!?! At this point, I'm executing a chapter at a time, so sometimes, I dunno myself until I get in front of my computer!! Rico's involvement will be an interesting & unexpected one, as for me, he's quietly developed into "a wildcard character"-- so I'm THRILLED that you "tapped into that tangent" & line of thinking! :smiling_imp: As for the source of Python's genetic material, you pose a VERY intriguing point, but it's NEVER actually been revealed in the story (YET)!:astonished: Again, I'm SO GRATEFUL to you & the other readers for your kind comments/input/thoughts/feedback-- You guys INSPIRE me to keep "the twisted kink" coming (or should I say, "CUMMING")?!?!?!? LMFAO!!!:rofl: Have an AMAZING weekend, my friend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/11/22, 4:26 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Greetings, Earthling! LOL! How about General Zod being the donor for Python? Lex could easily get a sample or many, with his connections. And that would bring Zod's revenge full circle. Finally sealing fate by having Python be the one to bring down the House of El, so to say. Yeah, I'm liking Rico. He's playing at a very dangerous game. But he's adding some Latin heat to an already hot story. I just hope the stuff gets to fuck the cum outta Batman. Here's hoping you have a splendid weekend, too, SuperDude! 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

11/11/22, 8:05 PM
@Zai In Part 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 11 the author reveals that Python is a "Krypto clone". This is Krypto : https://superman.fandom.com/wiki/Krypto :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

11/12/22, 2:09 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks for your note/comment! Just to clarify...when I refer to Python as a "Krypto clone"...I do mean Kryptonite...I shortened it simply for the purpose of "brevity" & NOT to refer to Superboi's adorable dog, Krypto, so my sincerest apologies for giving you that impression!! FYI, I've made various references to Python throughout this storyline as Krypto-clone or K-clone, simply to shorten the word-- but THANKS for your astute & sharp attention to detail!! ENJOY Your Weekend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/12/22, 2:19 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hey! I know that cannot be the Kyrpto who Python was cloned from. It's a dog, called Krypto from a 1955 comic book. I believe our esteemed author shortened Kryptonian to Krypto. Python is a clone of an actual humanoid Kryptonian male. Otherwise, SupaSlut has been plowed by a dog clone, talked to a dog clone, kissed a dog clone, etc, etc, etc. And Beastiality is so not my thing, lol; and I bet not the writers, either, lol! That's why Superboivsvillain and I have discussed who the actual Kryptonian donor was for Python. Superman? General Zod? Thanks for your input, though. What do you think of the kinky heat our fun loving writer is creating? Take care, friend!
Nov 11, 2022
11/11/22, 5:25 PM
I'm so invested and love their dynamic. Hopefully Darnell gets to fuck Jayden, but I wouldn't mind Jayden making Darnell his complete bitch devoted to his cock and cum. Looking forward to more! Keep up the great work.
Zai
11/11/22, 6:08 AM
Crickey! Hot Damn! My jaws, throat & backdoor are figuratively hurting in sympathetic pain for SuperBitchPup! Yowser! Ouch! *Cue sad violin music... lol, lol, lol...* 🎻 Seriously, though? It's a good thing Clark|Superman is Kryptonian. Because I'm left wondering how any human male, no matter his fitness level, could take all those huge cocks and abuse without just expiring right there & then, huh?! Methinks it might be a good idea to for Lex to give the once asexual Kryptonian some exposure to yellow sun light. Be it created rays or the actual Sun. Help to heal up the stud's body to showroom new, lol; tighten up that SupaCunt to virgin-like tightness. 🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝 Of course, Lex will be certain to have escorts there, to keep reminding the once formidable superhero about his new life; being the owned, bitched property of his Master(s). Maybe dosing him with a sweet treat infused with those special drugs. Now that, hmmm πŸ€”, once virgin to gay sex, hmmmm πŸ™„, yeahhhhh, right πŸ˜‰, Batman|Bruce has DP-d the dank vault of SupaSlut, but not been able to cum. I'm wondering what he, Jimmy, and BJ-El are going to do? What, with all three having had to vacate the arena AND SupaPup's steamy holes; just what will these three men do, huh??? Take their raging stiffies and commence into a good old fashion 3-way? If so, who'll be the spit-roast-ee, lol? Will the two younger studs turn the tables on the senior trainer, Bruce, and they become the trainers? Taking the Bat's mouth and ass-cunt out for a joyride? Begin Batman's journey into Bitch-hood? I'm surprised at Lex' diplomatic solution with Python! I smell a rat πŸ€, as in Luthor might be planning on re-training Python in the ways of the slave. Hmmmmmm... ... ... ❓❓❓ Ciao, SuperDude!

11/11/22, 3:56 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANK YOU 4 your respective positive thoughts/comments-- (Chuckling)...you've given me a LOT to chew on!! It's once again ASTUTE of you to smell a rat in Luthor & ALL will eventually be revealed in the subsequent chapters!:smiling_imp: Bruce will be returning soon enough (with the 2 bois) & they will collectively have to "field an unexpected curveball"!! That's ALL I can share at this time...but I'm SO glad you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline!! ENJOY your day (& your weekend)!!:innocent:

Anonymous
11/11/22, 4:10 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hello, SuperDude! Yes, coitus Interuptous for our four sex fiends was a hoot! 4 boners, loaded balls, and no shots fired! We all know how that feels, correct? LOL! Luthor? I'll be truthful, I always like some loving feels and romance, so I was hoping the hung hunk would eventually realize he has some special πŸ’– for Superman. Of course the studly, pretty boi hero will always belong to Lex; but there's good times ahead, too! Oh yes!!! I'm in the process of publishing my first work here. I guess it goes through some review process or what? I titled it "The Croc and His Bat." It's all about Killer Croc, aka Waylon Jones bitching Batman. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸŠπŸŠπŸŠπŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…

11/11/22, 5:04 PM
Hi Anonymous!! Thanks 4 your positive comments/feedback!! I'm so appreciative 4 your/the other readers' thoughts/ideas/insight-- it continues to feed the "inner kinky windmills of my mind":smiling_imp: And don't worry-- I won't leave "the 4 sex fiends" HANGIN 4 long:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: As for Luthor, in this particular storyline, I characterize him like "a devilish onion", with ever-evolving layers to be "peeled back" & strategically revealed, so I hope you thoroughly ENJOY how his "ongoing villanous, yet seductive growth" will continue!!:smirk_cat: I will DEF keep an "eagle eye" out for your story featuring Killer Croc & the BATMAN-- sounds HOTTT!!:fire: and BTW, yes, the Spiral review staff is EXCELLENT about executing the process as quickly as possible, but from what I understand, they have been recently "bogged down" with a "literary tidal wave" of stories, so it might take a bit longer, so be patient (I'm not the most patient person, so it's an "personal growth exercise" for me, LOL!)!!! Again, THANKS 4 the positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sunglasses: