Recent Comments

12/3/22, 9:13 PM
I loved the original JPS, and this is a really nice reboot. Super hot, and it really hits a number of my kink buttons perfectly! One comment with your writing, sometimes it’s a little unclear. Like, does he have carpet in his bathroom, or did he head back to his bedroom? Did he have two or three fingers in his ass when Sammy found him? A little more attention to the details will help readers like me stay in the story and not get distracted trying to copy-edit on the fly 😅

12/3/22, 9:57 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Very fair. I do have a few proofreaders who take care of things for me, but sometimes things fall through the cracks.
Sebastián Apollo
12/3/22, 5:38 AM
Charlie, you have no idea how much of a genuine joy it is to see the next chapter of Luke's adventure get uploaded! I actually originally starting following you on Literotica, then I found you on Twitter, and that led me to GayKinkyStories, so I suppose I owe you thanks for introducing me to such a great site and offering of erotica. Greatly written, balancing both comedic tones and sexiness. Luke's almost-aloofness is both adorable, endearing, and his casual sluttiness about the entire ordeal is hot as hell. Watching a young baseball stud slowly degrade himself into a living self-lubing fleshlight has only brought the perviest of smiles to my face! Sammy is a sweetheart, and Mark was a fun ride! Keep up the good work!

12/3/22, 9:56 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much! I'm a big fan of your writing too!! And I'm honored you discovered this site through me :) I'm glad you are liking the non-porn elements too, that always makes me happy to hear.
12/3/22, 5:42 AM
Wow. I think I just discovered a kink for men with strong moral principles. I'm crushing hard for coach after this and he didn't even have to take his clothes off lol. Great chapter, happy to see some new characters in the doctor and the nurse :)

12/3/22, 9:55 PM
@[AdibHass](/user/show/910212) Well there's only so long a man of fine moral character like Coach can resist the sultry charms of Luke's ass :)
12/3/22, 12:25 PM
This story continues to be outstanding.

12/3/22, 3:15 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hi Darby!! So GR8 2 hear from you & THANK YOU 4 your positive comment!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'm THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline...:sparkler: I'm doing my BEST 2 keep it interesting/evolving with AS MANY curveballs/twists & turns that I can create!:smiling_imp: Again, SO GR8FUL for your continued interest & ENJOY your Weekend!:sun_with_face:
12/2/22, 4:42 AM
A great series full of the normal starts and stops of developing of self and revelations of sexuality. These guys are developing well. At 18 I was still quietly j/o in my room while hating myself for it. These guys are very healthy mentally and in terms of self-knowledge.

12/3/22, 2:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, if they were real I'd be really happy for them. It's sort of the smooth adolescence I didn't get to have and I enjoyed writing that kind of coming of age in this story. Glad you enjoyed!
12/3/22, 10:21 AM
Oooooooooh,now THAT is a damn fine turn of events
12/3/22, 7:58 AM
Só deliciously perverted and hypnotic. The deceiving element in your stories is always sublime. Fantastic job.

12/3/22, 9:20 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Hurrah. Love your work, particularly the story Toxique - an outstanding example of the corruption of innocence going through the stages of oblivion, resistance, acceptance and enthusiasm until the central character becomes complicit in their own downfall, while making it clear that the experience is at every step enjoyable. Hope you continue to write at your current pace as I hang on every new story you publish!
12/2/22, 8:12 PM
Since everyone's life is different so is every journey of discovery of sexuality. It's nice to just see a character figure things out rather than completely panic at the growing realization of the truth.
12/1/22, 11:37 PM
It's very difficult to deal with faith/religion and being gay. Having struggled with this myself I like your approach. The slow character development is good. It's not like Isaac is instantly gay. Very true to life!

12/2/22, 2:55 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, this was a serious struggle for me, too, and I wanted to portray some of those major steps that had to happen. Few of the characters in this story are fully as *devout* as I imagine you or I were—there’s a little bit more room for their growth, and I’m following the cues of the movie this is inspired by in giving them a sort of… looser or more flexible stance. At the same time I didn’t want them to seem absolutely flippant. It’s not perfect and a longer story might have done the struggle more justice, but I’m glad there’s still some good stuff here that you found relatable!
Zai
12/1/22, 6:24 AM
*Dude*. *SUPERDUDE*! I got some catching up on your chapters! I've been hella busy and I plan on gett'in to reading all about who's gett'in butt-reamed and dick-sucked, etc, ASAP! So noooooooo, I've not fallen off the 👨‍🚀 of the 🌏... face of the Earth, Lol! Later, Oh Spa Luver! *Cum Facials, anyone*? 😀😁😂🤣🌍🌎🌏

12/1/22, 4:43 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) CIAO ZAI!! SO GR8 2 hear from U!!:sparkler: I have 2 admit not hearing from you this week had me "somewhat concerned" (I missed ya, Dude!), but I know that LIFE sometimes gets in the way which detracts us from our "personal pleasures":smiling_imp: Hope you're ENJOYING catchin-up on the various Chapters....hit me up with your astute comments/feedback...Lookin fwd 2 it!:monocle_face: Have a SUPA Day, my friend!:innocent:

Zai
12/2/22, 5:22 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hujambo, SuperDude! Yup, I'm not locked as of right now, but I'm so damn loaded you'll probably hear my roar of release the 5000+ kilometers from my home to Miami, lol! 👅👅👅 Later, Alligator!

12/2/22, 2:04 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) LMAO!!! C&C ZAI!! Dying of laughter at the thought of being able to "hear your ROAR of release" from your home to mine...:rofl: but, it's also actually kinda HOTTT!!!:smiling_imp: (now, U have me imagining "the shooting part" of the release, too!:sweat_drops: -- you know how I get about cumshowers!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain:) Happy TGIF, my friend-- Hope your Friday is a Productive one!:innocent: