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Zai
11/14/22, 11:04 PM
My only excuse, SuperLex *Lol* is I had an extremely busy weeks end, and my brain was nowhere near 50% synaptic functioning, lol, concerning writing this comment and realizing you switched up Rico's Robin costume colourations. No matter... that was so damn hπŸ”₯t! Batman enthralled with his new master's (I'm hopeful it becomes permanent, instead of temporary. Because more fantasy thoughts of Bruce|Batman becoming Rico's or some Gotham villains bitch forever is just too enticing) humongous & tasty cock was very exciting to read! *It'd be awesome if Luthor ended up 'selling' a completely cunted Batman to Riddler or Joker or Penguin, etc, and said Rogue takes his prize bitch back to Gotham for years of kinky fun & games. Of course that's a whole other story, huh?* I thought your threeway boning SPA session was too, too much in best ways! My opinion is Python got the most worked. He had to service HIS MASTER and HIS SLAVE simultaneously. YES, SupaSlutSlave was a busy little beaver, too, what with his male beaver getting eaten and fucked, and his sucking and licking as well, but Python was the epicenter of carnal cunting! I'm holding off on the OFFICIAL COMPLETE BITCHING of the ONCE GREAT & MIGHTY BATMAN until tonight. I'm utterly certain it'll be a most delicious treat and also, I want to be prepared for any and all... ... ... I want to be couth here... ummmm... emissions that'll be sure to occur. *absolutely filthy LOL* πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘… πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§πŸ’§

11/15/22, 2:19 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! NO excuses necessary-- I totally understand when LIFE gets in the way of JOY & PLEASURE (esp. the EXTRAcurricular!)!!!:smiling_imp: Glad you're ENJOYING Rico "bitching out the BAT" (BTW...I REALLY enjoyed writing these 2 chapters back-2-back!) as well as LEX bitching out PYTHON & SUPASLUT (I purposely made Python endure "a more significant working over" than Supes, but I also hope that it was a bit of "surprise/sentimental element" that Lex allowed himself 2 again be "somewhat vulnerable" with Python, so they could have that "tender moment" near the end of the chapter.... AND...you're right, but that whole BATMAN suggested storyline would need to "evolve" into a WHOLE NEW STORY...which U may have inspired! Right now, I'm tweaking/polishing Chapter/Part 20, which is another selection of "the 3 Doors" from Luthor's Funhouse/What's Your Pleasure? scenario that I was inspired to "riff off" of a couple of media/musical pieces, which will hopefully "payoff" in a MAJOR way....I don't want to "tip my hand" too much & give anything away-- ENJOY BATMAN's BITCHING tonight & I hope it allows you to ENJOY "a restful night of sleep"!! THANKS again 4 the positivity & encouragement---Be well, my friend!!:innocent:
Zai
11/14/22, 10:33 PM
Hey, SuperDude! Your story is never stale. You keep the dynamics fresh, fun, and fetish filled! Are you Lex Luthor come AND cum to life? You've quite the diabolical streak running throughout you, lol. Perhaps I need to change your nickname to SuperLex, ehh??? Hope your day is going well, SuperLex, aka SuperDude! πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜…πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜

11/15/22, 2:06 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU 4 the continued positivity & insights-- glad you feel that dynamics of the storyline continue to be FRESH/FUN/FETISH-filled (I couldn't have said it BETTER myself, which is why I'm directly quoting YOU, Sir!!)-- it's also HYSTERICAL that you're under the impression that I'm the Lex character...I'm actually an "amalgamation" of both Lex & Supes, in that I enjoy living precariously through both of their "twisted kinky personalities", i.e., SuperAlphaTop & Super PowerBttm....LMAO :smiling_imp: My day JUST got BETTER reading this comment...Hope you thoroughly ENJOY the "bitching out" of BATMAN later tonight with some "serious emissions"!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Sleep well, my friend!:innocent:
Lampshade15
11/14/22, 8:07 PM
Jesus, this chapter was amazing! Love the daddy stuff and the suit fuck with Drew also being naked. Wouldn't mind seeing Jiang fuck both Lyle and Drew to show them their rightful place in the household.
11/14/22, 7:48 PM
Of course the families should be allowed to take their love to the next level but perhaps the same end resultat could be achieved without another round of house calls. I fear it would be diminishing returns. I also thought you were holding out on the buttsex because Peter and Blake should have the honour of being the first to take that step.
11/12/22, 4:25 PM
So, when I envisioned this story months and months ago, the plot of it came to me up to this exact point. Writing is slow. But, that being said, I haven't yet put the thought into what the plot will do from here. I'll probably decide in the next little bit how I want things to go, but if you're the sort who has a wish for this series, now's the time to let it be heard! I can't promise I'll take any suggestions, but who knows? Maybe something you say will influence the lives of Tanner's growing flock. Thanks for reading!

11/13/22, 11:48 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) personally I love when guys get into thongs so if one of the sub/btm guys ends up with a bit of a feminization bend to it that might be hot. Would be nice to see some of the other progress further too like the son who gets bound by his daddy (maybe it progresses to chastity a bit or just moves to fucking? So far I think the dad just plays with his hole). Maybe it's like that dad's new addiction becomes restraining and controlling the son when at home (could also see it become like a forced pup play sort of thing). But it's your story and think your work is so consistently amazing!

11/14/22, 4:20 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Bondage isn't really my thing but I do like it on its way to other things that are. Certainly there's room here to play around with that--so many different possibilities with all these handsome fathers and sons running around.

11/14/22, 6:31 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) On the topic of Bondage maybe Peter could suggest a role playing exercise in the Sacred Circle reenacting the story of Abraham and Isaac as an excuse to tie his son down while the rest of the group watches.
11/13/22, 2:40 AM
Well, the predictable end would be either Tanner's triumph (most predictable) or the opposite - Tanner's plan, whatever it is, is foiled by Blake and the orange cat (who seemed pretty lame so far, so it would require a lot of work). I wouldn't go either way. My end would be Tanner **mostly** getting his way, but getting carried away and losing control of his flock to Pastor Pete. I've noticed that Tanner kept himself mostly out of the action so far, with the exception of one kiss. Maybe there's a good reason for that that's related to his powers. Tanner could end as Pete and Blake's third/plaything. I do enjoy seeing arrogant smug characters fall on their faces, and it wouldn't be such a bad fate for him. Just not the one he wanted as he'd no longer be in control. Pastor Pete would continue taking care of his community.. only in quite a different fashion.

11/13/22, 4:57 AM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I also like it when no one gets exactly what they’re aiming for. Peter as the leader of the group post-Tanner would leave the door open for a sequel…or a later series chronicling another group Tanner interacts with. Hmm…thanks for the suggestion!

11/13/22, 7:45 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I actually have a more detailed scenario in mind if that interests you. I don't want to write it here because a. it's too long b. it may spoil the end and c. maybe you don't want more than a general idea. It's up to you. I could DM to you if you want.

11/13/22, 3:47 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I second this. It would be sweet, sweet irony if Peter ends up being so perverted that even Tanner ends up at his mercy. The end goal should be Peter back in charge of his community - only with a rather different mindset for all involved :-)

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I love talking and brainstorming things, as long as you're comfy if I choose to say: "You have a great idea that I cannot write because of my own thoughts about this piece, but I welcome fan fiction of this universe if you want to write it!" DMs always open to charming dudes, and I'm interested in your thoughts on the shape of this going forward. :)

11/14/22, 5:53 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) But of course. Your story, your end.
11/14/22, 2:10 AM
A series that continues to arouse you further each time, upping the ante of what's to come. Can't wait to see where it goes, but I do hope Tanner gets away with it. I hope we get to see the next meeting of the group and have Tanner have the guys catch up, share, and enjoy themselves. Blake and Peter need an encore, no doubt. Thank you for another amazing story, can't wait to see what's next.

11/14/22, 4:21 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thanks, Essex! I'm glad that the ante is going upward--that's the direction I always hope for. I can't help feeling a little bad for Drew, though--maybe the cat will come in and give him some loving sex too? Not sure how but it's a possibility. Hmmm...
11/13/22, 6:59 PM
Loved that Lyle was obedient to Jiang.... Would love to see some bottom daddy action!

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) I think Lyle will be, at very least. Certainly Jiang seems to enjoy being "on top", so to speak.
11/13/22, 3:41 PM
This is without a doubt the best story on this site for quite some time. Thank you so much S.Q Neemie. I would like a new meeting in the Sacred Circle so Tanner can distribute some more perverted wisdom to the group. This would also be a great way to showcase the change in Peter. I can imagine him being more active in his support of Tanners ideas rather than trying to oppose them. Maybe even spread some of his own ideas with Tanners help. From the very start of this story I have seen the Sacred Circle as the perfect setup for a circle jerk. The guys have already openly talked about masturbation. How much more do they have to be pushed before they actually do it right there in the circle? As you must be aware of by now, Peter is by far my favorite. We last saw him planning more hidden cameras. Hopefully his new online friends gets to watch Blake naked again soon. The next step must be to not only spy on naked Blake but naked AND HARD Blake. Would Peter be able to orchestrate events so that his son is tricked into jerking off either in the shower or in his room. I am sure Peters friends online would enjoy that.

11/14/22, 4:06 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thanks! I really appreciate how willing you are to talk about how the different chapters "grab" you, so to speak. We'll definitely return to the Sacred Circle soon, now that all the guys have had their...ahem...first experiences...
Zai
11/14/22, 8:22 AM
YES! Oh, oh, oh, yes!!! Funhouse time! And this wasn't like any funhouse I've ever been to. No way! This was an adult, men's only funhouse where pleasure is the game and slavery is its name. πŸŽͺπŸ˜œπŸ‘… 3 doors! Brilliant! πŸ’‘ Each door, different desires! Very Brilliant! πŸ’‘πŸ’‘ Lex' diabolical use of the term SPA, UTTERELY BRILLIANT! πŸ’‘πŸ’‘πŸ’‘ SPA = Special Place 4 Assfucking! πŸ‘πŸ₯• And did Luthor work over his 2 slaves or what? So far? 😲 Damn fucking right, he did! πŸ™„ As for El Rico, a new master to be?!?! 😍 I cannot wait to read just what those bitchpills and drinks do to thise 3 maricons, huh? πŸ’ŠπŸΉπŸ‘… Nice chapter, SuperDude, nice chapter! P.S. I'm the one who wrote the Croc and His Bat! Sometimes the site drops my name and leaves a blank. Huh?

11/14/22, 2:54 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU, kind Sir (& Anonymous!) for your positive comments-- SO HAPPY You Enjoyed this chapter!! LOVE your verbage assigned to SPA...LMFAO!!:rofl: Chapter 19 is solely devoted to the "bitching out" of BATMAN by Rico, but Jimmy & Bizarroboi are used & cuckolded as well!!:smiling_imp: I will have Luthor/Python/Supes return to another one of the "What's Your Pleasure?" rooms in Chapter 20...so STAY tuned!!:zany_face: BTW....DEF lookin fwd 2 reading "the Croc & his BAT"!! Appreciate the :heartpulse: & SUPA-GR8ful that you're still vibying the storyline!! Have a PRODUCTIVE day!:innocent: