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Zai
11/15/22, 6:12 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh... it just clicked in my mind. Lex is playing Let's Make a Deal! I don't know if you were inspired by the show, but the three doors just made me think of that. I've only scene parts of the game show, but your three doors are way better. No zonks and definitely cream filled surprises are behind each door. ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿšช Now I'm excited about those doors. If I recall, isn't one of them that SuperDuperSupaSlut picks which Master he wants to play with; hermano y hermano? He'd better pick Lex? ??? ??? ??? YES! If your Muse tempts you and time permits AND you truly want to do a Batman series, I'm on board for sure! I tell you, I'd love a classic comic look Riddler, with muscles and good looks under skintight spandex, a domino mask and super, super tight briefs. Yum! And of course Batsy in his own skintight, muscle hugging bodysuit and his sexy as fuck briefs, etc. C & C, SuperDude! *C & C = Ciao & Cheers ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿค“๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜

11/15/22, 7:59 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) HAHA ZAI!! To be honest, the "3-Door concept" wasn't intentional "Let's Make A Deal"...but perhaps subconsciously it was (as I did watch it back inna day!)-- Nevertheless, Chapter 20, is "a stunning revelation" to Superman that NOT ALL of the doors are "PRIZES" for him (so to speak)!!:smiling_imp: Regarding the BATMAN story...YESSS!! I also really am into a classicly costumed (hung & muscular) RIDDLER, as well as a maniacal JOKER (who does ALL sorts of twisted stuff!)... Keep those ideas CUMMING!!:zany_face: Again, THANKS 4 the :heartpulse: , sincere positive comments -- C&C, kind SIR!!:innocent:
Zai
11/15/22, 8:24 AM
*HOLY BUTTFUCKED, BATMAN!* *HOLY BITCHING, BATMAN!* *HOLY ANAL INVASION, BATMAN!* *HOLY COCKSUCKING, BATMAN!* *HOLY DEEP-THROATING, BATMAN!* *HOLY ENSLAVEMENT, BATMAN!* *HOLY CUNTING, BATMAN!* *HOLY BITCHING BATMAN!* &... *HOLY... ยฟDEVIRGINIZING?, BATMAN!* #BECAUSE I STILL DONT KNOW IF THE BAT WAS AN ANAL AND/OR ORAL VIRGIN! So, do spill the beans, SuperLexDude!# I had to write those Robin, the Boy Wonder styled exclamations to open with for 2 reasons. It fit the feel of this extremely steamy hot chapter and that huge cocked Rico used his slutty stripper Robin costume to be more tempting in order to aide his bitching of the Bat! Man! So help me, I truly wanted to be in Batman's place in some ways! That oral servicing he performed on his new master! That taking of his muscled, round superhero ass by his new master! The overall feeling of right that Bruce felt when the absolute cunting began until it ended with *his* once bitchy bois Jimmy & BJ-El watching in awe! Batman|Bruce WAS BORN to become a bitch! He is a very brave, intelligent crusader for making Gotham and beyond safer. I applaude that, plus he does many charitable acts & donations. However, he does run around wearing THAT COSTUME! Showcasing the body of a Greek God, and anyone can tell how handsomely beautiful the Man is under the cowl. So with my (astute) logic, a man like Bruce fighting crime as Batman dressed like a whore showing off his *ass*ets and bulge in *those* skimpy briefs??? Well, he was bound to be, well, bound by someone and something that caught him and would begin to train him up properly!!! So, huge KUDOS to Lex and Rico for getting the bitch ball rolling. As I've stated before, I just know Lex wanted Bruce|Batman to be bitched like Superman, so he cleverly & secretly planned for Rico to get a hold of the bitching pills, etc. Perhaps Lex had Hugo add some extra commands to Bruce when he was hypnotising him? Being led down the path of Bitchdom? And as I wrote earlier, I like that Jimmy & BJ-El watched their once formidable trainer be brought down to their level... If not lower, lol. I must inform you, it was funny (and a bit gross, LOL) that Rico made the younger bitchPill'd *lol* bois lick his cock clean of his cock snot & Bruce's, errr, remains, and then do a semi-douche of the newly baptized BatSlut-Cunt! That was funny as Hell, SuperLexDude! Long live *perra murciรจlago*, aka Bat Bitch! Forever may his mouth and ass be the receiver of huge, tasty, MASTER-FUL cocks! Thanks a whole cum-load, SuperDude! You Rock! Batman is my fave superhero and you went beyond in realising a new fave bottom bitch sub Caped Crusader fantasy for me. Sleep well, my new friend! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘… ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“ Oh... I've gone back and rated each chapter. Please note, my marks for Romance weren't as high as the others, since there is no outright romantic interludes... As of yet. I hope that's okay. Otherwise, you got the highest ratings for all other categories. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

11/15/22, 7:51 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) CIAO & WOW, ZAI!!! I'm blown away that this chapter "did it" 4 U (in obviously, more ways than ONE...LMAO!!):rofl: As usual, you bring up many "salient points" (which I will eventually address & answer!)...but ONE specific item I can address... 1) You can be 150% CERTAIN that Bruce was "sufficiently douched" prior to his "bitching" by RICO (it's simply not addressed), but PLEASE do NOT be "grossed out" in ANY way by that "additional bitching" that Rico did to both Jimmy & Bizarroboi...it was 99% cum/lube I assure YOU!! :smiling_imp: But, I'm glad you ENJOYED that whole "surprise scene stealer" in whatever form you chose to process it...it was truly meant to indicate HOW "bitched out" the bois were at that point in the scene....:zany_face: I know you MUST be pretty happy with this chapter with ALL the emojis that you included in your positive comments/feedback:heart_eyes: THANK YOU for going back & rating the respective chapters-- SO GRATEFUL & appreciative for the EXTRA time/diligence that must have taken!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Hope YOU enjoy the concept of Chapter 20 (it took LONGER than ALL the others, so I hope the time & dedication to the idea pays off with you/the other readers)!!:innocent:
11/15/22, 2:33 PM
This is the BEST story I have read. The diabolical nature is kinda delicious. I just love it. THANK YOU! I am a big fan
11/15/22, 7:02 AM
I really enjoy the dynamic Marcus and Stanley have going on. And I'm very curious as to what developments happen with Rex, could he be Stanley's beta or alpha?
11/15/22, 6:13 AM
This is very hot indeed! I can't wait to see what new kinks might be incorporated into Stanley's adventure. I was particularly excited with the cock cage, seeing it's not just a one-off thing with Tony. I'm very excited for the next part!
Zai
11/14/22, 11:04 PM
My only excuse, SuperLex *Lol* is I had an extremely busy weeks end, and my brain was nowhere near 50% synaptic functioning, lol, concerning writing this comment and realizing you switched up Rico's Robin costume colourations. No matter... that was so damn h๐Ÿ”ฅt! Batman enthralled with his new master's (I'm hopeful it becomes permanent, instead of temporary. Because more fantasy thoughts of Bruce|Batman becoming Rico's or some Gotham villains bitch forever is just too enticing) humongous & tasty cock was very exciting to read! *It'd be awesome if Luthor ended up 'selling' a completely cunted Batman to Riddler or Joker or Penguin, etc, and said Rogue takes his prize bitch back to Gotham for years of kinky fun & games. Of course that's a whole other story, huh?* I thought your threeway boning SPA session was too, too much in best ways! My opinion is Python got the most worked. He had to service HIS MASTER and HIS SLAVE simultaneously. YES, SupaSlutSlave was a busy little beaver, too, what with his male beaver getting eaten and fucked, and his sucking and licking as well, but Python was the epicenter of carnal cunting! I'm holding off on the OFFICIAL COMPLETE BITCHING of the ONCE GREAT & MIGHTY BATMAN until tonight. I'm utterly certain it'll be a most delicious treat and also, I want to be prepared for any and all... ... ... I want to be couth here... ummmm... emissions that'll be sure to occur. *absolutely filthy LOL* ๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘…๐Ÿ‘… ๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ง

11/15/22, 2:19 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! NO excuses necessary-- I totally understand when LIFE gets in the way of JOY & PLEASURE (esp. the EXTRAcurricular!)!!!:smiling_imp: Glad you're ENJOYING Rico "bitching out the BAT" (BTW...I REALLY enjoyed writing these 2 chapters back-2-back!) as well as LEX bitching out PYTHON & SUPASLUT (I purposely made Python endure "a more significant working over" than Supes, but I also hope that it was a bit of "surprise/sentimental element" that Lex allowed himself 2 again be "somewhat vulnerable" with Python, so they could have that "tender moment" near the end of the chapter.... AND...you're right, but that whole BATMAN suggested storyline would need to "evolve" into a WHOLE NEW STORY...which U may have inspired! Right now, I'm tweaking/polishing Chapter/Part 20, which is another selection of "the 3 Doors" from Luthor's Funhouse/What's Your Pleasure? scenario that I was inspired to "riff off" of a couple of media/musical pieces, which will hopefully "payoff" in a MAJOR way....I don't want to "tip my hand" too much & give anything away-- ENJOY BATMAN's BITCHING tonight & I hope it allows you to ENJOY "a restful night of sleep"!! THANKS again 4 the positivity & encouragement---Be well, my friend!!:innocent:
Zai
11/14/22, 10:33 PM
Hey, SuperDude! Your story is never stale. You keep the dynamics fresh, fun, and fetish filled! Are you Lex Luthor come AND cum to life? You've quite the diabolical streak running throughout you, lol. Perhaps I need to change your nickname to SuperLex, ehh??? Hope your day is going well, SuperLex, aka SuperDude! ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜

11/15/22, 2:06 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU 4 the continued positivity & insights-- glad you feel that dynamics of the storyline continue to be FRESH/FUN/FETISH-filled (I couldn't have said it BETTER myself, which is why I'm directly quoting YOU, Sir!!)-- it's also HYSTERICAL that you're under the impression that I'm the Lex character...I'm actually an "amalgamation" of both Lex & Supes, in that I enjoy living precariously through both of their "twisted kinky personalities", i.e., SuperAlphaTop & Super PowerBttm....LMAO :smiling_imp: My day JUST got BETTER reading this comment...Hope you thoroughly ENJOY the "bitching out" of BATMAN later tonight with some "serious emissions"!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Sleep well, my friend!:innocent:
Lampshade15
11/14/22, 8:07 PM
Jesus, this chapter was amazing! Love the daddy stuff and the suit fuck with Drew also being naked. Wouldn't mind seeing Jiang fuck both Lyle and Drew to show them their rightful place in the household.
11/14/22, 7:48 PM
Of course the families should be allowed to take their love to the next level but perhaps the same end resultat could be achieved without another round of house calls. I fear it would be diminishing returns. I also thought you were holding out on the buttsex because Peter and Blake should have the honour of being the first to take that step.
11/12/22, 4:25 PM
So, when I envisioned this story months and months ago, the plot of it came to me up to this exact point. Writing is slow. But, that being said, I haven't yet put the thought into what the plot will do from here. I'll probably decide in the next little bit how I want things to go, but if you're the sort who has a wish for this series, now's the time to let it be heard! I can't promise I'll take any suggestions, but who knows? Maybe something you say will influence the lives of Tanner's growing flock. Thanks for reading!

11/13/22, 11:48 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) personally I love when guys get into thongs so if one of the sub/btm guys ends up with a bit of a feminization bend to it that might be hot. Would be nice to see some of the other progress further too like the son who gets bound by his daddy (maybe it progresses to chastity a bit or just moves to fucking? So far I think the dad just plays with his hole). Maybe it's like that dad's new addiction becomes restraining and controlling the son when at home (could also see it become like a forced pup play sort of thing). But it's your story and think your work is so consistently amazing!

11/14/22, 4:20 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Bondage isn't really my thing but I do like it on its way to other things that are. Certainly there's room here to play around with that--so many different possibilities with all these handsome fathers and sons running around.

11/14/22, 6:31 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) On the topic of Bondage maybe Peter could suggest a role playing exercise in the Sacred Circle reenacting the story of Abraham and Isaac as an excuse to tie his son down while the rest of the group watches.