Recent Comments

11/17/22, 12:57 PM
I love these boys, their dynamic, and this story. Couldn’t be more charmed. Can’t wait to see Bookerace (Jooker?) complete this dance of Greek magic and himbofucking.

11/17/22, 4:22 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) The dancing will get more dithyrambic in the next chapter, if you know what I mean.
11/17/22, 1:25 AM
This is off to a really fun start and I'm looking forward to seeing what (or who) comes next! I love the lore of this story so far.

11/17/22, 4:15 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks! I keep trying to write quick porn without plot and failing. :sweat_smile:

11/17/22, 4:21 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) I know this struggle and share it! Anyway, I love erotica with lore and plot 💖
11/17/22, 5:01 AM
This is such a good story. I really loved the pacing and the changes that took place. The teasing too, all the potential sexual situations that don't quite eventuate. Truly tantalizing and evil. But then, if the urges and activity results in powerful for a spell it's best not to rush such things. I'm very excited to see where it goes.

11/17/22, 4:19 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks! I promise this isn't some ironic Hades punishment in the vein of Tantalus. There will be payoff!
11/17/22, 3:17 AM
First, very hot opening I'm really excited to see where these characters are going. Second, thanks to this fic I now know what callipygian means lmao

11/17/22, 4:15 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) No reason smut can't be educational :wink:.
11/16/22, 8:43 PM
You’re the best writer of himbo, jock stories. I love your writing so fucking much. This is already a new favorite, it’s so hot!!! Can’t wait for more

11/17/22, 4:02 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thanks! I've kind of stumbled into it. Not what I ever thought I'd be writing about if I ever wrote a GSS story.
11/16/22, 4:37 PM
Tantalizing AND intriguing. Oh this is going to be good!

11/17/22, 4:00 PM
@[wbmttt](/user/show/911981) Thanks! I'm looking forward to telling this story.
11/16/22, 3:40 PM
love it

11/17/22, 3:59 PM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) Thanks!
11/17/22, 5:16 AM
The side effects -- just effects? -- of the medication overwhelming them with desire and wanting to be fucked by Bowen was really hot. The ignoring of any thoughts relating to taboo and just enjoying each other was great. You really conveyed the intensity of the desires well too. The facility as a whole also felt good. While the other characters haven't had a lot to do they feel like they have their own backgrounds and stories and aren't just there for plot but that they are all friends now.

11/17/22, 1:25 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) I'm glad you liked it! I really wanted to bring home that it was more than just a "these guys are submissive and breedable now," so I'm glad that came through! I've got maybe one or two stories in mind for this but made it a community series because the setting really leapt off the page once I was looking at it.
Zai
11/16/22, 2:40 AM
Yay! We're vibing again! *does that read as if we're actually using vibrators? Lol, lol* Stud Riddler! A+! Wiley Wonka Joker? A+! Albeit I must do an addendum on Joker per my taste. He too has muscle, lean but still strong, way strong. And no facial scars. The canon smile scar is eerie. Plus, I love handsome Joker in comics and fan art. As you seem to prefer, I love bottom, sub superheroes. Period! No matter who a superhero is paired with or more *lascivious grin*, they always need to be taking; unless giving, as in head, lol! I'm really excited for chapter 20! What hot and perverse acts will SupaBitchedSlave be subjected to? Yay! C & C, Dude! 😈👿😈👿👿😈👿😈👿

11/16/22, 3:31 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! By now, Chapter 20 has already been revealed to you & I'm SO glad that you're diggin it! Chapter 21 will have a couple of "addt'l curveballs" (served up by Lex) that Supes (& Python) will have to field to move forward in their Master/Slave (romantic) relationship!...STAY TUNED!!:smiling_imp:
Zai
11/16/22, 2:23 AM
LMAO! SuperLexDude! How are you? Your reply to my comment is funny and delightful! I'll never really like the idea of sucking (a) dick after it's been up butt; be it my anal folds or some other person's, lol - tears streaming down my face. 😂 Nor do I relish the notion of ever eating some tossed salad dressing from any rectal cavity, lol - Now I can't see with my hyena laughter/tears. 🤣 BUT-T, I actually adore how you (try to) placate me with the douching idea, lol, lol, lol - I'm dying here! 😶 You're a riot, Dude! Please don't take umbrage with my teasing... I'm just enjoying our rapport. It comes so easy, as if we've been pals for years. 😉 You're one awesomely cool dude, SuperLex! 😎 And I appreciate you (hopefully) don't think I'm ever being critical of any plot device you use. I feel at ease communicating with you. Even though the aforementioned kinks are not my thing, they totally fit into the flow and themes of the chapter. Rico ordering those two 'in the process of their own newest bitching process' to perform a clean-up on aisle *Long Dong Schlong* was clever. Very, very clever, indeed. Those acts prove how in absolute control Rico was over those junior bitched bois. That was a key point made... that needed to be made. You wrote that so well that the prime message/essence, *aside from Rico's spunk, lol*, of the chapter cums across... Rico is a top-notch master, manipulator and one kinky motha-fucha! *Buddy, you ever gonna reveal Batman's status pre-Master Rico? Was that Bat-pussy showroom new, or did the big, bad Bat-twat have some mileage on/in it?* ❓L!O!L! I always want you to know, I honestly appreciate the time, effort and talent you put in each chapter. It's a lot of work, I know! Thank you, thank you, thank you. If my sense of humour via comments ever irks you, do inform me ASAP! I can rein it in... ... ... 🐎 Ciao, SuperDude! You are an Ace! 😇

11/16/22, 3:28 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI!! I'm doing well...how bout yourself, my friend?!? I NEVER think that you are being critical/judgmental when you voice your comments/opinions-- you have EVERY right to voice them!! That's why I feel that feedback from readers is essential to the overall direction (& fine tuning!) of the storyline!! PLUS...your non-stop humourous/hysterical comments FUEL me with JOY & validation (as well as further guidance/direction)!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that you are on "the edge of your seat" with Rico/BATMAN -- MORE layers will CUM soon enough!!:smiling_imp: Have a SUPA-day, my friend!:innocent: