Recent Comments

11/17/22, 10:10 PM
Yay the full episode! It's very interesting (even if it was frustrating that we were denied the full action). Jace is just a precious boy with good intentions. The frat give him too much shit and he deserves more ~~(dicks)~~ I do hope the end result won't be that Jace won't lose all his intelligence permanently. Fucked silly is fun, but being destroyed forever is not so much. Also, I don't like Lewis. He's a douchebag and I hope Booker and or Greek will punch him in his face. Waiting for the next chapter! :)

11/18/22, 6:15 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm hoping to play with the heat of dumbing down without too much of the horror of long-term consequences here (same with another WIP...). It works great in shorter works, but it's harder to pull off in longer works
11/17/22, 8:59 PM
I waited a few days to read this because I knew I would like it. And of course I did. I love the narrator being the himbo. I love his roommate being gay and in love with him. I love the frat house setup. And I love the demon living in him now. I’m really excited to read more.

11/18/22, 6:10 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) :heart: I always appreciate your detailed comments! I have lots of ideas bouncing around for this. Just need to get through November.
Haruspex
11/18/22, 3:08 AM
Strangely ethical in a way I wasn't expecting! A lot of straight-to-gay type stories can occasionally make the process feel nonconsensual in a way that I don't necessarily think is intended--I think it can be hot when the writer is purposefully writing with that as a theme, but other times it's just so weird and uncomfortable to read that I've gotta tab out. But the clear camaraderie and affection everyone showed was lovely, moreso since you implanted the seeds (haha) throughout the story of the groups all bonding naturally. They didn't know what they were getting into, but even though there was clearly a strong level of influence sexually, it doesn't feel implausible that things wouldn't have gone to that level eventually. Bowen acting like a happy labrador was what sold it--the facade of that unnerving soldier giving way to absolute giddy affection and genuine care was a delight to see even just purely as a narrative thing. As always, love your work!

11/18/22, 4:11 AM
@[Haruspex](/user/show/908250) thanks man! I'm actually writing the next chapter at least in part with some of that in mind - and Bowen as a big ol' happy guard dog is definitely the vibe I was going for! I'm hoping to bring that in for a landing for you with the next chapter, too!
11/18/22, 1:12 AM
i honestly wish I could meet someone with your incredible creativity and ... DANG ... I feel your beautiful passion and sexuality. I love this story.
11/18/22, 12:24 AM
okay - you are brilliant. JUST brilliant. this is so sweet.
11/17/22, 11:56 PM
i want to suck so badly on his teet.
11/17/22, 11:32 PM
i really love the setup... i love the way you describe people. the blonde eyelashes and blue eyes... i feel like i can actually see him. THANK YOU
11/17/22, 6:04 PM
i wonder if you're going to do another series with something like of robin like tim drake or all the robins or maybe something with the mad hatter

11/17/22, 6:37 PM
@[RedEnd](/user/show/10001787) Hi RedEnd!! Thanks 4 your comment!! The idea is being tossed around in my cranium...I'm just trying to devise a solid concept so that it's "somewhat different" than this story so I can deliver something NEW & FRESH!! Thanks 4 the suggestion & the ideas!!:innocent:

11/17/22, 10:44 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) just take your time and everything
11/17/22, 9:05 PM
This is hot and well-written in a believable way. Though from what I know of the military they would have to haul their asses to some medical center to do the checkups. It was not clear to me where the story was going, which is always a plus.

11/17/22, 10:42 PM
@[Josh Slater](/user/show/560321) I'm glad you liked it! I Definitely came at it from the idea of the whole thing being a behavioral experiment - in a sane world they'd do the measurements and stuff in an assembly line. But if you're trying to induce roommate bonding ... strip off in front of your new best friend! For science!
11/17/22, 7:13 PM
Awesome story. I hope all the guys have lots of kids. So difference formulations cause different changes? One formula makes men powerful tops and another makes them into baby making bottoms?

11/17/22, 10:40 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I'm leaning towards the B-X variants produce different attachment styles and other behavioral effects. The A-series drug that the soldiers got has them sorted for tops!