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Zai
11/18/22, 11:18 AM
Much of a *DICKtator', Lex? Huh? Yeah, you bald, *albeit hot*, bastard stud! But I absolutely enjoyed the curveball lobbed by Rico right at Lex; nearly braining the head honcho, the lead man, the fearless leader, *The top dog Master!* Annnnnndddd, about curveballs, SuperDude? There were several, here, as you well now know. As you wrote, you shocked yourself with the curveball content of this chapter. However, the biggest curveball was that damn cliffhanger chapters end! You're just are an outright cock-tease, SuperLEX!!! *seriously peeved lol'ing...* Because is Rico actually proving himself a challenge to Lex as the #1 Master? I'm thinking... yeeeaaahhh... duh, lol!!! Not only did he unchain, uncage and uncollar SuperBottomBoi, without Lex Luthor's apparent permission, but you left us with Rico dicking *HIS* SUPREMA-MARICONA! And I bet That was without the Sir's consent, either! You packed a lotta drama here, SuperDude, a great Deal of *dun, dun, dun...* One major issue I have with Rico comparing his superhero boi-toys like apples to oranges. Because he thought that Superman was the stronger of heroes he bitched? Oh Hell, No Rico! I feel in many ways, both Superman AND Batman are equals. But! Superman has been in slave training to bottom for awhile, and he's been through the ringer of drugs, varied Special-K (Kryptonite), mental and physical indoctrination, etc, etc. But it took Bitching Pills, booze and some clever manipulating by Rico to bitch the Dark Knight. So quickly. The argument could be made that Batman gave up his mouth & cunt up to Rico far faster than Superman got cherry popped. On the coin toss, Superman is a Kryptonian and Batman human. So in certain ways the flyboi is stronger; then again apples to oranges... ... ... I called it, Bitches! I knew Zod was Python's daddy; of a sort, lol! Now I'm left to ponder - just who is attempting to build up a superhero bitch harem? As an aside note!? I'd enjoy Aquaman getting bitched, too! The blonde Adonis stud in his skintight green and orange costume that shows off the pretty-boi's physique. Especially his epic ass & bulge. Don't get me wrong, I think Jason Mamoa is a kickass, awesome Aquaman. But I loves me the classic blonde model Aquaman getting bitched. C & C, Sir SuperDude! 😎😛😉💣💥⚾️👅

11/18/22, 2:02 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) G'Mornin ZAI!! THANK YOU 4 ALL of your positive comments!! SO GLAD U Enjoyed this chapter-- YES, there sure were A LOT of "curveballs"!!:baseball: I'm currently debating on exactly how Chapter 22 will UNFOLD....a lot of balls in the air moving forward!!:thinking: Lex will hardly allow the blatant insolence from Rico...right?!??!:rage: But HOW, Praytel, how will he retaliate!?!?:smiling_imp: Only time will tell, my dear friend!!:8ball: Have a SUPA-weekend!:sunglasses:
11/18/22, 1:51 PM
i just love your writing... i hear their words when I read them. THANK YOU! What a joyful and fun story to read. I just loved it.
11/18/22, 10:14 AM
My prediction of this series reaching chapter 1000 before Himbo reaches the fourth island is true. What another wholesome great chapter, but this one certainly made me laugh hard at certain points. And the officer should think about his real name the next time 😌

11/18/22, 10:22 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) All cops are bad at remembering their own names :laughing: :laughing:
Zai
11/18/22, 8:08 AM
Damn Spell check! That fracking program changes words outta the blue. I wrote - '...have one *of* our hung guys...,' not, '...have one *off* our hung guys...' *exasperated sigh* I *Dick*stinctly enjoy our word play, yeah? Oh, yeah! Loud lol'ing!!! Cheers, mate!
Zai
11/18/22, 7:55 AM
Yes! *happy fist-pumping* Chapter 22! Soon, oh so soon, 21, here I come! And you deserve fair and truly honest praise, SUPERDUDE!! I'm still wondering when my story will appear? 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
11/16/22, 6:06 PM
That was really awesome . Was also wondering if you gonna write anymore about the detectives In the haunted house . Loved that one tooo ☺️

11/17/22, 4:01 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Thanks! The next Household Spirits chapter just needs some polish. Maybe next month?

11/18/22, 7:44 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Omg that’s awesome !!! Thank you . Thanks again for this awesome story too
11/18/22, 5:22 AM
The dynamic between Booker and Jace is so so good. Booker (and Greek who I’m excited to see what part she plays) being the one to protect and look out for the big ol’ himbo is precious and I hope he retains some of that even as he most likely transforms into a much more alpha-oriented stud and Jace transitions into a sub bottom. You are by far the best at writing these transformations that I’ve encountered and, as in the case of magical textbook, have a great ability to infuse *just* the right amount of romanticism while keeping it filthy and hot as fuck. Cannot WAIT to see where this one goes.

11/18/22, 6:23 AM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) You flatter me! Hopefully I can live up to the expectations of romantic/smut balance.
Nutiper
11/18/22, 5:21 AM
I'll throw in my vote and say: it would absolutely be fun to see Jace have some enjoyable kinky times under Lewis at some point, but along with _plenty_ of Booker as well. I mean, why choose... Why not both! Booker and Jace's dynamic is so good, and very sweet. And it seems likely they'll end up together by the end. I can't wait to see more of the two of them interacting! But the story is also hinting strongly at a harem-like scenario where Jace isn't sticking solely with Booker. And if that's the case, I'm definitely excited to see some scenes with Lewis too. Honestly though, I'll read whatever you write and be glad for it. Don't take the comment-voting too seriously, and just write whatever you have in mind. I'm super excited to read it!

11/18/22, 6:20 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Por que no los dos?
Anonymous
11/18/22, 1:54 AM
I’m gonna sorta echo a previous comment and say I’m team Lewis hahaha. He’s just the right amount of smug that the cockiness is hot rather than asshole-ish. Hope he gets to dick down Jace.

11/18/22, 6:16 AM
Glad he's sticking out as a character!
11/17/22, 10:10 PM
Yay the full episode! It's very interesting (even if it was frustrating that we were denied the full action). Jace is just a precious boy with good intentions. The frat give him too much shit and he deserves more ~~(dicks)~~ I do hope the end result won't be that Jace won't lose all his intelligence permanently. Fucked silly is fun, but being destroyed forever is not so much. Also, I don't like Lewis. He's a douchebag and I hope Booker and or Greek will punch him in his face. Waiting for the next chapter! :)

11/18/22, 6:15 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm hoping to play with the heat of dumbing down without too much of the horror of long-term consequences here (same with another WIP...). It works great in shorter works, but it's harder to pull off in longer works