Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/22/22, 10:57 AM
Very interesting approach and almost heart-warming. I would love to see him at a gay club or talking to their friend for advice. But I'm also always open for a good makeover - perhaps even one that turns out differently than expected.
12/22/22, 3:32 AM
You know the best way Carlos could show his teammates how great getting their ass eaten out would be? Carlos could rim himself to convince them to go see Stanley.
12/21/22, 8:01 AM
Loving all the interplay and wishing. Is he content to just be wishing on the three of them? Is there a neighbour or a more generic wish that he could make? Or is it important that the wishing happens with the people in the globe?

12/21/22, 12:37 PM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) Very great questions! I don’t want to spoil it.
12/1/22, 6:42 AM
Wow, this was great! Very well written and very entertaining. I'm curious about the therapist's relationship with Jack's uncle Paul.

12/1/22, 6:41 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks for your enthusiastic response, I'm planning a part 2 to the story perhaps your curiosity by satisfied. I've seen your stories - wicked sense of humour!

12/21/22, 10:18 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) I'm definitely curious of the uncles involvement as well. I figure he's either a sub himself or going to be the eventual owner of the main character. Looking forward to it!
nobody
12/21/22, 2:59 AM
Loving the story, but really missing the transformation that was promised in the tags. Side note, you should proofread your stories before submitting, there's a couple bits that seem like a word was cut off.

Dylan
12/21/22, 6:16 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Thank you for your comment! If i may ask : Were do you think words are missing, and why? Please send me examples , you could copy a sentence or a paragraph , ad the word , maybe in fat print or different colour , and send the examples to boy18cute@yahoo.com. Btw: In this series the lettering of the chapters is a little off, did you realize part one of the Johnny /Mark transformation is "Johnnys story. A fairytale" . And, since you asked for pictures: Check " A Dickson Enterprises Story : Dylan " Chapters 22,23,24 . Basically a comic, full of pics ;-) Have fun!
12/21/22, 3:49 AM
I would suggest a paragraph format. This was hard to read as it is.
KKA
11/26/22, 3:04 PM
Great building up the tension! Such a creative way of doing this, and I’m excited to see where this goes.

12/21/22, 12:42 AM
@[KKA](/user/show/26116) Ooop, missed this comment in the end of semester rush. Thanks for the kind words! Next chapter is coming before the end of the year.
12/20/22, 4:13 AM
Why do I imagine Kyle becoming an uberdaddy with both of them as his bottoms?

12/20/22, 4:49 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) That is one option. Not to far off from where it’s going.
12/19/22, 10:27 PM
I just went and did some ratings for chapter 2. While yes, I do prefer the blank Danny to slutty Danny (LOL) I do find slutty Danny really hot too. What I think for me is more of a difference between chapter 1 and chapter 2 is this... - In chapter 1 Danny becomes this blank sex doll type of person. Noah is pretty upset at what he has done, even knowing it's what Danny wanted, but what I find REALLY hot is how even as upset as he is, Noah's lust is totally in control. He uses Danny every which way for the whole weekend. I am turned on by how Noah's lust is so much stronger than his moral objections to what he has done to Danny. - In chapter 2 it was more planned by both of them -- Noah has his monthly check-in stipulation, Danny has come up with some kind of alternative personality instead of just being a blank. For these reasons, I don't see Noah's angst as nearly as strong, or as warranted. And yet it doesn't turn into a month-long fuckfest where Noah gets to do everything he wants with this very slutty obliging version of Danny. There's the initial sexual contact and then he makes slutty Danny stop. The new Danny's insistence and whining for more and how hungry he is for Noah's cum makes Noah think he needs to figure something out here (hence the possible directions the story could take). So in chapter 2, Noah isn't as angst-ridden, and also the abandon-yourself-to-the-lust component isn't there either. It's interesting. It's very hot. Hotter than most stories I come across. But chapter 1 really was mind-blowing for me (no pun intended). I don't usually write long comments like these. LOL. I don't know what's up with me. Usually my comments are along the lines of: "So fuckin hot. I came 3 times before I got thru the whole thing." Yeah, that sounds more like me. HAHA

Martin
12/20/22, 3:13 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Ok, you're now definitely very high up on my list of favorite readers... See, how easy I am to please :) I know exactly what you're saying and I agree. Once you've used an idea, you cannot repeat it. And if you make the mistake of starting with the hottest one... well, let's see what I come up with now. The thing is, it's always different kinds of nasty things which turn on different people. So I hope there's something for everybody in the end. But "I came 3 times" is amazing to read, too! So don't let me stop you!