Recent Comments

Sebastián Apollo
1/10/23, 3:43 AM
Lucky Beck! Lucky Talley! Lucky Arik! _Lucky readers too..._ I think a lot of your worldbuilding has really shone through in this particular chapter - the overwhelming power of a Firecracker's Rut, a Siren's linking, naiads, and kinky sexual risks. I can only imagine what you've cooked up for the boys on the rooftop of the lounge and on Nate's lower back... Looking forward to more sex, fun, and frat shenanigans, which I know you'll deliver in spades! 😉

1/15/23, 8:04 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) This chapter has been one of my favourites to write just for all the worldbuilding I got to do! I felt like Arik's character shone through more, too, and I got to write Talley as that mischievous, borderline-demonic little fucker he is for the first time in a while. Looking forward to getting out more!
Connor
1/15/23, 5:14 PM
Great story idea! 2 arch enemies fucking is very hot. Awesome story...
1/14/23, 11:17 PM
So much enjoyment here. Every time I think I know where this is going you throw me a curve. So much fun. I look forward to every new chapter. Fascinating.

1/15/23, 10:26 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you so much. Beaner. Your positive feedback is very motivating.
Sep 22, 2019
Adam The Basketball Twink
1/14/23, 10:41 PM
Wow, I was turned on and turned off, then turned on again. Writing is amazing, but some wow I knew by the title Martin would be used. This part that turned me off being that my first gay sex experience I also was used. Besides that and the ending wow!

Martin
1/15/23, 9:58 AM
@Adam The Basketball Twink I'm really glad you liked it - I totally understand why the middle part turned you off, I wanted to stress the point of how cruel this society is and what that entails. That can arouse people, but it also can turn them off like it did you. But I'm really happy that you kept reading and that the story turned around for you. And I'm especially happy that the end connected with you. That means a lot. I'd be happy if you'd check out other stories of mine ... :)
Onyl
1/13/23, 9:44 PM
Le mieux ça serait que vous essayez de parler tous les deux et que tu lui donnes des ordres comme l'animal qu'il est devenu comme par exemple mettre dans sa gamelle du sperme.

Martin
1/14/23, 8:47 AM
@Onyl I've maneuvered myself into quite a predicament in how to keep him nourished while at the same time making sure Noah remains true to his love for his Danny...
1/14/23, 8:28 AM
The coach sits on the couch...
dmc
1/14/23, 12:06 AM
Great story.. would love more
1/11/23, 1:41 PM
*Carpe diem!*…or is that *rape penibus*?? Love me a straight dude trying to figure out how to stretch his thinking and/or asshole to accommodate his gay friend. This continues delightful, bravo!

1/13/23, 11:57 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Thanks! I'm finding the tone for the next chapter tricky, but it's getting there.
Martin
1/12/23, 9:27 PM
You know, what you're creating here is worth being called a novel. You cannot read this as a simple sex story, it's way more, an amazingly well-told tale of power and mystery. I wonder if you're going to unravel the mysteries or if you're going to keep it in shrouds. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to see where this is heading. And you should x-post to Cupid, so I can add a "romance" (heart) rating, too!

1/13/23, 6:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin; you're very kind. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I guess it is quite romantic. How do I 'x-post' it to Cupid?

Martin
1/13/23, 7:03 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) If you edit or add one chapter and x-posted it to Cupid (on the story submission page, on the very top, where you can select the primary and secondary sites, just add "Cupid" as a secondary site), the whole series will be x-posted once that chapter is published and approved. Or I can do it for you...

1/13/23, 7:41 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, Martin. I'll try to do it when I submit the next chapter.