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12/12/22, 2:21 PM
i love this story. these two innocent boys just having good natural curious times. I am loving this story and I enjoy your writing style.

1/2/23, 11:31 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man! I’m glad you enjoy it. Definitely more to come!
1/2/23, 12:50 AM
I appreciate that our POV isn't instantly becoming better, that it's taking him some time. It seems like Mike has been thinking about this for a while, and has been more certain of and content with what he wants than the main character.

1/2/23, 11:28 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Yes that’s what I was trying to convey. I didn’t mention it specifically but Mike’s actions from the beginning on should hint that he is more aware of what he is doing and what he wants. He’s more fearful that the main character won’t accept him while our main hero struggles more with self acceptance. Things take a shift after chapter 3 though ;)
1/2/23, 9:49 AM
Wow! What a fantastic story! The ending was just perfect. It felt like a Christmas Film which is some of the highest praise i can give.
1/2/23, 4:05 AM
So glad to see you back!!! Another good story to look forward to.
1/2/23, 12:48 AM
I really like this! Always dig bros/himbos getting to know each other sexually and discovering what they really like.
1/1/23, 3:30 PM
Loved this chapter. He’s definitely putting his new powers to good use.
1/1/23, 2:09 PM
I thought this was a compelling addition to the original. All of the relationships and feelings the characters had felt real, which is an impressive feat in such an unreal scenario like this. I empathised with all involved and if you were to ever expand on this I'd love to see something from Evan's point of view. How he's been treated over the years (that scene with Sean and Cory was oof) and what finally drove him to change his mind.