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byhisello
1/9/23, 2:27 PM
Well written, but you know that. The pacing seemed fine to me. I'm a fan of the slow burn story, so this is not something unappealing. Part of what appeals to me in a hypnosis story is the public nature of a stage show and the potential for humiliation; I'm also a fan of exhibitionism stories. I was trained years ago in clinical hypnosis, which is quite easy since in a clinical setting the subject is seeking help. I've never taken it to the stage, but I suspect I could do it and do it well. As you probably know, the key is calibrating your subject. Some of the strip routines don't actually require the subjects to be hypnotized; all the needed was an excuse, plausible deniability.
Willie Cici
1/9/23, 3:51 AM
I loved it. It was dark, but hot. Great writing, too. A good example of writing and editing. It shows. Keep it up.
1/9/23, 2:25 AM
Really enjoying the drama and depth you’ve created here. Chapters can’t come fast enough.
1/9/23, 1:49 AM
Thanks everyone for the kind words! Was very curious how people would receive this! It was supposed to be a very different story originally and kind of came out in a mad rush - so, point taken about there maybe being a bit more room for build, but I don't think it would've been at all like this if I hadn't written it in one sitting. Thanks again for reading, and the kind replies!
1/8/23, 9:54 PM
This was exceptionally good!
1/8/23, 9:46 PM
Incredibly hot stuff!
1/8/23, 7:48 PM
love to see this all....heroes totally gone...wasted.....drugged by pure need of cock

1/8/23, 8:26 PM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) THANK YOU so much, CuriousJ!!:pray: So GLAD that U R still enjoying the evolving storyline (esp. the NEWEST Chapter, #42!)...:notebook: Challenging myself on trying 2 provide you guys w/NEW & EXCITING twists-n-turns & I'm PROUD of how we "wind down" the "Hypno-Concert"!!:cyclone: Appreciate your positive thoughts/input....ENJOY your Sunday, my friend!:sparkler:
1/8/23, 7:50 PM
the depths that you took superman too....are simply amazing...and i wish i was taken under the power of Master Luthor like superman was

1/8/23, 8:13 PM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) HNY CuriousJ!! Thanks so much 4 your positive comments-- THRILLED that U thoroughly ENJOYED this chapter!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I really thought long-n-hard about how to dovetail out of the "Hypno-Concert" (since there were multiple storylines converging)...:fireworks: I have 2 give THANKS (& MUCH GR8titude!:pray:) to Jack Parker's AMAZING "Not So Super Now" story (just posted a couple days ago)...:raised_hands: After reading his carefully crafted masterpiece:star: & doing some of my own background research about Bash's character, it helped 2 provide me with "the XXXtra inspiration":smiling_imp: (& KICK in my ASS:mans_shoe:) 2 "step outta the box" & come up with & introduce SUPERBASH (aka Bradley Bashford) 2 the mix! :supervillain: ....BTW....SUPERBASH is NOT done w/SUPERMAN just yet....:muscle: Continuing 2 curate his evil, humiliating brand of domination just might give LEX a run for his :moneybag:!!! Again, SUPA-GR8FUL 4 your positivity & ENJOY your Sunday!!:sun_with_face:
1/8/23, 5:31 PM
new one is also my favorate
Anonymous
1/8/23, 4:08 PM
Great story, you are the best writer!