Recent Comments

Onyl
1/13/23, 9:44 PM
Le mieux ça serait que vous essayez de parler tous les deux et que tu lui donnes des ordres comme l'animal qu'il est devenu comme par exemple mettre dans sa gamelle du sperme.

Martin
1/14/23, 8:47 AM
@Onyl I've maneuvered myself into quite a predicament in how to keep him nourished while at the same time making sure Noah remains true to his love for his Danny...
1/14/23, 8:28 AM
The coach sits on the couch...
dmc
1/14/23, 12:06 AM
Great story.. would love more
1/11/23, 1:41 PM
*Carpe diem!*…or is that *rape penibus*?? Love me a straight dude trying to figure out how to stretch his thinking and/or asshole to accommodate his gay friend. This continues delightful, bravo!

1/13/23, 11:57 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Thanks! I'm finding the tone for the next chapter tricky, but it's getting there.
Martin
1/12/23, 9:27 PM
You know, what you're creating here is worth being called a novel. You cannot read this as a simple sex story, it's way more, an amazingly well-told tale of power and mystery. I wonder if you're going to unravel the mysteries or if you're going to keep it in shrouds. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to see where this is heading. And you should x-post to Cupid, so I can add a "romance" (heart) rating, too!

1/13/23, 6:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin; you're very kind. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I guess it is quite romantic. How do I 'x-post' it to Cupid?

Martin
1/13/23, 7:03 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) If you edit or add one chapter and x-posted it to Cupid (on the story submission page, on the very top, where you can select the primary and secondary sites, just add "Cupid" as a secondary site), the whole series will be x-posted once that chapter is published and approved. Or I can do it for you...

1/13/23, 7:41 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, Martin. I'll try to do it when I submit the next chapter.
1/12/23, 6:22 PM
Dude, this is an incredibly hot recounting; had me hard the whole time! I love the piss kink and the cumshot at the end was so sexy. Felching? Snowballing? And I loved the casual sexuality on the plane. Love this, well done.

Connor
1/13/23, 7:24 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks for the kind words. Wish had been there while you were reading, I would have sucked your hard nob! More stories to cum. . . .
1/13/23, 6:26 PM
Thank you to everyone who has left positive comments so far. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Your feedback is very motivating.
Sep 22, 2019
1/13/23, 5:38 PM
Martin Please, please don't feel bad. I have start so many stories on notepad and keep thinking to much a story of some one else.. So I stop. I have so many unfinished stories, too. It's as if every time I start to think about one, start typing. The phone rings or some other interruption. Pull my pants up and never get back to it. Life is always in the way it seems. Then Like you some new idea, new start to a story. start it and one page done, now stop thinking of what way to go. Remove my hank from the key board. Move to other things. I have a bad habit of not complete ding one thing be for I start and other. Right now I got 10+ repairs, mostly electronics, I do that kink of work. I to need to fix that too. Get one done be for i take apart some think else. Let's do what we can. Thank You for all you have done. All great from my point of view.
nycboot
1/13/23, 11:55 AM
Took me a while to realize that Hvalla is an anagram of Valhalla. Each time I read a chapter I am so thankful that you are back, M.Greene!