Recent Comments

R P
1/20/23, 1:11 AM
I’m loving this series! You’ve really got me invested in the characters and the world. It’s a hot setting, and I’m rooting for Isaac and Akira!

R P
1/20/23, 3:04 AM
Forgot to say: I also really love that the Masters are more emotionally nuanced than just hyper-macho stereotypes. In many other stories I feel like they would have been sex, violence, and domination obsessed to exclusion of everything else. And I don’t want to suggest those kinds of stories are ‘lesser’ in any way - I’ve greatly enjoyed many of them! But I really like that you’ve written them as being more complex. I like that they still love, still grieve, still wonder about the nature of the world (… and also that they have really hot sex with each other and the slaves 😈)
1/19/23, 11:55 PM
Wow this took me back to being a teenager. It's actually a very good representation of the awkward angst many of us felt at that time in our lives, so I have some affection for it even if I'm also looking back and cringing at my own past. I also like the dynamic of Dmitri's _incredibly_ unsubtle attempts at seduction bouncing off the impenetrable wall of Sebastian's self-loathing. Oddly endearing but also you kinda want to slap the guy/give him a pep talk.

1/20/23, 12:30 AM
@[Zhuge_Lin] it wouldn't let me respond at first :sweat_smile: Sebastian is *incredibly* dumb. Dumb and dramatic :grin:
Tyrol
1/19/23, 6:08 PM
Very much enjoying this story. Even though it's light on the sexy bits, it's still engaging for what it is. Impressive since I'm hungry for more of the slaves getting fucked.
1/19/23, 2:40 PM
So dramatic and sweet! There are traces of present Norismo here and there and it sounds very much like a YA story I wish I had read as a gayling. Can't wait for the next part!

1/19/23, 5:01 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Like all YA fiction it gets weirdly dark and violent :laughing:
1/19/23, 3:44 PM
I love how each chapter reveals a little more about this world and it’s origin. As more questions get answered more are created. Curious as to why individuals are selected to be reborn here. What is the criteria? They all seem different in their original lives. And of course, who is the first guide and does he ‘report’ to someone higher?
1/19/23, 6:20 AM
I had to read part one to read this chapter. It was a fun ride. You brought out emotions I had thought were long buried. I'm impressed as always by your dedication to romance and discovering one self. You are an amazing author. :) well done.
1/18/23, 2:20 PM
Brilliantly written as ever. Great to know a second part is coming!
8/3/22, 1:09 PM
Will it be continued? I was stonehard throughout the story!

1/17/23, 6:02 AM
@[xboi](/user/show/10027140) That's the plan.
Martin
1/11/23, 9:32 PM
This series is actually really hot. Why has it gotten so little attention I wonder?!

1/17/23, 6:00 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) My guess is that there's no part 5 yet. :wink:
Martin
1/11/23, 9:40 PM
Why did you never continue this? It's an AMAZING story...

1/17/23, 5:59 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Honestly, I kind of fell out of the mood because of some life stuff. I started a sequel, but hit a dead end. But seeing as how people seem to enjoy it, and how I want to write again, maybe I'll start continuing it.