Recent Comments

Chad
1/29/23, 2:49 AM
Need more…i have been waiting for the sequel to the first chapter and it did not disappoint. busted twice.. reminiscent of straight to bitch club 10/10
1/29/23, 12:28 AM
Wow charlie, you knew I'd like this one, I saw a lot parallels to my relationship with my bf. Keep up the good work, Adam going to thank you because now I have to go pump a load in him😈🍆💦💦
nycboot
1/27/23, 1:34 AM
I love this story. But the influence of J.K. Rowling shows itself too often (for example: Translation gate = Sorting hat). In other ways it's like Grand Hotel without the melodrama. I look forward to every chapter!

1/27/23, 1:27 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There are more relevant SF precedents decades before Rowling came on the scene. Try Jack Chalker's Well World series, or some Philip Jose Farmer or ....

1/27/23, 4:07 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) It's very difficult these days to come up with anything totally 'new' in a story. I've read a lot of sci fi and fantasy in my time and concepts in this story such as the lottery, translation gates and transformation serums / bites come from many different sources, mostly unconsciously. I was not thinking of JKR's 'sorting hat' at all, but who knows what my subconscious brain was doing? I guess the important thing is whether you like what I've done with it all. :grinning:

1/28/23, 12:27 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I certainly love what you're doing. I struggle to see any Sorting Hat connection as it neither transforms nor transports. The (homo)erotic fantasies I got from such works as Chalker's enlivened my latter teens
1/27/23, 11:49 AM
I think you did a good job of capturing the essence of the self-bondage enthusiast. The meticulousness coupled with horny decision making and aversion to engaging with partners as opposed to fantasy. The nigh-irresistibly of huffing on a sweaty jock is also a very real thing.

1/28/23, 12:53 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I f**king love a jock. Its the absolute peak of manly smells
1/25/23, 1:43 AM
I can't wait for the next part. This is so damn hot. I wonder what kinky things Marcus will make his friend do. I'm sure he doesn't plan to let his friend go after the year is up. Also take all the time u need to write. We all get like that sometimes, so if you need to take a break again, don't be afraid to. Were all happy to wait for the next chapter of this amazing story.

1/25/23, 10:57 AM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) Thanks man, i really appreciate your understanding. I love writing this story so the fact that there are people who enjoy it makes my day!

1/27/23, 10:08 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) I really loved this story when it first came out, and I can't wait to see what comes next. Really, it's just so sexy. Especially when our dear Dom decides to be more dominant with his friend. Can't wait to see more 🥰
1/27/23, 4:25 PM
Hope more will come.
1/11/23, 1:47 AM
The worldbuilding in this story is just soooo rich! I also loved seeing the character development for Arik! Meanwhile, Talley is helpful and puckish in equal measure. What a troublemaker! Looking forward to more!

1/27/23, 2:50 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Puckish is definitely the right word for Talley! Especially considering what I have planned for him… it’s really fun to write his sexual mischief and the sheer physical power he gets to use to carry it out at times, heh. I’m also glad to have finally written some solid character development for Arik that kicks things off for him. More of that soon!
nobody
1/27/23, 3:51 AM
the gayspiralstories code gives a "code not yet valid" error

Gay Harem
1/27/23, 7:34 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Guys, I just checked and it works xD **Gayspiralstories** works and it gives you ingame currency. Don't put hastag on that one. **#LunarNewYear** also works. On this one put a hastag~