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1/30/23, 11:10 AM
I'm starting to think we need a "ethics" rating categories for some stories (mine included). This is so hot, so exciting, but also so wrong !! :sweat_smile: I love this story, it is making me hard. (Seriously : I'm half joking half serious with this. I know this is fiction and all, but an ethic rating on stories might be a way to 1. partly describe the story 2. be used as trigger warning for people who might need it.)

1/30/23, 11:30 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Hi Nephilim! First off, I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I have a kind of blanket trigger warning in my bio since almost all of my stories are, well, problematic XD I'm writing about what turns me on personally and although i think we all know it's a fantasy, you're probably right that I should do more to warn people who find this kind of thing unethical. I'll take that onboard.

1/30/23, 12:50 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Try not to take criticisms of your character's actions onto yourself. I am one of the people who complained about Marcus, but it was about him. It's a good story. The character is well-written. But he's a well-written sociopath and that provokes a reaction. It's not a criticism of the author, or even the story itself to have a reaction to a character like that. But yeah, a character who casually betrays, effortlessly lies through his teeth, sadistically strangles someone while watching them like a kid with a magnifying glass and some ants, and ruthlessly controls his "friend" all without ever having the slightest emotion is going to provoke strong feelings in your readers. You have to expect that. If you don't want to have a certain segment of readers who have shocked or upset reactions then you probably do need to put a warning in front of your stories. Personally, I don't think a warning is necessary - but you're also gonna get some reactions.
1/30/23, 12:34 PM
Loving this story just caught up on the last few chapters. Great premise, an intriguing plot, all superbly executed so far. Thanks for sharing.
R P
1/30/23, 12:12 PM
Buzz settling into his new life was hot! And I’m excited to see where the First Guide’s scheming goes next :)
1/30/23, 11:36 AM
Just to be sure : That was not specifically against you. As I said, I love your story, style AND content. And others here are far less ethic.
1/29/23, 10:26 PM
It's very cute story, My problem is I having trouble imagining them in their human forms to me they're a bunch of penises walking around., Except Michael and Vincent, and Michael's parents. Part of the fun of it I guess. I like the whole breakdown of the four corners.
1/29/23, 8:52 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT. Love the cuckolding scene so much and it was so great to see T & B get some space again. Genius stroke to have Luthor use them to humiliate Bash. Also caught that little Dick/Rico moment and dying to find out how that all plays out.

1/29/23, 9:55 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U dug the cuckolding scene btwn Jason & Superman....the heat will DEF increase on the cuckolding on S-man when their 3-way heats UP!:fire: Yeah, I have 2 totally give MAD props 2 "a buddy" who inspired me 2 create that Luther/Tim/Bernard/Bash scenario...AHEM (look in a mirror!):mirror: Also hope you enjoyed how Tim exerted "some newfound dominance" 2 impress his Master Daddy Lex....:muscle: BTW....I had gotten 2/3 thru the story b4 I realized that I hadn't inserted any "addt'l sideline stories" 2 provide "some XXXtra spice":hot_pepper:... SO I created "the Dick/Rico moment" so I could E X P A N D upon it during the next chapter!:sparkler: THANKS 4 ALWAYS being SO SUPA-SUPPORTIVE of this story & being SO POSTIVE w/your comments-- VERY GR8FUL!:pray: P.S. I also have "another curveball idea":baseball: brewing up in my mind that might help Bash out of "his humiliation spiral":cyclone:...SO STAY TUNED!!:radio: Have an AWESOME rest of your Sunday/wknd!:sunglasses:
1/29/23, 6:50 AM
This was so fucking perfect. The casual gay sex vibe antics at the frat is so HOT. I love that. Also, I freaking LOVE when the world you’re building or part of it, at least, is just very sexualized, like the lifestyle at KOK is. So, so good. Another thing that you nail is the dumb, hung jock trope (my absolutely favorite, I can get hard in seconds just thinking about it, and Achilles was *chef’s kiss*) and the erotic adventure aspect of the story, as in characters that don’t have direct sexual motivations (well, not Papi, at least) get involved in accidents or situations in which they need to fuck or get fucked to get out of. This is pinnacle gay erotica for me and you NAILED all those aspects. I only want more more and more from you. 10 across the board!

Sebastián Apollo
1/29/23, 3:39 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for the kind words and compliments. "Pinnacle gay erotica" is a high bar, so I'm honored you'd praise my work as such. Every aspect you mentioned - sexualized attitude, dumb hung jocks, fucking your way out of situations - those are all favorites of mine as well. So I'm glad you saw them reflected in this chapter. I always love to talk about what I deemed "porn logic", where it walks the line between groundedness and absurdity, and I really think this chapter in particular exemplified that. Chapter 4 is currently underway, so stay tuned!
Dylan
1/28/23, 10:58 AM
Great story, quick and easy bringing a dummy to good use. Looking forward to more chapters, like "Billy tries new shorts" or "Billy at the principals office" and such

1/29/23, 12:59 PM
@[Dylan](/user/show/606612) Hey thank you for the ideas, they all seem great and I'm sure I'll enjoy making the stories. I'm currently working on a new character story, I'm halfway done with it. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
Chad
1/29/23, 2:49 AM
Need more…i have been waiting for the sequel to the first chapter and it did not disappoint. busted twice.. reminiscent of straight to bitch club 10/10