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1/29/23, 10:26 PM
It's very cute story, My problem is I having trouble imagining them in their human forms to me they're a bunch of penises walking around., Except Michael and Vincent, and Michael's parents. Part of the fun of it I guess. I like the whole breakdown of the four corners.
1/29/23, 8:52 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT. Love the cuckolding scene so much and it was so great to see T & B get some space again. Genius stroke to have Luthor use them to humiliate Bash. Also caught that little Dick/Rico moment and dying to find out how that all plays out.

1/29/23, 9:55 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U dug the cuckolding scene btwn Jason & Superman....the heat will DEF increase on the cuckolding on S-man when their 3-way heats UP!:fire: Yeah, I have 2 totally give MAD props 2 "a buddy" who inspired me 2 create that Luther/Tim/Bernard/Bash scenario...AHEM (look in a mirror!):mirror: Also hope you enjoyed how Tim exerted "some newfound dominance" 2 impress his Master Daddy Lex....:muscle: BTW....I had gotten 2/3 thru the story b4 I realized that I hadn't inserted any "addt'l sideline stories" 2 provide "some XXXtra spice":hot_pepper:... SO I created "the Dick/Rico moment" so I could E X P A N D upon it during the next chapter!:sparkler: THANKS 4 ALWAYS being SO SUPA-SUPPORTIVE of this story & being SO POSTIVE w/your comments-- VERY GR8FUL!:pray: P.S. I also have "another curveball idea":baseball: brewing up in my mind that might help Bash out of "his humiliation spiral":cyclone:...SO STAY TUNED!!:radio: Have an AWESOME rest of your Sunday/wknd!:sunglasses:
1/29/23, 6:50 AM
This was so fucking perfect. The casual gay sex vibe antics at the frat is so HOT. I love that. Also, I freaking LOVE when the world you’re building or part of it, at least, is just very sexualized, like the lifestyle at KOK is. So, so good. Another thing that you nail is the dumb, hung jock trope (my absolutely favorite, I can get hard in seconds just thinking about it, and Achilles was *chef’s kiss*) and the erotic adventure aspect of the story, as in characters that don’t have direct sexual motivations (well, not Papi, at least) get involved in accidents or situations in which they need to fuck or get fucked to get out of. This is pinnacle gay erotica for me and you NAILED all those aspects. I only want more more and more from you. 10 across the board!

Sebastián Apollo
1/29/23, 3:39 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for the kind words and compliments. "Pinnacle gay erotica" is a high bar, so I'm honored you'd praise my work as such. Every aspect you mentioned - sexualized attitude, dumb hung jocks, fucking your way out of situations - those are all favorites of mine as well. So I'm glad you saw them reflected in this chapter. I always love to talk about what I deemed "porn logic", where it walks the line between groundedness and absurdity, and I really think this chapter in particular exemplified that. Chapter 4 is currently underway, so stay tuned!
Dylan
1/28/23, 10:58 AM
Great story, quick and easy bringing a dummy to good use. Looking forward to more chapters, like "Billy tries new shorts" or "Billy at the principals office" and such

1/29/23, 12:59 PM
@[Dylan](/user/show/606612) Hey thank you for the ideas, they all seem great and I'm sure I'll enjoy making the stories. I'm currently working on a new character story, I'm halfway done with it. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
Chad
1/29/23, 2:49 AM
Need more…i have been waiting for the sequel to the first chapter and it did not disappoint. busted twice.. reminiscent of straight to bitch club 10/10
1/29/23, 12:28 AM
Wow charlie, you knew I'd like this one, I saw a lot parallels to my relationship with my bf. Keep up the good work, Adam going to thank you because now I have to go pump a load in him😈🍆💦💦
nycboot
1/27/23, 1:34 AM
I love this story. But the influence of J.K. Rowling shows itself too often (for example: Translation gate = Sorting hat). In other ways it's like Grand Hotel without the melodrama. I look forward to every chapter!

1/27/23, 1:27 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There are more relevant SF precedents decades before Rowling came on the scene. Try Jack Chalker's Well World series, or some Philip Jose Farmer or ....

1/27/23, 4:07 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) It's very difficult these days to come up with anything totally 'new' in a story. I've read a lot of sci fi and fantasy in my time and concepts in this story such as the lottery, translation gates and transformation serums / bites come from many different sources, mostly unconsciously. I was not thinking of JKR's 'sorting hat' at all, but who knows what my subconscious brain was doing? I guess the important thing is whether you like what I've done with it all. :grinning:

1/28/23, 12:27 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I certainly love what you're doing. I struggle to see any Sorting Hat connection as it neither transforms nor transports. The (homo)erotic fantasies I got from such works as Chalker's enlivened my latter teens
1/27/23, 11:49 AM
I think you did a good job of capturing the essence of the self-bondage enthusiast. The meticulousness coupled with horny decision making and aversion to engaging with partners as opposed to fantasy. The nigh-irresistibly of huffing on a sweaty jock is also a very real thing.

1/28/23, 12:53 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I f**king love a jock. Its the absolute peak of manly smells