Recent Comments

1/31/23, 3:58 AM
This saga gets better and better. The truth has been revealed and yet I am more excited and intrigued than ever. What an interesting development with even more possibilities! Thank you for continuing to develop and grow this series. Super hype for what’s to come. P.S. your mind is brilliant. Even if you eventually tire of this series and wish to start a new I’ll be happy to read along your next work as well
1/31/23, 3:09 AM
It was becoming clear some very advanced technology and civilization was involved but it didn’t see this twist. I both can’t wait for the next chapter and am sad this story will end. Thoroughly enjoyed this. A masterpiece.
1/31/23, 1:25 AM
I'll admit I didn't see that twist coming, but I commend you for the use of time viewing technology for continuity of personality. Looking forward to what happens next!
1/29/23, 9:22 PM
Another smokin HOT chapter....totally lost it when Jason forces his cup over Supes' face....lookin forward to the next chapter.

1/29/23, 10:00 PM
@[INEEDADOMINTR](/user/show/10032686) Hey INEED!! Thank YOU 4 your positive comments!:star_struck: SO GLAD U enjoyed the athletic cup moment btwn Jason & Supes....I was pretty proud of that one!!:smiling_imp: GR8FUL that U R continuing to like where the story's going...Hope 2 keep surprising U! Have a GR8 Sunday!:sunglasses:

mbblover
1/30/23, 10:32 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I was thinking maybe lex luthor could make solid silver replicas of superman and the other's erections and balls mounted on marble dais and his office desk as symbols and proof of his capturing, conquering and converting of the superheroes.. a kinky collection if there ever was one!...I got the idea from the incredible saga "superman sucks" and one of it's many chapters...
1/30/23, 8:42 PM
Mmmm…can’t wait to see Theo wake up to find he’s become Brock’s roommate! I love Theo’s unknowing slide into Brock’s control as he think’s he’s brushing off his bro’s advances. I hope there’s a little more resistance, mental and physical, before the Ping, in the next chapter 😋 The leg lock would’ve worked if Theo’s arms were pinned…*wink, wink* 😏
1/30/23, 11:08 AM
First Guide could not track any collars and tokens he made. What a lucky guy he was.

1/30/23, 1:04 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) The First Guide can track collars, if they're functioning. Anselm's isn't. Gate tokens can't be tracked because we don't want to make things too easy for him :grinning:
1/30/23, 11:10 AM
I'm starting to think we need a "ethics" rating categories for some stories (mine included). This is so hot, so exciting, but also so wrong !! :sweat_smile: I love this story, it is making me hard. (Seriously : I'm half joking half serious with this. I know this is fiction and all, but an ethic rating on stories might be a way to 1. partly describe the story 2. be used as trigger warning for people who might need it.)

1/30/23, 11:30 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Hi Nephilim! First off, I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I have a kind of blanket trigger warning in my bio since almost all of my stories are, well, problematic XD I'm writing about what turns me on personally and although i think we all know it's a fantasy, you're probably right that I should do more to warn people who find this kind of thing unethical. I'll take that onboard.

1/30/23, 12:50 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Try not to take criticisms of your character's actions onto yourself. I am one of the people who complained about Marcus, but it was about him. It's a good story. The character is well-written. But he's a well-written sociopath and that provokes a reaction. It's not a criticism of the author, or even the story itself to have a reaction to a character like that. But yeah, a character who casually betrays, effortlessly lies through his teeth, sadistically strangles someone while watching them like a kid with a magnifying glass and some ants, and ruthlessly controls his "friend" all without ever having the slightest emotion is going to provoke strong feelings in your readers. You have to expect that. If you don't want to have a certain segment of readers who have shocked or upset reactions then you probably do need to put a warning in front of your stories. Personally, I don't think a warning is necessary - but you're also gonna get some reactions.
1/30/23, 12:34 PM
Loving this story just caught up on the last few chapters. Great premise, an intriguing plot, all superbly executed so far. Thanks for sharing.
R P
1/30/23, 12:12 PM
Buzz settling into his new life was hot! And I’m excited to see where the First Guide’s scheming goes next :)
1/30/23, 11:36 AM
Just to be sure : That was not specifically against you. As I said, I love your story, style AND content. And others here are far less ethic.