Recent Comments

2/2/23, 2:19 AM
This was an inspired story, and I never saw the twist coming. Amazing work.
nycboot
2/1/23, 10:42 PM
Generally I loved the story, although the revelation of what it's all about was a bit of a let-down for me. It all seemed too commercial, reducing any philosophical ideas to popular culture. So of course the one I felt for was Urbano. Dare I hope that next time you'll go back to medieval times? :slightly_smiling_face:
2/1/23, 7:04 PM
Loved this story start to finish. Thank you.
2/1/23, 5:16 PM
This was a wonderful fantasy and romance. Your writing really allowed me to imagine the world. And growing attached to these characters makes it hard to say goodbye. Maybe the Directors of this will consider a spin-off? I’d watch it!
2/1/23, 4:37 PM
Looking forward to when you get to the cream filling part of the story. Show him how to put the jelly in the donut.
2/1/23, 2:16 PM
If I was Urbano, I would choose to become a Guide again, too. Completely understand that feeling of brotherhood and peace.
2/1/23, 11:46 AM
A marvellous treat for us all with such detailed world-building and character stories..
2/1/23, 10:39 AM
That's the end of the story. Thank you to everyone who commented; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
2/1/23, 8:18 AM
Espero con ansias la actualización, me encanta (: