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1/26/23, 2:02 PM
WHen is the next chapter! Checking everyday. I want the boys to discover coach together! or... whatever you decide!

2/2/23, 12:32 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Sorry to keep you waiting bud but don't worry it is coming. next chapter is just taking a bit longer.
R P
2/2/23, 8:33 AM
Thank you for writing this series, it’s such a hot and well written story and world :)
2/2/23, 2:27 AM
This episode was just so good! I loved each section and being able to "hear" their individual voices. There was even sex! The return to school is sure to put a hamper on Himbo's journey, what will he do? Seeing the return to school through B-Dawg was a great choice too! And your Spanish was perfect too! A great and fun addition to the series, so keep going!

2/2/23, 8:05 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Gracias! I think they will be at school for another few dozen chapters, maybe a hundred :grin:
2/2/23, 2:19 AM
This was an inspired story, and I never saw the twist coming. Amazing work.
nycboot
2/1/23, 10:42 PM
Generally I loved the story, although the revelation of what it's all about was a bit of a let-down for me. It all seemed too commercial, reducing any philosophical ideas to popular culture. So of course the one I felt for was Urbano. Dare I hope that next time you'll go back to medieval times? :slightly_smiling_face:
2/1/23, 7:04 PM
Loved this story start to finish. Thank you.
2/1/23, 5:16 PM
This was a wonderful fantasy and romance. Your writing really allowed me to imagine the world. And growing attached to these characters makes it hard to say goodbye. Maybe the Directors of this will consider a spin-off? I’d watch it!
2/1/23, 4:37 PM
Looking forward to when you get to the cream filling part of the story. Show him how to put the jelly in the donut.