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2/1/23, 8:31 PM
Don't get me wrong, I understand it's almost definitely the author's kink, but I'm kinda sad Jace (jason) isn't a bit more of a demanding/controlling bottom instead of a brain-dead cock-sleeve. Like sure, he can get his brain-fucked out, that's hot. But you start calling him names and shit-talking and he just gets you off *immediately* and leaves you there wondering what the fuck happened. Honestly, I'd just like Jace to get someone who wants to show him a good, long, slow fuck.

2/2/23, 3:24 PM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Thanks for reading!
2/1/23, 6:49 PM
I’m gonna have to come back later and give more thoughts, but holy shit this was HOTTTTT!!! Jace is such an adorable character. Love this story, blue!!

2/2/23, 3:22 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks!
Gingcub
2/2/23, 11:58 AM
I come back and jerk off to the end part of this story so often. The total control, brutality, and mercilessness make me so hard. I really love it.

2/2/23, 12:39 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) I love this comment because its the opposite reaction from @amul comment above it! You guys represent the two types of people reacting to Marcus XD
1/26/23, 2:02 PM
WHen is the next chapter! Checking everyday. I want the boys to discover coach together! or... whatever you decide!

2/2/23, 12:32 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Sorry to keep you waiting bud but don't worry it is coming. next chapter is just taking a bit longer.
R P
2/2/23, 8:33 AM
Thank you for writing this series, it’s such a hot and well written story and world :)
2/2/23, 2:27 AM
This episode was just so good! I loved each section and being able to "hear" their individual voices. There was even sex! The return to school is sure to put a hamper on Himbo's journey, what will he do? Seeing the return to school through B-Dawg was a great choice too! And your Spanish was perfect too! A great and fun addition to the series, so keep going!

2/2/23, 8:05 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Gracias! I think they will be at school for another few dozen chapters, maybe a hundred :grin:
2/2/23, 2:19 AM
This was an inspired story, and I never saw the twist coming. Amazing work.
nycboot
2/1/23, 10:42 PM
Generally I loved the story, although the revelation of what it's all about was a bit of a let-down for me. It all seemed too commercial, reducing any philosophical ideas to popular culture. So of course the one I felt for was Urbano. Dare I hope that next time you'll go back to medieval times? :slightly_smiling_face:
2/1/23, 7:04 PM
Loved this story start to finish. Thank you.