Recent Comments

2/2/23, 3:49 AM
Very nice! That is a great new chapter. I loved the magic happening to Jace. I loved how Lewis was a such a dick but that the magic beings riding Jace pushed him into it. I loved Franklin being the voice of reason calling Lewis out in his stupidity, but still wanted to dom Jace and felt bad about it. I found the Gock thing hilarious. And GIF vs GIF. Classic Blue hilarity. Most of all, I loved the flip of the obliviousness. Jace is the only one that remembers that the nerd’s dicks got bigger, but Franklin and Lewis are the only ones that know that Jace has been changing. Soooo hot. Can’t wait for more.

2/2/23, 3:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! It took more effort than expected, but I ultimately had fun playing with stuff in this chapter.
2/1/23, 8:31 PM
Don't get me wrong, I understand it's almost definitely the author's kink, but I'm kinda sad Jace (jason) isn't a bit more of a demanding/controlling bottom instead of a brain-dead cock-sleeve. Like sure, he can get his brain-fucked out, that's hot. But you start calling him names and shit-talking and he just gets you off *immediately* and leaves you there wondering what the fuck happened. Honestly, I'd just like Jace to get someone who wants to show him a good, long, slow fuck.

2/2/23, 3:24 PM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Thanks for reading!
2/1/23, 6:49 PM
I’m gonna have to come back later and give more thoughts, but holy shit this was HOTTTTT!!! Jace is such an adorable character. Love this story, blue!!

2/2/23, 3:22 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks!
Gingcub
2/2/23, 11:58 AM
I come back and jerk off to the end part of this story so often. The total control, brutality, and mercilessness make me so hard. I really love it.

2/2/23, 12:39 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) I love this comment because its the opposite reaction from @amul comment above it! You guys represent the two types of people reacting to Marcus XD
1/26/23, 2:02 PM
WHen is the next chapter! Checking everyday. I want the boys to discover coach together! or... whatever you decide!

2/2/23, 12:32 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Sorry to keep you waiting bud but don't worry it is coming. next chapter is just taking a bit longer.
R P
2/2/23, 8:33 AM
Thank you for writing this series, it’s such a hot and well written story and world :)
2/2/23, 2:27 AM
This episode was just so good! I loved each section and being able to "hear" their individual voices. There was even sex! The return to school is sure to put a hamper on Himbo's journey, what will he do? Seeing the return to school through B-Dawg was a great choice too! And your Spanish was perfect too! A great and fun addition to the series, so keep going!

2/2/23, 8:05 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Gracias! I think they will be at school for another few dozen chapters, maybe a hundred :grin:
2/2/23, 2:19 AM
This was an inspired story, and I never saw the twist coming. Amazing work.
nycboot
2/1/23, 10:42 PM
Generally I loved the story, although the revelation of what it's all about was a bit of a let-down for me. It all seemed too commercial, reducing any philosophical ideas to popular culture. So of course the one I felt for was Urbano. Dare I hope that next time you'll go back to medieval times? :slightly_smiling_face: