Recent Comments

11/28/25, 9:31 AM
I rarely comment, but your story is just awesome. The idea of the brainwashing already happened is absolutely genius and now that battle that takes place between each side fighting for Max, is just chefs kiss. As reader of this less sexual but way more erotic story, I'm asking about the background of Thomas and Colby. For now the characters seem a little underdeveloped and all is focusing on Max, at least they dont get the same attention as Max. For Colby and Max' teammates, that might be okay, as they're side characters, but it would be interesting to read more about their background too. Overall this story is chef's kiss and I am really looking forward to see how you have planned to end it. At this point, I have great sympathy for Max and Colby's plan. Good work! Thanks for sharing it

11/28/25, 7:18 PM
@[JasonB2](/user/show/10042798) Mostly because at one point I’d planned on a second book where Maximus goes with colby to the ranch and we learn more there. But I never did it. I got discouraged at how poorly this did and kinda let it sit for quite a few months. It’s been done since June. Just. Kinda gave up. But I decided to let people see it.

11/29/25, 1:23 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) "But I decided to let people see it." GOOD! Because it is a great story! -_-
11/28/25, 10:29 PM
Nice blend of romance and bdsm elements. Where can I get one of those watches?
11/28/25, 9:54 PM
Very good story ! The end with the sex part could have been a bit longer with this long build up, maybe for a next chapter ?
11/28/25, 9:11 PM
An awesome story. Way more complex than I expected.
11/28/25, 2:28 PM
Can't wait for more

11/28/25, 7:34 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) I’ll put the next part up in a few days or so.
11/28/25, 6:37 PM
I hope you all enjoy my first story. I’ve had this fantasy in my head for years of doctor and patient. I thought I would jot several fantasies down for fun. I didn’t think this one was erotic enough, but this oddball story was the best received, so I decided to publish it first. Please let me know if you enjoy it. I have a part two written that explores the relationship dynamic and past of one of the characters. I also have new stories I may decide to share someday.
11/28/25, 5:14 AM
Great story.

11/28/25, 5:18 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Bik
11/28/25, 2:56 PM
It's a small thing but I'm living for the increasingly ridiculous ways to write Mom out of the story! It's so funny

11/28/25, 5:06 PM
@Bik I wanted to write that she was trapped on a roller coaster in one chapter but I couldn’t figure out a way to write it in!
11/27/25, 6:32 PM
Incredible story.

11/28/25, 2:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks again!
11/22/25, 10:44 AM
Need more of this!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I got more for you :)