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Gingcub
2/3/23, 11:35 AM
The wager element was a fun addition! Any chance of Rex joining Stanley in chastity?

2/3/23, 11:24 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) ;)
Anonymous
2/3/23, 4:00 PM
Like always, I’m completely amazed by how great you are at managing to craft something that is simultaneously super hot and also incredibly well fleshed out with regards to concept characters and world building. At the end of each new chapter I’m left wanting more. In these kinds of stories, I typically never find myself enjoying or rooting for the villain or asshole but there is just something about Lewis that makes him the exception. I really hope that he is able to make his dream of turning out a team full of jocks with his fat cock a reality. That being sad I’m also glad the chapter ended with him not fully being able to take advantage of Jace and his magic.

2/3/23, 10:35 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! It's a mixed blessing sometimes when I just want to bang out something quick. I like reading stories where an asshole wins, but I usually end up threading the needle between that and a happy ending. Definitely more Lewis to come in future chapters.
2/2/23, 9:20 AM
Your writing skills are amazing! I admit that while the chapter started really hot, when Lewis behaved more and more like a dick it had put me off. While Franklin was the voice of reason, when he had no effect Jace was just a victim in a way. I hope that his dumbness is only temporary like in the beginning and not permanent because of what Lewis said at the end. Fucked silly can be hot, but when temporary (in my opinion). Lore wise it was a bit confusing because I don't understand why Lewis got to change things. He wasn't offered a pact and Jace didn't have a choice (also platinum blonde is way overrated, but that's my opinion on the matter. The GIF vs GIF dialogue was absolutely hilarious and made me laugh a lot! As I'm writing this it comes out more critical than appreciative, so I just want to emphasize again that dirty talk is hot and that your writing is hot. Just don't let Jace be abused or hurt. The poor guy has a heart of gold. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

2/2/23, 3:37 PM
@Reader Thanks! Technically it was a spell-pact Jace made that allowed Lewis to change him, not a bargain Lewis made. Jace was a little loopy from other effects, so he was basically tricked into making the agreement by the spirits. There will be some more details on magic in the next chapter.

2/3/23, 11:26 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ohhh, I see. It was a bit confusing because it seemed like they were waiting for Lewis to get to a mental state where they can use Lewis for their own fun (and this is why they were able to affect him directly when boosting his confidence without involving Jace in some way or another). By the way, if you think I didn't google these three to see who they are and find out that they are priapus' subordinates (as far as I understood) you're very much wrong. I love easter eggs.

2/3/23, 10:32 PM
@Reader Glad somebody appreciates my little details! :wink:
2/3/23, 10:29 AM
Love this and absolutely love your style. Big muscley himbos being topped by smaller horse hung dudes is the exact niche I REALLY get into so this is just perfect in my eyes. I also love the way your work incorporates magic/hypno kinda elements while also still having a certain amount of sweetness and good spiritedness.

2/3/23, 10:30 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thanks! I enjoy reading darker, squirmy stuff, but it's hard for me to write.
Art
1/31/23, 3:16 AM
I have so enjoyed this story! Is this the end? It has been so long since chapter 18 was posted. Thank you.

2/3/23, 9:21 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Yeah. We are many who are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Anonymous
1/27/23, 8:06 AM
This isn't a story, it's an ad for something with in-game purchases? What da spam?!?

Martin
1/27/23, 9:37 AM
@Anonymous It's a sponsored story from Gay Harem. It's a test balloon. I promised never to put ad banners on the site (like nifty does for example), but sponsored stories have always been a feature of the site.

1/28/23, 12:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) "Art from the online game " "Use Gayspiralstories as a promo code and you will receive 10 euros of ingame currency" Not a story but a game with puirchases . :vomit:

Anonymous
1/28/23, 4:45 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Except this isn't a story. At all. You can't seriously believe that just because you don't call it an ad that it isn't an ad. It's pinned to the top of the new story list. It is a promotion for a third party product, that gave you money to give it viability. It's an ad.

Gay Harem
1/28/23, 4:51 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Gay Harem is inspired by visual novels from anime and manga. If you make a registration with us and give me your ID I'll gladly provide you with ingame resources to progress in the story :slightly_smiling_face:

Gay Harem
1/28/23, 4:56 PM
@Anonymous Come on, don't be attacking Martin like that. All he wants is exposure for the site and our game has tons of content.

Gay Harem
1/28/23, 5:06 PM
@Anonymous Hey! Give our game a chance, the story is quite entertaining. Hit me up with your ingame ID and I'll make sure you recieve some rewards :blush:

Martin
1/28/23, 5:33 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) & @Anonymous I don't see you being a Sponsor to this site. So what are you complaining about? You're using this site for free. I have to pay and put a lot of work into this so you can enjoy the contents. So you have no grounds to complain.

Anonymous
1/29/23, 3:09 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I'm complaining because you just tried to gaslight us by claiming this wasn't an ad when it clearly is. If you're gonna start running ads, be honest about it. We're not too stupid to know an ad when we see one. It's insulting you would even try to pass this off as a "story".

1/29/23, 3:45 PM
@Anonymous Well is not a story, is a paid story. How they want to fill that space is up to them... so as Martin says unless this is blocking your own paid story or something like that I don't see why the issue. In a way is not different to other paid stories that only give you a teaser of a story, but not all content. Is just that the format of this story is a visual novel/story (as far as I understood) The only thing I would complain is the length. I remember a rule for length being 1000 words, so maybe they should add more info or lore around the characters or the world. But besides that I don't see an issue here 🤷

Martin
1/29/23, 4:51 PM
@Anonymous I promised not to ever put ad *banners* on the site. As Math_Reez has said, sponsored stories have always been a part of GSS, even before I took over. By the way, these sponsored stories are providing but a miniscule compensation of my costs. Do you realize that I put more than €500 per year of my private money into the sites? Even with all the money our amazing supporters are sponsoring each month.

1/30/23, 11:17 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) We're only allowed to complain if we pay money? Then why do you have comments turned on ya goof Agree with other guy(s) tho, that ain't a story it's a game with puirchases which is a gross thing to just dump into everyons lap and then cry 'Quiet unless you pay for it!'

Anonymous
1/30/23, 11:26 AM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Oh boy... Nipstung would you like some in-game rewards? The story of the game is quite compelling and you will enjoy it :slightly_smiling_face: Just make a registration and tell me your ID. Our players are very committed and we have a very dedicated community in Gay Harem. The story is inspired by visual novels:blush:

Martin
1/30/23, 12:38 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Thank you for calling me a "goof". You're not obligated to use any of our sites, you know? I'll gladly delete your account if you want that.

Anonymous
1/30/23, 9:51 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) You'd delete their account for calling you a goof?

Martin
1/31/23, 5:45 AM
@Anonymous I have to delete an account if the owner asks me to. If they don't want to come here anymore, it is their right to ask for their account to be deleted. I haven't written anything else. I don't know what you've read from my comment. I don't force anybody to use this site if they're offended by my actions or its contents.

2/3/23, 6:48 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I’m really sorry you have to put up with such ungrateful people. Luckily they seem to only be a handful. Than you again for running such an amazing site and fostering this community :heart:
Anonymous
2/2/23, 12:24 PM
This was, as with everything you write, super hot. You write the transformation of jock to himbo slut so perfectly. I can’t wait for more!

2/2/23, 3:33 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! More to come!
2/2/23, 3:49 AM
Very nice! That is a great new chapter. I loved the magic happening to Jace. I loved how Lewis was a such a dick but that the magic beings riding Jace pushed him into it. I loved Franklin being the voice of reason calling Lewis out in his stupidity, but still wanted to dom Jace and felt bad about it. I found the Gock thing hilarious. And GIF vs GIF. Classic Blue hilarity. Most of all, I loved the flip of the obliviousness. Jace is the only one that remembers that the nerd’s dicks got bigger, but Franklin and Lewis are the only ones that know that Jace has been changing. Soooo hot. Can’t wait for more.

2/2/23, 3:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! It took more effort than expected, but I ultimately had fun playing with stuff in this chapter.
2/1/23, 8:31 PM
Don't get me wrong, I understand it's almost definitely the author's kink, but I'm kinda sad Jace (jason) isn't a bit more of a demanding/controlling bottom instead of a brain-dead cock-sleeve. Like sure, he can get his brain-fucked out, that's hot. But you start calling him names and shit-talking and he just gets you off *immediately* and leaves you there wondering what the fuck happened. Honestly, I'd just like Jace to get someone who wants to show him a good, long, slow fuck.

2/2/23, 3:24 PM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Thanks for reading!
2/1/23, 6:49 PM
I’m gonna have to come back later and give more thoughts, but holy shit this was HOTTTTT!!! Jace is such an adorable character. Love this story, blue!!

2/2/23, 3:22 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks!