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2/10/23, 4:42 AM
Great premise, short, succinct but worth it. Plenty of room for continuing.
2/10/23, 3:17 AM
Very nice. I hope we hear more about 207 and 218.
2/9/23, 11:32 PM
Hey, sorry about the late update, I had some changes coming with the new year. With family and work schedules. I am back and this is 3rd chapter, 4th is already written, but I will not release it before I write 5th one, which I am already writing. I hope you like it.
2/9/23, 2:24 PM
Great as always! Love a good straight jacket ngl. Can't wait for more ^^

2/9/23, 11:08 PM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) A leather straightjacket is the hottest piece of gear there is as far as I'm concerned XD
2/3/23, 9:21 PM
And the household grows! Personally I hope Stanley stays in chastity as the slave he is. And that Damian stays in rubber whenever he becomes Rex. Marcus is much more of a dynamic character than previously seen with his motives and reasoning. I'm interested in learning more of his background as he deals with his two slaves.

2/9/23, 11:06 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) More rubber and chastity, got it! Marcus’s character details are a slow burn. I feel like if people know him too well he becomes predictable and that takes away his edge a little.
2/3/23, 1:09 AM
I am still so glad you decided to come back :D Great chapter as always! Seems like Damien bit of more than he could chew. Besides maybe he wanted to loose? It just surprises me that he did not take the money and ran for the hills after he knew what happens when you gamble your luck with Mr. G. I am just curious why Marcus is like this. Why does he enslave people for profit? On one hand hand he does that and on the other he shows morals and regret. It feels very complex. I wonder how he manages to put all that of himself under a hat.

2/9/23, 10:54 PM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) The next couple of chapters should provide more insight. Admittedly marcus is complicated but his motivation is clear to me because obviously i know where the story goes from here. Thanks for reading, next chapter up in a couple days! :)
2/8/23, 6:38 PM
here because the content is mostly good thou it's pretty echo-chambery about no critical stuff at all. Here because it's a communtiy not a business so see nekkid cash grabs which are defended so weirdly and hyperly makes me wonder why Martin thinks he can have a community and a no-critic-allowed rule at the same time. Community and business are opposuing goals! Also pls don't delete my account, I won't call you nasty things like goof again :(

Martin
2/9/23, 6:14 AM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) If you want to have a serious and honest discussion about GayHarem and this website, I'd ask you to use the forum. That's the proper place, not the comment section. I'm certainly open for any exchange of opinion and arguments, as long as it stays civil. Martin.

2/9/23, 12:26 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) bits of advice about running this kinda thing and trying to make money from it - Listen to the dissenters cause they'll tell you problems where the yes-men won't - registered users are the loudest and most-reinforcing of your views up to a point - your audience is not soley registered users - look up trust thermocline

2/9/23, 8:16 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Dude, you just got told by the guy who runs the site to take it to the forum. _Take it to the forum_.
1/31/23, 1:56 AM
After the cruelty that was the cliffhanger of the last chapter, I'd been dying to see this finished. Thank you for continuing the story. The shell-shock of Kaze and Iskios is so relatable and conveyed so well. I enjoy their conspiring with the twins and Marin as well. The flirting between Iskios and Marin was adorable and gave me a smile. Aris is definitely showing his true colours to our thieves and it is hot and nefarious. And hot. Julian becoming Jewel was exquisitely done. I really felt the slipping away of the memories. The early pride and use as a distraction falling into uncertainty, confusion, and then laughing at something and seconds later not knowing why. Chillingly methodical, eradicating memories and twisting him into a pet. But he'll be much happier and taken care of, right? The chipper Jewel explaining how happy he is as a pet in Julian's own voice was evil. I felt how much that would undermine distraction and resistance. As jarring as it would be. In a very good way for the story. Finally, Rhys and Jasper are so wonderful and sweet together. I adore the growth in their relationship from involuntary pet to eager service pet and lover. They're really bonded. The way that Rhys truly listens to what Jasper says. Like the brand of beer, or that the river is important to him. It's so beautiful and makes my heart swell. Scorching hot sex scenes on balconies put the (not a) cherry on top as well. Even that, Rhys instructing Jasper to focus on the pleasure that Rhys is giving him rather than making it good for Rhys. How it overcomes Jasper. Eh hem. Yes. Very good. Love this world you've made, the series and the characters. I NEED to know what happens. So no pressure or anything but you're writing right now, right? ;)

Cuddle-switch
2/7/23, 3:16 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Cuddle-switch: I'm very glad the shock of the characters came through. I hadn't had to do that much in TTRPG or in writing, but I appear to pull it off okay each time. Time: “It's interesting to write a moment like this where there is no immediate action you can take to resolve the problem. For me, Iskios's flirting is sort of about that. Since there's not anything that he can do, he flirts to distract himself.” Cuddle-switch: I'm also glad that we can finally show Aris being a bit more overtly villainous. **grins evilly** I'm glad you like it! Putting words on the screen and actually *writing* villains is new to me as well. Time: “Up until now, we've seen an Aristotle appear completely convinced that he is doing the right thing, that he knows best, even for other people, whether that's his own pets, Rhys, Jasper, or anyone else. In this chapter, we get to see another layer to that: that he is serving his own interests, but doesn't seem able to fully acknowledge that.” Cuddle-switch: I learned a lot from Time during the whole bit with Julian becoming Jewel. I've never had to go that deep and specific before. I really need to give Time the credit here, as it is one of those points where they did the most heavy lifting. Time: “What's interesting about something like Julian becoming Jewel is that it would take so long for this to actually happen that it can feel very daunting to try and stay in the moment. So, my strategy here was to take snapshots of the moment instead. I'm glad that it resonated with you, because this kind of scene is hard to land.” Cuddle-switch: I really like doing the wholesome bits with Jasper and Rhys. It's so nice to see them progress together like this. It almost makes me regret whenever we plan to pull the rug out from under them. ...He says not foreshadowing anything. Time: “Evan, as you know, the writing room in my head is full of CW showrunners. I love their sweetness, and I want them to be happy, but I have cursed them to live in interesting times instead. If you like, I give you full rights to the Coffee Shop AU.” C-s: Ditto. Time: “Thank you for being so supportive of our weird half-smut, half-sci-fi intrigue thing. WE really appreciate you and the care that you give to all of you comments.”

2/8/23, 2:02 AM
@[Cuddle-switch](/user/show/10019969) It is my pleasure to rant and rave about the story. Thank you for writing the creative world and characters that you do. It's fun to see behind the curtain and I hope you both take credit for the great sequences. You are very right that having some things like Julian/Jewel land would be tricky but I would say you nailed it. Not overdone with enough to tease and let us know what's happened/happening. Aris definitely seems like he's not as self aware as he thinks he is and crossing the line into villain territory from others' perspectives. As for Rhys and Jasper, I have been convinced and dreading the moment when their feelings are questioned and their beautiful love for each other and bonding relationship is upturned. I hate it but it's good storytelling so I know it's going to have to happen. But I just want them to be so happy. Just try not to rip my heart out in a way that you can't put it back, okay? :)
2/7/23, 5:35 PM
Thanks for such a well written and descriptive story. Love the Elvis angle and the developing love between Eric and Dave.

2/7/23, 6:09 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thanks for your lovely comment and the support!
1/31/23, 11:54 PM
Ahhhhhhhh, we might be getting near a reveal!!!!!! Or at least the storylines are getting tied together! Oh god, with how close Jasper and Rhys are getting, if they see "Jewel" and how much Autolius can twist people, it's going to be devastating!😱

Cuddle-switch
2/7/23, 3:23 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Time: “Aahhh! We are right there with you. There so many different threads that are finally linking up. We're just as curious about what will happen when they do. Thanks for encouraging us with your comments.” Cuddle-switch: Yeah, I love it when things tie together and intertwine like this. It's challenging, but I really hope we can pull it off!