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2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!
2/26/23, 12:08 PM
Oh this was great. Hit all my notes. Picture was hot. Loved it! Hope we see more where his roommate falls under the power of his scent 🤤

2/26/23, 9:26 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Than you very much! I might cook up some ideas about a sequel... :smiling_imp:
Martin
2/11/23, 9:21 PM
Lovely little story. Are you going to write more about their new relationship?

2/26/23, 3:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Probably not. This was a one off gift for a friend.
2/25/23, 4:27 AM
Oh, _my_. This is incredibly erotic, humorous, and creative. Just hits all the notes for me. And I love that Sam is the author, quite literally, of his own path down the road of slutty gay sex. Who wants realism when fantasy can be this fun?
2/24/23, 10:10 PM
Late comment, but the humour in these stories just kills me (in a good way!) "He also enjoys being urinated on, particularly his face. But only Gemma is into that and she’s a bitch" was easily the funniest line in smut I've ever heard. The stories themselves are hot and hit mist of my spots, but the humour just adds to it
2/24/23, 9:29 PM
I want to say something super witty but I'll instead be sincere: I loved this story. You did an amazing job with this and deserve all the praise you've gotten for it and more. I actually teared up a bit at the end. Not something I ever thought I'd say in GSS ;-) Your characters were brought to vivid life, you have a wicked sense of humor, and when there were sex scenes, they were blazing hot for me. Just...thank you.
2/24/23, 6:00 PM
Nice chapter, and very keen to see where it goes from here. Would be interested to see what the hypnotist thinks of Herbert moving in on his turf with these two. Also like how readily they're willing to obey the instructions of Herb, even after he left. Keep it up!
2/24/23, 5:47 PM
I love the resident fairy godmother and her various name changes, so thanks very much for that comedy. This is just a really fun, lighthearted, sexy story with some Very Special Moments and it's been a delight to read. Thank you!
Alex Lat
2/24/23, 3:00 PM
I've always wanted to try out a chastity cage, and this story just made me want even more.
2/22/23, 2:15 PM
This is a delightful set up and I love Greg and Dallas. I hope this hypnotist doesn’t ruin them by turning them into mindless strippers or some other bleak stock ending.

2/24/23, 11:50 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I don't really like cruel endings. Hopefully once I have an idea of how to continue, it'll be to your satisfaction!